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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is how I want the Suraj track to take a turn in ishra's life

part 1

At the entrepreneur association party ishita exposes Ashok and Suraj by playing the video on the AV. No one can see her but she is behind he microphone speaking about what Suraj and Ashok did to her and Raman. The whole media is around everyone taking pictures of Ashok, questioning him. Ishita comes out the media gathers around her for questions. Raman is shocked and just staring at her. Ashok and Suraj run from there out of embarrassment shagun also leaves from there. There is an announcement that Raman is reinstated as the president of the association and action will be taken on Ashok. Everyone surrounds Raman and are congratulating. Ishita is also surrounded by media and asking her how she found out. They both are acknowleding and answering questions but are also looking at each other. Both are emotional . At the party they never get a chance to speak. On the way back in the car Romi , sarika are a.l talking about the sting operation and what all ishita did. Raman in listening silently . They reach home and everyone is happy at home too. They don't get to speak at all. Raman is sitting on the bed looking at the video of the sting operation the uncut version where ishita is speaking hariyanvi and getting sarika out. He is just not able to believe that the calm and cool dentist can do such a drama.
But he is also thinking that's if things did Not go as they planned ishita could have been in deep trouble and has worried look on his face

Ishita enters the room after changing and looks at him. He looks at he with a smile and gives his hand asking her to come closer. She hold his hand and they go stand at the window where there is cold breeze. He asks her why she did all this. She asks him why he resigned from the post. They both smile as they both know the answer. He asks her again. Why did she take such a big risk. Why she did not think of ruhi before taking this step. Anything could have gone wrong. His tone is a bit emotional.he asks if something wrong had happened what would have happened to ruhi and what about him as in mera Kya Hota. Ishita has tears in her eyes . She tries to convince him that nothing would have gone wrong with her as she knows that she has the love of her life with her - pauses - ruhi's love, her families love with her. She wanted to tell his love but hesitates and tell families love. There is silence and they keep looking at the stars. Raman speaks up again. He tells her that he used love looking at the stars in the night before. He used to feel happy and content. But after shagun left he hated the stars his stars and always asked them"why me" why did this happen to me . Why are my stars bad. But Now he says that he is looking at the same stars smiling and asking" why me". Who you chose to give me all the happiness in the world and looks at her. Do I deserve this happiness. Ishita has tears in her eyes. They keep staring at each other holding each other's hands tightly and smiling.


Hope you all liked it. I plan to continue this story after receiving your comments and feedback.






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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is beautiful plz continue :)
n do pm m if u r updating
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This would be a lovely episode.
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Very nice ...hope they will show emotional talk between ishra ...otherwise every time they suddenly start their nock-zok...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awwdorable ek kiss banta hai tere liye aur in dono main bhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the feedback here is the continuation

Part 2

He says that he is looking at the same stars smiling and asking" why me". Who you chose to give me all the happiness in the world and looks at her. Do I deserve this happiness. Ishita has tears in her eyes. They keep staring at each other holding each other's hands tightly and smiling.

they stand like that for a while just then ruhi enters the room rubbing her eyes and calls ishima . They come out of the trance . Ishita goes to ruhi and lifts her and takes her to the bed. Raman is still standing near the window smiling and feeling content looking at the mother daughter love. Ishita sings a lalabi for her and Raman also settles down in his place and sleeps .

Next morning as usual ishita gets up and does her daily chores. Every one is happy at home because ishita got her license as well as Raman got his post back. It was like a festival atmosphere. Also there was a party organised by the association that evening in honour if Raman and ishita. Raman got up and looked for her as he was used to make it a point to look at her face first thing every morning.

He goes out and sees her getting ruhi ready , walking around tying her pallu on her waist . She looked beautiful and he just kept staring. This was observed by Romi and he teases him. Raman and ishita both blush and he goes back yo the room to get ready.

After ruhi goes to school ishita goes to the room keeps Raman's clothes ready. Raman comes out of the shower in his towel and wet hair. He is actually looking too sexy. He goes to the mirror and starts drying his hair with another towel. Ishita is at the corner if th bed arranging his clothes. She looks at him and is not able to take her eyes off him. She is keenly looking at his muscular body and lost in her dream land. Raman notices that and is happy to see that she is attracted to him physically and wants to tease her. So he turns back and walks towards her . She is blushing and yet not leaving the eye contact. He goes every close to her . She closes her eyes. He bends down and takes his clothes and with a smile move away . Ishita opens her eyes and realises he is gone. She smiles and hits her head and moves out to the hall.


Only this much for today. I am trying to show the emotions that they are portraying without speaking. All the communication between them is happening through their eyes and body language and they have not spoken about their feelings yet. This is one of the best phase of love and usually the starting phase where there is physical attraction and you always want the other person to pay attention to you. Your eyes would speak volumes then


Will update the evening party scene and that's it . I may not proceed further.


This is not like an SS or OS but more like romantic scenes that I want to see in this serial. Hope you like it
Edited by prevas12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful! You have covered all angles...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice BT to short
update soon n do pm m
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lovelyy updatee... enjoyed reading ths!! keep continuingg!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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good 1...
plz updt nxt prt soon nd pm me

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