MY DREAM TRACK (AD-VEH-TURE)PART 18/16 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
every dress in green lolss...
Raman in opst team alone
hercules...ishu...ruhi to b 1 team
hhh
poor raman...



Waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Very cute story , like all of yours. You are an amazing writer. Talk between raman and the dog was too good. Everyone in one team and Raman cribbing dialogues were very good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
A new approach... it is gud vikas...
Edited by friendofall - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
part 12

Scene starts after Raman and Ishita packing their bags and Ruhi little bit sad .

Raman "Ruhi hum itney din yahen they naa.Abh gahr bhee tho jaana hain."

Ruhi was still silent.

Ishita "Ruhi papa ka birthday bhee aarahan hain.Ghar mey preperations humey hee karnaa hain naa.Tum ghar mey nahen rahogee tho papa ka birth day kaun manaaayega."

Ruhi "Han papa ka birthday.Han mujhey he decide karnaa hoga.Aap donon ko kuch nahen aatha.Mujhey hee sab kuch karnaa hoga.Ishima cake hum donon decide karengey.Theme abh nahen jab papa office mey hongey na thab bathaaongi."

She gets excited with the news her fathers birthday is coming.She is incharge now.

Raman "Ishita Ruhi decide karegi mera birthday kaisey manaana hain.Ishita pink not allowed and same is green."

Ruhi "Uffo papa main ney decide kiyaa.Aap kuch math boliyen."

Then they start preparation.Hotel staff were greeing them they have been their coustomers for almost a week and Ruhi almost met every staff there and formed friend ship with everyone.

Manager "Sir aap kahee waapas aayen tho yahen ayiye ga.Ruhi we will miss you."

Ruhi smiling happily.

Then Raman starts his car and they were on move and Ruhi was sitting back side along with Hercules.

Raman was driving fast as usual but it is not accepted by Ruhi.

Ishita "Raman dheerey chalaayiye naa itney teez kyon chalarahen hain."

Ruhi "Ishima aathey samay bhee teez chalaraha thaa."

Raman was shocked listening Ruhi's statement. And stops the car.

Raman "Tum mujhey batha rahen hon.Kissney merey aur scorpio key beech race rakha thaa.Tum bhool gayen kyaa tumhaarey wajaha sey humey agra bhee jaana pada."

Ishita din't knew about this and was shocked.

Ruhi "Ishima papa ney."

Hercules started same moment.

Raman knew he is outnumbered and restart driving.Many scenes continue with Ruhi framing Raman for everything which she did.

Then they reach the place where they halted second day.

Raman "Ishita hum temole chaltey hain.Mainey tumhaara naam trustee members mey likhwaaya hain.Donation diyen they."

Ishita felt happy as Raman does for her.

They reach temple and priest recogonizes Raman and offers his help and does pooja fon their name.

Raman was searching for Sunitha who is missing from the scenario.

Raman while going asks ."Panditjee Sunithajee kahan hain.Dikh nahen rahan hain."

Priest gets panicked listening her name. "Ramanjee aap nahen jaanthey aap jaaney key baad kya huan."

IshRaRu are shocked.

Priest tells them that old trustee got angry on her for replacing him and complained on him for misusing trust money and from then her life is in risk and she was hiding.They don't know where she is but she is not letting others to help her as the trustee is dangerous.

Priest "Sir aapkey jaan ko bhee khatara ho saktha hain."

Raman "Bhagawaan key naam pey bhee scam kar rahen hain?"

Ishita "Raman abh uss ladkee ka jaan khatarey mey hain humey kuch karnaa hoga."

Raman "Police kyaa kar rahen hain."

Priest "Sir police tho unkey chamchey hain."

Raman then decide first to save that girl and then take action by speaking to higher official he knew.

Raman keeps Hercules for the job as he had already met her.Hercules was able to find her near by store house hiding in terror.

Raman then secretly sends her out of town by a transport .But goons knew that Raman came and helped her so they were after him.

They were after them Raman and Hercules can handle few but they were out numbered by 1:15 ratio. So they escape in their car but they were chasing them.

It continued for few hours but on series of attacks they lost their way in a forest.They were left with no choice but running in forest .Raman was runningwith Ruhi in his arms and Ishita was also energy less with action sequence from afternoon.

They were hiding in bushes to avoid trail of goons.But they notice other couple.

They here goons saying they found the couple and they ran on that side.

Raman and Ishita were confused on whome they are after.

Raman "Who kisskey peechey hain.Who log undonon ko kuch karegey tho hummarey galathee hogi."

Ishita "Raman hum jayengey tho hum fasengey Raman.Hum kyaa Karen."

Raman "Par bewajah do log key jaan khatarey mey hain."

Raman decide to help them and Ishita was not ready to let Raman go alone.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Change in plans.
RAM AND TANMAYI mixed for three parts.
Raman needs help buddy.With Tanu there more entertainment there.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
new characters to be...

intresting...

so picnic ended...now action time

till reaching delhi..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
action for just few parts.
Then journey continues to Agra.
There Raman will meet Adi and Shagun will meet Hercules.
Then Ram and Tanu.Ram is serious and Tanu opposite.
Ram will help them face goons (actually alone)
Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
part 13

Scene starts with Ishita and Raman going towards the direction of goons to help other couple who were messed by them.Raman was carrying Ruhi and Hercules was ready to strike on signal of Raman.

