Custody - An Ishra FF updated part 6 page 27 - Page 18

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona

Poor adi...awesome update ankitaa..loved it..update soon and please pm meee

Originally posted by: VENBA

Very nice update..

The pain of a kid by separation of his parents was said so brilliantly...

Awesome update..👏👏

RESSS .. BIG WALA 😆😆😆

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Finally came to edit. Initially thought for every part I will comment separately but dropped it.. Blame my laziness and please gussa mat ho 🤣🤣.. I do not know if i have commented before or no so I am starting from the very beginning . Might look like a ramayan, bear with me 😆😆.

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1st part:

The emotional moment shared by each of the family member right from Romi to Sr. Bhalla. it was all perfect. The house had everything but all they wanted was that boy. I am no where going to compare this with Ghar ka chiraag. The boy might hate ishitha, Hate his father and act according to mother's tunes but at the end of the day, he is Raman's son and will def get back once bimbo's true colors are out.

Their cute nhok jjhok session in their room. The way she calmed him down and the line when she compares Adi with Puttar ! Awww.. Too cute. How much they love each other. both wanted to be the first in each other's lives. But jo hua acche ke liye hua. The solace they find in each other is just too good for words. Great beginning

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2nd part:

IshRalicious update. Though it was emotional we had ishra there. His surprise when she called him our son and he was in awe of his wife. May be that was the first time he is hearing her say that but she is one sweet lady which he already knows and a pandora box of surprises. When she lovingly ran his hand through his hair ! Awww 😳.. Such a cute moment.. His frustration to be with his son when he yelled at neil was all so realistic like the YHM wala .

The moment is court when Adi yells at raman and Ishitha consoling him. I just saw a glimpse of the accident track. The juvenile court scene but here the situation is different ! Lovely 😃

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3rd part:

Shagun and her dramas are never ending. Esp when the lawyer asked do you earn 🤣🤣 and her answer as always lame. but then the romance in the car. Public mein !! haiyee haiyee.. kya baat hai 😳😳.. Their hug to console them and then shock laga ☺️.. First hug and in rainy weather .. wah wah ! Lovely part again.

But the poor boy is been manipulated so much . it is going to take a lot for him to take a decision 😳 but the decision will be positive I suppose 😳

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4th Part:

Late night madam was all in romantic mode and wanted to enjoy the weather with hubby dearest or rather relieve him off his tensions when those dumb heads came to harass her. In a way good puttar gave them back strongly and he helped her with his coat , side hugged her took her back. I can forever imagine that scene . Then both slept together. Dil khush hogaya aaj ! Tightly embraced and that morning scene. kaash we get some thing like that in the show 😳. But all we can do is imagine such things. CVs have no idea of making our wishes come true. I am happy with this. Their red facces and what if i not leave you Mrs. Bhalla ☺️☺️.. Awww .. Ishra ❤️. Loved this update and the reason is obvious IshRa and of course your writing 😳

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5th Part:

The court scene was fab ! Ruhi, Adi and ishitha. All were in their elements. When Ruhi descirbied how happy she was with her Ishima and father. The love that she got after 6 years which changed her life so much and how important was her voice is something which has to be considered in the show when the custody comes up again.

Again with ishitha, Being the lady she is .. never demanded to get Adi for Raman but wanted Adi himself to take the decision which is what made her view special. Esp those 6 lines which you have mentioned regarding the love Adi will experince with bhaallas. I was so moved and read it I dunno how many time and got emotional while we were laughing so much and you know regarding what. This is what your update does to me every time 😭😭..

Adi, poor poor boy. How much has all of this affected him. He did not want any of them but preferred staying away from all. I really feel for this boy. Even in the show he has been manipulated so much and is most affected. Even more than Ruhi.. That's what makes his character special but CVs ruined with their drama by making him hatch plans. But your stiry gave me the satisfaction. Awesome Anki 😳

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6th Part:

Cheap Shagun and Ashok I have no words for them. All they want is luxury and if that comes by hurting a 12 year old soul they would really not mind. other side Ishra how much ever they have all they want is family's happines but not at the expense of hurting another soul. Two contrast relations explained so well. When Raman said I want Adi to experience your love and she automatically said our son will be ours soon. Wow !! I was like staring at the screen and read the scene twice. I could not get enough of it.

Glad you made Adi listen to their talks and he could judge the difference between his so called mother and another family who genuinely wants him. Forgot to mention the scene in court when they granted him to stay at weekends with the bhallas and he was actually excited to go there sub consciously and was happy when Ishitha agreed to pick him up. Beautifully penned.

I can't wait to read the next update !! Please update soon..

I know I am late here but please don't make me wait 😭..

Love you Anki ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: shavi2311

awesom updte...

loved it...

adi's turmoil was prfctly written...

shagun nd ashok convo heard by adi and his sorrow shared with pillow... i compred him with raman for the first time...as raman do the same...

hw ishu handled raman was too good...

ru there bundle of joy...always the saviour of their parents...

Originally posted by: arunabhi

RESSS .. BIG WALA 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written..👍🏼

Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

Beautiful story ankita ...read all parts its awesome I feel sorry for adi ... u very well wrote child's mental situation his trouma ...realization that he is just a puppet the way he took decision was nice ...

When he chose hostel was the most emotional part and the outburst outside court was nice ...the way he investigated the truth of his own mother was nice ..

The feeling of insecurity in child's heart being child of 4parent yet alone ...having all luxuries but lack of love is worst feeling for a child its better to be really alone it feels like its better to be orphan sad

Well coming back to ff its outstanding dear really adi's point of view is very well shown his behavior with ishita is bit shocking hehe but waiting him to go too bhalla house in weekend and get positive results

Heyy ankita plz do pm me next part continue soon ..

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Finally Adi knows the truth!!!
Continue soon.

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

its an old update only😆

kuch nya nhi update kiya maine

I am yet to comment for the old updates 😎😎

the story is very nice