OS: Yeh Tumhari Meri Baatein - Page 3

Day before yesterday while surfing the forum, I was wondering that you seem to be MIA ... guess the yearning of your fans reached your heart and tada ... you are back with an OS.

And needless to say, your writing is amazing ... this was sweet ... definitely something different from what you usually write and yet very subtle and amazing ... I was smiling throughout reading this and though I had figured out that Raman was behind this car malfunction and the reason he did it pretty early in the story ... yet the how and when kept me hooked till the end ...

A breath of fresh air 😃 ...

P.S.: Am based in Bangalore and the weather right now beats any hill station's ... so reading your OS while sipping a hot cup of adrak vaali chai on a holiday ... can the day get any better ... 😃😃

That was so well written Lucky 👏 Thanks for a beautiful OS! I can actually see the two dhakaans acting this one out 😆

updated my comment on page 4 :)

Originally posted by: -Garima-

Oh how eagerly I was waiting for you to write an IshRa OS Lucky! I swear, just today I was thinking that hmm Lucky hasn't written an IshRa OS in the longest time and ta-daa you wrote one today.. I'm so glad you did Lucky! 😃😳

As always, it was wonderful and a great read! I love the dialogues you use for both Raman and Ishita.. they are so real! :) And I loved the concept of this OS. CV's should definitely show something like this in the show. Protective Raman is a treat! 😳

Very well written Lucky, please keep on writing more and more.. I will never get tired of reading stuff written by you! 😳🤗

--Garima

Hey Garima... Its been sooo long na 😳

Thanks for your comments...

@bold, thats about the only positive thing I could think of when I saw Param move back in... so grabbed that thought and wrote this side of Raman. glad you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: PreciousPri

Lucky 🤗 It really seems like ages since I have read any OS by you

But coming to this one... Beautiful ...absolutely beautiful 👏👏...their emotions...their underlying feelings ... hayeee such dhakkans

Loved RKB's dialogues ... well penned 👏

Hey Pri 😊

@bold - Right Back at you 😆 Go write something please

Thank you very much for your comments hun 🤗

Originally posted by: --Sia--

very beautifully written Lucky !!! 👏

Thanks Sia 😊

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Great OS Laxmi Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on Ishra!

Thank You 😊

Originally posted by: shalz_123

I had to wake up early as my hubby had to catch a early morn flight...n I was abt to catch a wink before I started my day, when I saw your pm ...n voila all my sleepiness flew away...i had to read the o it s ight away...n boy , was I for treat or not...just loved it..ishra is already makinf me obsessed n your writing doesnt help. Matter st all... You r makking me addicted woman...again you beautifully captured the ongoing stattus of raman's haal-e-dil...he is right in such state, where hhis overflowing concern for his wifey is trying to be sidetracked by his o so not very sharp taunts...n ishita's confusion as to how to interpret it...beautiful beautiful Lucky...
Ps: m typing from my tab..so plz excuse the typos
Pps: that I couldnt control to open my lappy to type response shows how much happy n restless u made me...

Thank You Shalz 😊

@red - exactly... he cannot directly tell her he is concerned for her, so his taunts have to continue

@bold... thats such a sweet thing to say 😳

Originally posted by: columbia

Very nice really loved reading it just one small request I feel that the specialness Hindi dialogues bring out somehow is lost in the English language - Pls don't take offense but I love your style and your writing maybe next time you write the convers in Hindi 👏

Hey... no offense taken at all :) thank you for the feedback...

FYI, this is the first OS i wrote with absolutely no Hindi in it. My earlier works have their one-liners in Hindi. I was experimenting to see how Raman sounded in English 😊