Then other couple were surrounded by goons around 25 in number.

The man was tall just reaching 6 and fit to his height and fare in colour.Lady was shorter than man but of good complex and was walking by a support of walking stick.

Goons "Ladkee kahan hain."

Man was silent but lady responded "Mujhey nahen patha aap kiskey baarey mey poochrahen hain.Hum ney kissey ko nahen dekha yahan."

Goons "Tumney uss ladkee ko bhaagney mey madad kee hain.Kahan hain who ladkee."

Man was about to speak but lady stops him "Ram tum chup rahon main handle karoongi."

Man sttod silent.All goons are shocked seeing courage of that lady.Even Ishra were shocked .

Goon "Tumsey chalney tho theek nahen hoga tum humey jawaab doogi."

Lady "Galathee kar rahen hon.Main tumhey bacha rahen thee.Humey iss mamley sey koi sambandh nahen hain.Fir bhee thum log hummarey peechey padey ho.Main abh thak samjha rahen hun.But tumney bahuth galath kiyya.Merey baarey mey baath kar kar."

Goon forwarding toward her "Kyaa karogi tum."

The man was not even moving as lady beside her took challenge and he just moved a step back.He was carrying a heavy bag which can fit a stock for week and a trecking equipment like tents.

Lady noticing Ram moving back gets angry but her trick is different.

"Theek hain main dikhadongi.But issmey usska koi lena dena nahen hain.Usskey pass math jaana."

Pointing towards Ram.

Raman was ready to signal Hercules waiting for opportunity.

Ram was laughing at lady now shaking his head.

Goons as we can guess went to Ram's side first.But Ram was quick enough to take a Katana from his bag and point it on goon's throat.

Lady took the chance and moved toward Raman and Ishita.

Lady "Tum loog theek hon."

Ishita "Hum theek hain.Tumhaara friend wahan."

Raman was signaling Hercules but lady stops.

Lady "Jaroori nahen hain Ram handle karlega."

Then they were moving toward the scene of action.

Ram was not striking any one with blade but neither any is able to touch him even armed.

Ram was hitting them with handle of his KATANA and side blade.His swiftness is to much for a match for them and his coolness on strike makes them offguard.They had no other option but to run.

Ram then comes back to the rest .

Ram "Wah mujhey fasaaya last mey."

Lady "chup rahin tumhey bolney dethee tho inlog fas jaathey."

Lady then forwarding her han to Ishita "I am Tanu,Tanmayi Mathur."

Ishita "Ishita ,yeh meri beti Ruhi."

Tanu "Kyaa huan .Who loog aapkey peechey kyon padey hain."

Ishita "lengthy story.But sorry hummarey wajaha sey aapko ."

Tanu "Koi problem nahen.Yeh sabh normal hain."

Ram was silent and Raman was looking at him as if he was trying to think who he might be.

Ishita signs Raman to forward his hand.

Raman forwards his hand and try to tell his namebut Ram cuts him.

Ram "RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA.Ceo of an MNC .Considerd youngest.Am I right."

All are shocked .

Tanu "Tum unhey jaanthey hon?"

Ram "Kabhee kabhee news padhiyen shaayad help ho saktha hain."

Then forwarding his hand to Raman "App mujhey Ram bula sakthey hain.I have read articles about you.I was in Mumbai when you were promoted as CEO."

Raman was not that shocked now but surprised at Ram's memory.All puzzles re gone now as Ram cleared confusion.
Tanmayi took Ruhi to her hands.

Ishita "We are sorry hummarey wajaha sey aapko problem huin."

Ram "Aap Tanmayi jee ko boliyen .But ussey mujhey sorry bolnee hain."

Tanu "Tumhey sharam aaney chahiyen kee tumney ladkee ko Akeley ladney diyan."

Raman and Ishita were shocked but to surprise Ram din't spoke anything instigating fight.

Ruhi "Aap log yahan kyon aayen hon."

Ram smiling at her and Tanu stopping him to speak.

Tanmayi "Hummaree gaadi ka break fail huan aur iss mahaan insaan ney gaadi ko jangal mey chalaaya raasth jaaney bhina .Aur hum yahan fass gayen."

Ram was silent he din't respond.

Ram then looking at his watch .

Ram "Raath honey waaley hain .Abh jaana safe nahen hain.Hum yaha tent banana hoga."

Then he starts preparing for it .Raman was thinking something looking at Ram.Tanu and Ishita were sitting over a log as Raman progresses to help Ram he stops him.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
sorry if some one felt bad about above post.
It is just introduction so their was more about Ram and Tanmayi.From next it would not be that more.atleast I will try.

Sorry If anyone is hurt.
They can inform me over it by pm's.
I will pm them when they can see their regular complete ISHRARU .
Till then you have choice to avoid AD-VEH-TURE.

You can even report it if you feel it wrong.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
No issues yar... Its nice and interesting... Continue soon...

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