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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
The strangers r interesting. ... curiosity has risen as who is this Ram and how Raman knows him
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream

The strangers r interesting. ... curiosity has risen as who is this Ram and how Raman knows him

it wont be mentioned completely.Raman never met Ram have just seen him in one scene.He dont knew anything about him.
Ram is here just to show difference and perfection in life.dont worry you will not get it slowly.
knowing about Ram in story created for himself will tahe about more than 250 parts.wit each part I imagined.
Sorry I cant let him mess in this Ishra story completely.He will be out in few parts/
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
part 16

Scene starts with Raman going in search of Ram along with Hercules.Ishita,Ruhi and Tanmayi are sitting near bonfire.Tanmayi was holding the gun Ram gave her.

Ishita "Tumhaarey engagement hain iss Sunday tho tumhey tension nahee ho rahen hain kee koi problem hogee."

Tanu "Hogee tho kyaa hoga.Engagement cancel hoojaayega.Bass right honey do.Main apney pariwaar key liyen kar rahen hun yeh shaadi."

Ruhi sleeping in Ishita's lap smiles listening similar words.

Ishita "Main bhee tehen kehthey thee yeh shaadi isrf Ruhi key liyen hain.Fir kabh badal gyan patha hee nahen chala."

Tanu "I din't understand."

Ishita "Ruhi ko mainey janam naheen diyan hain but infact mera kabhee bachey nahen ho sakthey hain.Fir merey zindagee mey Ruhi ayen padosi hain.We got so much into each other.Uss samay I don't know Raman who pariwaar sey door Mumbai mey thaa I never heard any thing positive about him then."

Ishita "Raman kee pehley wife ney Raman sey Ruhi door karney kee koshish kee.Ruhi ney merey saath rehney decide kiyan.Fir merey papa ney decide kiyan kee main Raman sey shaadi karoongi tho Raman ko custody and mujhey ek beti milegee.Sirf Ruhi key liyen samjhoutha suru huan thaa."

Ishita smiling "But now Raman is my life main kabhee nahen socha tha kee my life would be completed.Ruhi,Raman and my family.Rishtey chaahey naam key liyen baney hon but usska mainey insaan nahen tain kartha.Bhagawaan ney banaaya hotha hain."

Tanu "Har baar yehi honey kee jaroori nahe hain.But when marriage is made of unequities it can't stand long."

Tanu "I never could adjust in institute of marriage.I never want some one else to judge what I have to do and what I can't.But yaheen hotha hain jab insaan rishton mey dil key jagaha dimak ka istamaal kartha hain."

Tanu then tells her that almost twenty alliances were broken for various reasons like less dowry,her physical inability to walk properly and her leading nature to be first on action.

Ishita "But sab log aisey nahen hothey.Their will be a person meant to be for you only for you .Yo try to avoid him as much you can but you would be destine to be with him.Then you will understand the meaning of institute of marriage.I understood it after Raman"

Tanu "Destiny is never my word.Ishita aapkey saath yeh huan but sabkey saath honey kee jaroori nahen hain."

Ishita "Leave it .Yeh Bathaon Ram key baarey mey kyaa kehnaa hain iss baath mey."

Tanu "I never spoke to him about it.But ussney pehley hee ussey bachaya thaa ghar mey jab kadkey waaley ayen they tho koi apshagun honey waaley thee but Ram ney taaldiya ussey.But strange he don't believe on god."

Ishita "Not surprised."

Tanu "You will be .But har religion key baarey mey bhagawaan key baarey mey har riwaaz ko jaantha hain.He read all book over our epics.Even what he follows their morals."

Ishita "What?Har cheez key baarey mey jantha hain but vishwaas nahen kartha."

Then same time Raman and Ram are coming with a big water bottler.

Ishita "Raman kyaa huan itnaa late huan."

Raman "Dorr tha aur,Ram wahan kuch dekh rahan tha."

Ram "Ek pakshi niche gir gaye they apney nest sey tho waapas rakh rahan thaa."

All give him some look.Ruhi gets up same time.

Ruhi "Chootey see they?"

Ram "Bahuth chootey.Wings bhee nahen they shaayad?."

Ruhi "But birds have wings ."

Ishita "Aisa naheen Ruhi.Jab bahuth chotey hothe hain to wings weak hothey hain."

Ruhi "Uncle fir aapney kyaa kiyan."

Ram "Mainey baby ko uthaaya aur slowly nest mey rakh diya."

Ruhi "Babies kaisey aathey hain."

