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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Superb OS...

Totally loved the caring side of Raman, he was following her and helping her without a single complaint.. For a moment I was like, that's not RKB.. RKB without taunts and agreeing to everything seems so unreal unless he was the one responsible for his driver-giri 😆

It was so cute of him to ask Romi to break down Ishu's car so he gets to have her infront of his eyes most of the time and protect her.! I loved Ishu's emotions specially, the way she was admiring him once learning the truth 😳

Awesome OS.! Thanks for such a cute story.. 😊

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Lovely os...

Thanks for the pm...

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Aww.. this was so sweet. Wish it would happen on the show as well 😊

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

This was superb dear...Protective side of Raman was a treat to read and how Ishu says that she liked it at the end was even more cuter.

phir bhi nhok jhok in their own style...loved it! 👏

Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago

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Tanyaarora11

@Tanyaarora11

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Res

That was so beautiful! And yes the warning you gave in the beginning was apt. It was extremely sweet, but quite RKB like. I really want him to do something like this on the show.
One main thing which I really liked was the simplicity of the OS! It had no sugar quoted dialogues or anything, yet by far it was one of the sweetest thing I've read on ISHRA.
I loved their usual banter in the shopping mall, where he kept putting things in the trolley and she kept removing them, that is so real! That's exactly how couples react.
Such an adorable OS, lucky.
Very well done :)

Edited by Tanyaarora11 - 11 years ago

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Res...

thank u sooo much Lucky 🤗

i'll be back in sm time

edited :-

awww Lucky this is sooo sweet...

after sooo long IshRa story from u...

it was complete pleasure to read such a sweet story...

i loved it how Raman was concerned for her...and he was always there...

and how they liked being arnd each other...

i was so sure Raman has to do wid Ishita's car and the moment i read Romi talking to gaurd...i was like there u go 😆...

i loved that part...

superb OS Lucky...

thank u sooo much for writing it Lucky 🤗

Edited by FieryLioness - 11 years ago

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Amazingg update! I loved it completely! A different kinda story! U portrayed raman's fears perfectly! Great job dear!

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Ash

@-RisingAsh-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

edited :)

AAAh Lucky wht a beautiful OS gal !! was a pleasure to read it... i loved the dialogues u used for both Raman n Ishita... very well written !
Is baar itna distraction nai tha na... phir bhi kamaal kar ditta tussi 😛😆

Edited by RisingAsh - 11 years ago