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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: redwine1



Zene
Thnx


I guess v r taking 22 mins of content a bit to seriously
Err is mistake an abreviation of error it does not mean taunt at all ...

According to me ishita still thinks raman has very strong feelings for his ex ... But that's my opinion only & I am not writer of the show so it hardly matters

Its not my place to agree or disagree on posts I just share my pov ... By sharing our views v get a more diverse & holistic connect with the show ... Personally for me I love seeing how a writers message was interpreted ...

If I talk about the last line on proving himself it will spark another discussion & controversy ... So let this rest here

Kudos to u



its ok ruby , we share view or we get agree with disagree, both ways we get how we interpret character shaping and story line

This was the way I watched, I felt and some of credit goes to aani s write up about raman s pov for ishita too 😛

you talked about writers of show , so I told about forum writers connection to writers of show 😆
Edited by Colt.Pixy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: EkPaheli


@bold - you mean to say you wanted to go beyond PG... I DEFINITELY WANT THAT SEQUEL FROM YOU NOW Please Bhanu please...you can bug Uz and I am sure she wont mind... she is the numero uno in subtlety with these things 😉



Arre .. am all for silent conversations ... and the sequel will mean next step in realization ... which meant Raman had to think in THAT direction ... I even wrote a monologue for him ... but then ... I was not happy from what I wrote ... so gave up

Beyond PG Rated ... 😆😆 .. Aani when it comes to writing ... I follow only seeing no touching policy ... I get lost if I have to put a convo between them ... leave alone a touch or kiss .. uske aage kya hota hai mujhe nai maloom 🤣 ... mere liye yahi X rated ho jaata hai ... I am excellent reader 😈 but a horrible writer in that genre ... if u know what I mean ...

I had a hard time writing that one line in the Yearning OS where Raman makes love to his wife for the first time ... I edited it at least 20 times .. 😳

Vaise bhi aajkal am going through a dry phase .. no new ideas ... nothing ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: redwine1


First pls make an index ... i wanna read all ur work ..
Second i second a demand for a HOT HOT sequel ...

( gosh this was only 2 lines we are improving gals ) 😉



Ruby 🤗 .. Good Morning

Hahaha ... 2 lines ... great progress ... am impressed 😆😆
Index is for big shots like you and Aani ... I have written only 3 err may be 4 pieces thats it ... nothing else.

About the sequel ... read my reply to Aani above .. 😳

If you want, here are the links for my works, starting from the latest:

Yearning for a beautiful PAST - OS on Raman
Contented - Ishra OS
Halchal Hui, Zara Shor Hua - An Ishra OS
An Ishra SS: Sirf Tumhare Liye - Final Part page 13

Thats it ... is nacheez ne bas itna hi kaam kia hai ...

Will love to know your thoughts

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Posted: 11 years ago

First pls make an index ... i wanna read all ur work ..
Second i second a demand for a HOT HOT sequel ...

( gosh this was only 2 lines we are improving gals ) 😉


Ruby 🤗 .. Good Morning

Hahaha ... 2 lines ... great progress ... am impressed 😆😆
Index is for big shots like you and Aani ... I have written only 3 err may be 4 pieces thats it ... nothing else.

About the sequel ... read my reply to Aani above .. 😳

If you want, here are the links for my works, starting from the latest:

Yearning for a beautiful PAST - OS on Raman
Contented - Ishra OS
Halchal Hui, Zara Shor Hua - An Ishra OS
An Ishra SS: Sirf Tumhare Liye - Final Part page 13

Thats it ... is nacheez ne bas itna hi kaam kia hai ...

Will love to know your thoughts


Good Morning Bhanu ...

Subah subah meri le li tumne ..

greats LOL .. my index is for me only .. make me feel that i am working so hard 😛😆
Aani yea she needs an index .. her body of work is impressive ..
4 short stories .. & numerous posts .. aur bol rahi hai (nacheez ne thoda kaam kiya hai) .. UGH 😲😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: redwine1



Good Morning Bhanu ...

Subah subah meri le li tumne ..

greats LOL .. my index is for me only .. make me feel that i am working so hard 😛😆
Aani yea she needs an index .. her body of work is impressive ..
4 short stories .. & numerous posts .. aur bol rahi hai (nacheez ne thoda kaam kiya hai) .. UGH 😲😕


Ruby I already have an index for my OS' and other works am posting it but not analysis posts since I rarely make em 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: btalwar

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Ruby 🤗 .. Good Morning

Hahaha ... 2 lines ... great progress ... am impressed 😆😆
Index is for big shots like you and Aani ... I have written only 3 err may be 4 pieces thats it ... nothing else.

About the sequel ... read my reply to Aani above .. 😳

If you want, here are the links for my works, starting from the latest:

Yearning for a beautiful PAST - OS on Raman
Contented - Ishra OS
Halchal Hui, Zara Shor Hua - An Ishra OS
An Ishra SS: Sirf Tumhare Liye - Final Part page 13

Thats it ... is nacheez ne bas itna hi kaam kia hai ...

Will love to know your thoughts


Bhanu no issues I know these things don't come easily and write with whatever you are comfy with and whatever comes to you I thought you are too nervous to post a story cos of the beyond PG level thing 😳 and have your works listed in the ff index that Tanni has created here is the link to it and make a separate one as well like I have 😳 **Lists of YHM Fan Fictions,One Shots & Short Stories!**~2nd Part~



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Posted: 11 years ago
Aani ,

I watched yesterday ep and i got connection with your onion layer and BTS, strum and drang
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Colt.Pixy

Aani ,

I watched yesterday ep and i got connection with your onion layer and BTS, strum and drang


How I mean could you elaborate Zene? 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: EkPaheli


Bhanu no issues I know these things don't come easily and write with whatever you are comfy with and whatever comes to you I thought you are too nervous to post a story cos of the beyond PG level thing 😳 and have your works listed in the ff index that Tanni has created here is the link to it and make a separate one as well like I have 😳 **Lists of YHM Fan Fictions,One Shots & Short Stories!**~2nd Part~



Have already done that Aani ... it is present in the second thread ... since I have only 4 stories .. I felt no reason to make an index ... analysis post ... well till now I never notice how many posts I have made ... 😳 .. may be I gotta do that .. Ruby is right .. to boost myself that I am doing hardwork 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: btalwar



Have already done that Aani ... it is present in the second thread ... since I have only 4 stories .. I felt no reason to make an index ... analysis post ... well till now I never notice how many posts I have made ... 😳 .. may be I gotta do that .. Ruby is right .. to boost myself that I am doing hardwork 😆😆


Oops my bad 😆 but dont sell yourself short Bhanu with time you may need an index trust me right now it would be easy to do when they are just 4 I had to sit for 2 whole hours just to update mine cos well I made it when I had written like 4 SS' , a drabble and some 15-20 OS'... I hope this doesnt make me sound like a pompous ass 😆

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