Ram "Sorry Ruhi main jhoot nahen boltha aur sach tumhey batha naheen saktha tum unsey poochlo." Pointing toward others.

All are shocked now he booked them in no where.

Ruhi "Tho who loog jhoot bolengey?" annoyed.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Nice... waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
its interesting
ram is n interesting character
wth did he just said that to ruhi???
ishra must be embarrass
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

its interesting
ram is n interesting character
wth did he just said that to ruhi???
ishra must be embarrass

That is the problem we get when some one ask too many questions for Ram.He will speak frankly on other matters except related to him.


Nex update in an hour.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 17

Scene starts with where it stopped in last part.

Ruhi "Who loog jhoot bolengey mujhsey?"

Ishra and Tanu are shocked and puzzled as Ram booked them in a situation like this.

Tanu "Nahen beta uncle ko answer nahen patha hain.Issliyen nahen batharahan hain aur jhoot nahen bol rahan hain aur hum yeh kaisey bolega kee ussko nahen patha hain."

Ishita and Raman were able to breath now as Tanu cleared little of the thing.

Ruhi "Tho babies kaisey ayengey."

Ishita "Mainey tumhey pailey hee bola thaa naa god babies ko bhejthey hain aur papa ney bhee bathaaya thaa aapko."

Ruhi "Han main bhool gaye they sorry."

Ruhi turning to Ram. "Uncle aapko nahen patha hain naa tho main aapko bathaongi." Tanu was ready to do something.

Ram kept a weird face over it. "Uncle bhagawaan naa pehley babies ko create kartha hain aur fir babies key parents ko decide kartha hain fir baby ko mummies key goodh mey magic sey daaaldetha hain aur birthday pey baby bahaar ajaathee hain.so interesting naa."

Ram who does'nt believe on god "Pehley bhagawaan hotha hain..."was stopped by Tanu before he could say kyaa.

Tanu "Han uncle samajh gayan isslieyn repeat kar rahan hain.kee pehley bhagawaan hotha hain babies ko create karkey parents decide karkey mummies ko magic sey bhejdethaa hain."

Tanu "I am correct naa?"

Ruhi "Han you are right."

Ishra and Tanu take a free breath as problem solved and bank is closed and Ram is looking puzzled over this.

Then they speak for few more minutes (Ishra and Tanu Ram wont count) and finally goes to sleep.

Ishita,Tanu and Ruhi in tent in arrangement of bed made by sheets from ram.

Raman outside near bonfire slept with support of a tree but Ram was not sleeping and gazing at the fire more intensely.Tanu notices this but don't speak anything.

Then in morning before sunset Ram was doing yoga and practicing with his katana.Raman and others woke up by this sounds of heavy footing.

Tanu "Ram humey soney do naa.Ek din tho break do usko."

Ram din't stop.Raman was looking him strangely.Ishita "Kyaa rooj kartha hain."

Tanu "Han."

Then Tanu accidentally was about to fall over the fire but Ram pushes her opposite side but not before stepping on fire burning his own leg .

All gets panicked.But Ram took it lightly.

Ram "Chota sa hain just a primary burn will be ok with burnol." Taking it from first aid box in his bag.

Tanu "Kissney kahan madad karney meri .I could help myself.I don't need your help."

Ishita and Raman are shocked at this as Ram saved her and instead she is scolding him for helping but this one don't have any concern.neither guilt.

Ram was silent as usual with his smile on face.Then they pack the tent and were about to leave in search of road.Ram was comapitively less active as his leg has injury and pain is there and his stubbornness of not taking help is also costing as he is carrying the bag himself.Which almost weight 50kg.

Ruhi was in Raman's arms and Tanu and Ishita were walking in middle and Ram in front and rear Raman with Hercules.

Then they see a group of twenty people approaching them few are dressed police.

Then one of them speaks .

"Hum Raman Bhalla key liyen aayen hain.Sunitha jee ney complaint kiyan hain aur aakey help karney ayen hain."

"Sir humney goondon ko pakad liyan hain.Aap abh safe hain hummarey saath aasakthey hain ."

All felt happy but Ram was taking steps backward slowly.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
nice update

continue soon
n y ram is hidding from police there is something I'm sure so update soon n clear my doubt
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
ehhh
wht happnd to ram...

is this police fake...

supporters of goons...

its reaaly fun to read ...

updt soon vikas
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nichuss

ehhh

wht happnd to ram...

is this police fake...

supporters of goons...

its reaaly fun to read ...

updt soon vikas

guess is right

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