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Posted: 11 years ago
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uh huh sure it's ALL ishita's fault 😆
please continue - this sounds really good
if possible, please pm me when you update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please continue.It was obvious he wud blame ishu.Wana read wat he going to do n how ishu will handle it.plz pm me if possible.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds great ! i think raman is going on a mission to make ishita as restless as he is. Can't wait to read more !
(please, do send a pm if possible, otherwise i forget what OS i want to read and what not)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Raman, blaming Ishu! 😲😆
Now I NEED to see wo JKR ko disturb kaise karta hai. 😈
And is she really sleeping calmly? 😲
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
nice👍🏼
i like it😊
please continue😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Helloo!!
First of all, thank you to everyone who encouraged me to continue this OS. And secondly, sorry for the delay. I got hung up with some family stuff. Anyways so here it goes. Hope it is worth the wait.

The next morning Raman is all set to get even with Ishita. He decides to begin his plan right before Ishita wakes up. Raman set his alarm for 5:25 am so he wakes up 5 mins earlier than her. Right at 5:28 he goes around to her side of the bed and places a butterfly kiss on her forehead then proceeds to peck her lips. He had no idea that they would feel as soft as they looked but he had no time to ponder as Ishita stirred in her sleep. Ishita wakes up momentarily stunned, she wasn't scared because she could recognize her husband's touch even while sleeping. What shocks her is that she knows that Raman won't kiss her. She touches her lips and a light blush adjourns her face. She looks to Raman's side of the bed and finds it empty. She is puzzled as to where Raman is and decides to check the bathroom. While she exits the room, Raman slowly comes out from under the bed where he was hiding and goes to his side and feigns sleep. Not finding Raman anywhere in the house she decides to call him when her eyes fall on Raman sleeping on the bed.

Ishita: Raman toh so raha hai. Kaise? Maine pehle dekha tha tho nahin tha. Lekin aise kaise ho sakta hai, usne mujhe kiss kiya phir gayab hogaya? Ishu, tumne shayad sapna dekha, gehri neend mein thi isliye Raman ko nahin dekha bed par. Haan yehi sahi hoga.

Meanwhile Raman is awake listening to her monologue.

Raman (ST): Toh madam ko lagta hai sapna dekh rahi thi. Mere sapne dekhti hai Madrassan, ab toh aur maza ayega. Puri din baki hai. Get ready to see me everywhere, Mrs. Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla.

After her usual morning routine, Ishita leaves for her clinic, the kiss still lingering in her mind.

Ishita (ST): It felt so real. Bas Ishita, sochna band kar aur kam par dhyan do.

While going to her cabin she notices a man who looks exactly like Raman in the waiting room, but she shakes her head and moves on.

Ishita (ST): Raman yahan kyun ayega? Tu kuch zyada hi soch rahi rahi.

Ishita decides to grab some lunch from a nearby caf and instructs Sarika that she will be back by 1pm and to have the patient prepped in the checkup room. At 1pm Ishita returns to the checkup room. There she sees Raman on the chair smiling at her then raising his eyebrows naughtily. Ishita squeezes her eyes shut and shakes her.

Raman (ST): Kitni cute lag rahi hai bilkul Ruhi ki tarah.

During this Sarika comes into the room and calls out to Ishita. Ishita responds to her and her back is towards the door now giving Raman a perfect opportunity to escape. He mouths thank you to Sarika while leaving who just smiles at him.

Sarika: Maam woh patient was a bit late, main andar bhej doon?

Ishita: Patient? (ST) Lekin Raman toh already hai yahan par.

Ishita turns around to point out Raman to Sarika but there is no one there.

Ishita: Raman :O

Sarika: Raman sir kahan?

Ishita: Nahin kuch nahin tum jao, patient ko andar bhej do.

Sarika: Theek hai maam.

Now Ishita is really perplexed.

Ishiita: Main ek din main do bar dokha nahin khaa sakti, maine Raman ko yaha par dekha tha. Main din mein sapne bhi nahin dekhti. Yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath, kuch samaj mein nahin aa raha hai.

The rest of Ishita's day passes in a hurry and it's already time for her to go home.

While she is driving back home, she sees Raman's car broken down and Raman leaning against the hood checking something. She stops her car and gets down to see what's wrong. While she is taking off her seatbelt and distracted, Raman hides and a guy dressed exactly as Raman replaces him. Ishita walks up to the man and taps him on the shoulder.

Ishita: Kya hua Raman?

Duplicate Raman: Jee maam, aap ko koi galat faimi huyi hai, mera naam Karan hai, Raman hai.

Ishita's face heats up due to embarrassment.

Ishita: Sorry, mujhe laga aap koi aur ho.

DR: Koi baat nahin maam.

Ishita runs to car as fast as she could.

Ishita(ST): Uggh Raman theek kehta hai, main paagal ho chuki hoon. Haar jagah Raman dikh raha hai. Yeh aadmi toh chota tha aur main isse Raman soch baithi jo khud do bache ke baap hai. Pehle toh mere khalayon mein aa kar mujhe tang karta tha aab toh dikhne bhi laga hai. Aiyyo murugan, kya karoon main. Mujhe na ghar jaa kar rest karna chahiye.

Well guys, this is it for now, I might continue it for one more part depending on the response.

Any feedback is welcome!!

-Shaayne

Edited by shaayne - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
🤣 lyk d way raman plays wid her..
waitgn 4 nxt.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
This is so good...😊😊
Awesome...👏
Plz continue soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Pls continue this was so short
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
naughty bhalla 😆
awesome update
hope you update soon
thanks for the pm 😳

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