My problems & solutions for current tracks

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok this might sound as another ranting post but m just trying to understand cvs ways of showing story progression in terms of Ishita n her characterization.

Firstly I want to let u know that m one of those who r not liking Shagun n Param track. Khichdi track as Nikki rightly put it.

I very well know cvs have introduced these tracks for drama factor orfor purposes best known to themselves. I m just analyzing the tracks from cvs objectives n offering certain tweaks here n there which wud still have kept YHMs essence intact.

Please bear with me as am typing from my mobile phone n m not spell checking it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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1.) Ishita meeting Param in dead of night n getting him back to Bhalla house without consulting anyone
Ok m just sharing a personal story here to prove a point. What Ishita has gone through I have experienced same at the hands of my uncle when I was 14-15. By that age girls know how men touch u or grope u. I now m at an age n physically strong enuff that if I want I can break this particular mans bones if he ever try to touch me. Still we have been bearing him coz he is my aunts husband n she had no other way out. But still I try to stay as far as possible from this person coz I feel disgusted near him not out f fear.
Ishita in this case was shown as oversmart or JKR who can tackle the person who almost raped her. she willingly goes near him n challenges him in verbal duels to prove her point. What r cvs showing out f it? That a man who almost tried to rape a woman can get away with it n the woman is not one bit disgusted when he looks her with lust or enjoys her so called preachiness? 🥱 i just cringe at theur scenes.
Ok I completely understand her n cvs objective for getting Param Back home. Cvs cud've shown her teaming up Mr bhalla n getting Param back home. Her doing it alone proves no point nor is it helping in anyways. By getting Mr Bhalla involved we wud have got beautiful scenes between FIL & DIL unique in our tv industry n they cud hv shown how she treats her father in law as a friend too. Besides if Mr Bhalla wud hv asked Param to come back home it wud hv served dual purpose that Params fake male ego wudve been satisfied that Simmis father is begging him to return after his court paper hoax n secondly it wudve sent him a message that Ishita is not alone but the head f her family n everyone supports her. Cvs wanted Param back in bhalla home but this route wud have helped their purpose n not degraded Ishitas character.
It wud also prove a point to Simmi that her father n family loves her. N later on cvs cud still have shown Param pestering for Rakhi n Ishra nariyal scenes etc.

2.) Phones and phone calls
Ishita again forgetting her phone, repeating same mistakes again n again. Ishita recieving phone from some unknown girl on Landline for Parmeet. It was a big big clue 🥱. How did even RKB missed it? Ok in that scene only RKB n toshiji, nilu n Ishita were there. What were d odds that Ishita wud pick d phone up what if Raman or Toshiji wudve picked up? Y wud Ishita plant a girl to make a fake call to prove that Parmeet is upto something? Simmi was not thr anyways so Ishita cud just tell Toshiji n Raman n they wud still agree to it if she really wanted to frame Param.it was a huge giveaway whuch both Raman n Ishita foolishly ignored n fell into Params trap. N What was the whole point of that farmhouse track? That Ishita is trying to un-necessarily frame Param n trying to unite lovebirds Romi n Sarika under this guise? Y will she lay such a foolish trap 😆 in which she herself will get caught 😳 Cvs do u really think we are fools to watch your show??haha

3). Romi Sarika track
When Toshiji asked Ishita to fire Sarika I saw a spark of old Ishita JKR who said U r the boss at home but I am the boss at my clinic. I was like please practice what u preach 😆.again what she was trying to do was good by saving Sarikas job but her this particular sentence especially in the context of getting Param home on her own did not work. She should have firmly said By firing Sarika things wont work out as Romi n Sarika wud still meet as they have exchanged numbers, we need to talk Romi out of this n I will talk to Sarika to stay away from this. 😆 its so simple but cvs like to complicate stuff n butcher Ishitas character. 😉

4.)bring Shagun home drama
Again this has been overanalyzed so m not going there m assuming she had no other option but to put her in Ishra bed. But cvs shudve at least shown her sleeping outside in living room wuth her husband who was on couch. This wud have given a continuity to Ishra journey. Ya she helped Shagun but she chose to atleast physically b with her husband in his pain. This wud have added a different dimension to overall scenario and it wud hv been in tandem with their current equation.
Edited by mnr123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok y m I ranting for Ishita coz so far she was a completely white character, whatever she did was righteously justified. I think of Ishita as a strong, independant and a humanitarian person who feels for other peoples pain. Whereas Raman was established as flawed n insensitive from the beggining so it is not much of a surprise but the way YHM cvs have portrayed these tracks it looks like they r hell bent on changing course of Ishitas core characterization which is ok but it cant be shown overnight, please have a build up towards it too.
Let her be shown as regretting her actions, some remorse for hurting people around her or atleast show her giving logical explainations as to y is she behaving like that??
The way cvs r showing her, she comes across as strong willed but dumb person. She wants to do good but she is thinking only about end result not of approach of achieving that end result.

