This is the first ever story composed by you that I've read (Reasons: i. I'm new on this forum. ii. I open the forum only when I've to post my own writings. 😛) and I must say that is one brilliant piece of writing. 👏 You're such a blessed writer! 😳
The way you've made Shagun realize her loss and repent on her deeds was simply commendable! 👍🏼