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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: yazhi
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this is your second res kuzhali😆

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: swathin
Superb update
felt really bad for adi
serioisly how cn sme 1 b so cheap n think low
waiting for next

aww...thnks for likimg yrrr

thats wat I wanted it to be...instead of planning and plotting boy in the show

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ankita sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Sweety_98
Read all the parts in one Go ..!!
Awesome StoryLine ...I always wanted Adi to knw the True Colours of Shagun !
Wonderfully Written 👏...Waiting for your next Update ..
Update Soon😊

thmks a lot for liking dear

am glad u found it interesting even after the track in show is completely different.

will update asap dear😊

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meenakshi

@meenu_taarey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Nice update!! 😊

update soon n pm me take care

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usaonly

@usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Ankita I don't know how I miss this story. And now I read all in one go. Really this make me feel YHM old day from starting it look fresh story like it start early day not much drama and complication from all characters. Thanks for that love the way story come up and the way you make Ishu very understanding for Raman feeling was so good. For the love now I think slowly they are coming close to same direction not only for Ruhi alone any more Raman inner feeling start for Ishu already and now I think Ishu too love the way she is blushing and morning encounter of teasing like normal husband and wife. You should delay entrance from Ruhi little bit.😉 For Adi love that you make him see how cruel Ashok is to use him to get what he want and his selfish mom. Hope now he will wish to try to go and see the other side of Raman and Ruhi life then he can see and judge thing by himself.Oh ho sorry for long review Ijust write all the 6 part together. Forgive me just love this story. Will wait for next update. Have a wonderful weekend dear.🤗🤗

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ankita sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: usaonly
Ankita I don't know how I miss this story. And now I read all in one go. Really this make me feel YHM old day from starting it look fresh story like it start early day not much drama and complication from all characters. Thanks for that love the way story come up and the way you make Ishu very understanding for Raman feeling was so good. For the love now I think slowly they are coming close to same direction not only for Ruhi alone any more Raman inner feeling start for Ishu already and now I think Ishu too love the way she is blushing and morning encounter of teasing like normal husband and wife. You should delay entrance from Ruhi little bit.😉 For Adi love that you make him see how cruel Ashok is to use him to get what he want and his selfish mom. Hope now he will wish to try to go and see the other side of Raman and Ruhi life then he can see and judge thing by himself.Oh ho sorry for long review Ijust write all the 6 part together. Forgive me just love this story. Will wait for next update. Have a wonderful weekend dear.🤗🤗

hey jum...finally you read itt...am so glad🤗

dont be sorry yrr pls...infact thnks for taking out time to read six parts...am glad it didnt bore you and you were able to complete it in a day only😊😆

awesum review...you always give one

and it actually inspires to write more

u wrote about all the elements which i touched...thnks a lot for reminding them dear

yeahh..its an old story.when characters were not so complicated..you might hav noticed date too

erlaier i had decided to leave it midway but then few frnds wanted me to complete it...so started again

am so glad u liked the coNcept

will try to cont soon

i hav still not decided which to update or wat to write next

maybe.will start something by tomorrow

wonderful weekend to you to dear...take care🤗

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AVC92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Poor Adi. Hope he feels comfortable with the Bhallas

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Shravs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

awesome update...
adi 's turmoil is actually every kid's plight... wen his/her parents are divorced...

anku... suprb yaaraa...
i hope he finds solace wid his dad or frm d wife of his dad... who is by herself a selfless soul...

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#169

WOW! What a powerful update... thanks so much for the PM!

You actually made me feel for Adhi, and these days that's quite rare.😉

Love the way you scripted this, both ISHRARU moments and Ashok/ Shagun ones were well done ... and Adhi's loneliness, confusion and pain was well described.

I really like it.

Please continue soon.