My only grudge with cvs is even if they want to introduce some track y r they making Ishita/ Ramans character a scapegoat? It is lame writing n execution, sometimes I feel even actors sleepwalking thru scenes although these r brilliant bunch f people n this will hamper ur TRPS. N YHM has shown logical tracks before n yet earned great TRPs.
Edited by mnr123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I read these spoilers n again m turned off with Mihir hiding his past track , it feels like the makers are creating forced drama. If Mihir cant come in terms in regards to his future with his wife Y shud Ishita go on Jasoosi mode again? Shudnt Mihika worry about that. 😆 Anyways its a spoiler n hence m not writing more but really dont understand y create these kind of tracks in first place 😉

If u have read till this part u guys have had enough. 😆 sorry about d length, wud like to hear about ur suggestions or alternative theories for tracks mentioned above. 😊
Edited by mnr123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited wud love to hear ur comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mnr123

Edited wud love to hear ur comments.


Where do I start?😛😆

Just when we think Ishita feel some remorse for her recent actions, it appears she is going to stick her nose once again where it doesn't belong. Seriously, who anointed her friend and savior of every family member? When do people get to make their own decisions about their personal lives if she continues to be meddling Matangi in their lives. Has she traded her dental practice for Jhansi jaga jasoosi these days?😛😕

For unsuspecting young viewers, Ishita seeking Param out to talk to him in the dead of the night and telling him she'd break his bones if he tried to touch her was simply a dangerous and misleading message. He could break her given he was physically capable of overpowering her. Her penchant for late night outings to bring back Bhalla outcasts makes one wonder what's churning in that muscle between her ears? Like mother, like daughter, they just have to mess around in people's lives. She wasn't this way before.

Would Ishita have been so magnanimous and accepting if Raman had brought Shagun home and taken her straight to his bed? What she did was like picking the scab off a wound ...insensitive of Raman's painful past that he had worked hard to put behind him. She's running amuck with her impulsive attempts to fix everyone's problems and hurting their feelings for no reason. She acts too smart, as if senior Bhallas are incapable of making decisions for their daughter's well being.

Unless the writers salvage her character and get back on to some logical tracks, this show could be heading for final curtains.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey mnr...

I refrain from commenting these days, because I have not watched 4 of the last 6 episodes , but i think i have read enough to make a couple of observations

I think everything is being rushed for some reason. All the scenarios you mentioned could have been handled 'slowly' and they could have even created the dramatic effect needed (or even more).

I am only afraid that they will soon 'forget' this track, and the character-analysis of Ishita that we are all doing would have been for nothing. I, for one, need proper closure. Even if it means, its a heart-felt conversation between Raman and Ishita, even if it means Ishita has to apologise.
Because she is coming off as an insensitive person (to say the least) which she is absolutely not. God knows, we;ve all watched this show long enough to know that Ishita is sensitive AND smart.

and, I just hope they aren't going to suddenly resuscitate the IshRa romance at the end of this track, as if its a light-bulb that can be switched on with a click.

Some things need to simmer, even healing cannot be done in a day
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely Post
agree with all ur points...the cvs do think of viewers to be foolish at times i guess
all they want is drama without proper reasoning or logic at times..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh and yea... sorry, forgot to mention... you got a lot of patience girl... typed so much on a phone??? 😲 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MERARAI



Where do I start?😛😆

Just when we think Ishita feel some remorse for her recent actions, it appears she is going to stick her nose once again where it doesn't belong. Seriously, who anointed her friend and savior of every family member? When do people get to make their own decisions about their personal lives if she continues to be meddling Matangi in their lives. Has she traded her dental practice for Jhansi jaga jasoosi these days?😛😕

For unsuspecting young viewers, Ishita seeking Param out to talk to him in the dead of the night and telling him she'd break his bones if he tried to touch her was simply a dangerous and misleading message. He could break her given he was physically capable of overpowering her. Her penchant for late night outings to bring back Bhalla outcasts makes one wonder what's churning in that muscle between her ears? Like mother, like daughter, they just have to mess around in people's lives. She wasn't this way before.

Would Ishita have been so magnanimous and accepting if Raman had brought Shagun home and taken her straight to his bed? What she did was like picking the scab off a wound ...insensitive of Raman's painful past that he had worked hard to put behind him. She's running amuck with her impulsive attempts to fix everyone's problems and hurting their feelings for no reason. She acts too smart, as if senior Bhallas are incapable of making decisions for their daughter's well being.

Unless the writers salvage her character and get back on to some logical tracks, this show could be heading for final curtains.



Agree wid u completely n m ready to buy it if properly shown that y isshe insensitive towards other people. Thanks for liking n commenting.
Edited by mnr123 - 11 years ago

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