Waking up to Regrets - OS - Page 14

Originally posted by: florine_20

Amazing

Originally posted by: Vaibhi.

Nice 😊

Originally posted by: appuss

Superb!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

wish to watch this in the show too... but CVs suffering from mental diarrhoea

Glad writers like you keep the original characters alive😊

Originally posted by: Bul3

amazing amazing OS👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Shree1005

Awesomely written... Hope cvs wud read this n get sme ideas...

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Super good write up...fantastic

Originally posted by: tina_sharma

Amazing OS... Loved it... 😊

Originally posted by: sophee72

This was beautiful Aani (taking the liberty as that's how you've been addressed 😊)

If only Shagun was capable of such introspection 😕 And CVs wanted to show her regrets. Yahan tu Ishita ki bajane ke liye sari mehnat ho rahi hai. Dont know where the track is headed but hate what they've done to Ishita's character in the process. Raman's majboori in Adi track and now Ishita's mahanta 😕

Originally posted by: Arooj.M

Aani, I read this OS the day you posted it, but am only now getting time to comment on it! This is so beautifully written that I don't how to put in words what I felt while reading it, but I'll try, so here goes nothing...

Hey Arooj no issues and thanks for the comment 😊

The scene where Shagun sees the many pictures of a happy family on Ruhi's wall was so gorgeous. I could see Shagun feeling an unknown pain in her heart at the photo of our awesome trio. Ishita has very quickly made her place in that home and in the hearts of its residents. There is no place for Shagun and she knows that, which is why she herself was leaving the place. And to be honest I kind of felt sorry for the Shagun that you've shown in your OS, she left the sweetest husband for a dream that she now knows might never come true. She's finally seeing the hell her decisions have put her in. Now she's alone, while the people she had left alone have found their own joys in life, joys that she could never give them. Must be really painful for her being in that house and seeing what she gave up.

It has to be painful but for that there has to be regret and realization which the woman hasn't yet had on the show but will one day and that would be the day she would really understand what she did

But oh well, it was her own desires that brought her to this stage, desires that she went about fulfilling in the worst ways and now karma's come to bite her in the behind. 😎

exactly!

And haha, it's like adding salt to a wound when she heard that Ishita and Raman's bed had broken, our gutter minds are well aware of what she thought to be the reason behind the bed breaking. If only Shagun had had another dream in the serial, then we really would have gotten to see what our gutter minds are craving for!

😆 thank you for catching onto that and commenting on it 😃that was exactly the point of showing her the bed that she realizes things as she had thought she is irreplaceable in his home, heart and bed which isnt true and I would want reality over dreams and if there have to be dreams I would want them to come to someone else 😉

When Raman yelled for Ishu I literally grinned at my phone, his booming voice demanding Ishita's presence, and asking her for something as trivial as his clothes, a small task that he himself is capable of doing, but he wants his wife to do it... this just shows how much Raman has become dependent on Ishita. He can't do anything without her, she has now become a very integral part of his life in just a short amount of time. ❤️

he asked for his clothes on the show too it is a trivial thing like you said but it just goes on to show that Ishita is now integral to him in even things he could do by himself - she is no longer only the woman he married for his kid but his wife and he cant do without her nor does he want too. These small things hold a different level to a marriage, they display a kind of intimacy and dependency which is even more beautiful than the sexual one cos its the emotional one 😳

And the button sewing scene - Raman secretly looking at Ishita with love-filled eyes. AANI! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME?! Now I'm really craving a romantic IshRa scene in the show and I'm making up for it by continuously reading this OS.

😆 sorry I am a sadist and am missing these things so thought of writing em and making you'll suffer too 😆

The last scene where she sees the name plate was the best finishing touch I've ever read in any IshRa OS. For me, this has by far been the best piece of writing you have written on IshRa. I loved every second of it.

Honestly I wish the cvs had done it but I simply couldn't end this without that else it would have been of no use to have had that plate before Shagun came here

I'm not just merely saying this for the sake of it Aani, I really mean it when I say that you are very talented. You NEED to do something with this talent of yours, don't just confine it within the pages of india-forums!

Aww thanks Arooj right now I am not sure if I could write something apart from FFs but if someday something comes to me I would surely take that on... only time knows what it holds for us in the future so lets see 😳

OK, I think I've summed up how this OS made me feel, now I'm gonna go and find myself some yummy ice cream while I cry over the fact that there is no more works of yours that I haven't read.

Can I have some of that ice-cream too? 😛😆

Aww Puss in Boots from Shrek I love him thanks Arooj this is the cutest thing anyone has posted for me 🤗

Originally posted by: Arooj.M

Btw Aani, I forgot to ask - Have you written on other shows before? If yes, please give me the links to those, I would love to read them! Also, I can't seem to find the index of your IshRa works, could you give me the link to that as well please? 😳