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Part 3

The Delhi entrepreneurs association have arranged for a party in the evening and ishita , Raman, Romi and mihir mihika are supposed to attend this.ishita is looking for what to wear and she decides to wear the designer saree that Raman gifted her during varamaha Lakshmi festival. She looks gorgeous in that saree white and black border. She leaves her hair lose. They look beautiful straight, silky and black. She is almost getting ready and Raman comes home. He gets in to the room and freezes at the sight. Ishita is trying to put the hook of her blouse as it is back opening. She is struggling and sees Raman from the mirror and freezes in her place. She then pushes her hair back to cover herself . By then her pallu which is not pinned falls down. She is in a state where she can't leave her hand to catch her pallu nor can she leave the blouse. She is turning read out of blush and embarrassment. Raman is lost.but he quickly comes out of his trance closes the door before someone else comes and comes near her to help. He holds her hands which are holding the hook of the blouse. They both look at each other in the mirror. He signs her to leave h hand. She does and he puts the hook. She quickly pulls her pallu and pins it. He just gives her one look and goes to the cupboard to take his clothes. He goes to ruhi's room to change. Ishita gets ready. She is just thinking about heat just happened. For a change she is liking him looking at her . The passion in his eyes are irresistible. She goes out and plants kiss on ruhi's cheeks. Says bye to her, mr and mrs bhalla and leaves. Romi us also with them. The whole drive to the party is ver silent. Raman is looking at her from the mirror and she is stealing glances at him.

They enter the party. Everyone greets them . Automatically Raman holds her hand and is taking her everywhere with him and introducing her to all. She remembers the first part she attended with him where he left her alone with all strangers. And came home. Realises that things have changed drastically and has a lone smile on her face. He looks at her and raises his eyebrows and asks what happened and she nods and says nothing. Then there is an announcement for couple dance and everyone forces them to dance. The songs are amazing. The lights are dim. The first song is " zehenaseeb" and they start dancing.they keep looking at each other's eyes. Ishita's hands on his neck and Raman's hands on her waist. Slowly the distance between them closes. There lips are inches away from each other. They don't realise where they are and when the music stopped and new song started. They have their own music of heart going on. Raman looks at her lips and his eyes asking for permission. She closes her eyes and puts her head on his chest and hugs him. He also closes his eyes and hugs her tight. They are lost in their world feeling each other's heartbeats and emotions. The music ends and everyone starts clapping .they come out of the trance and move out. All this while this is watched by Romi and he takes video of the dance as it was too romantic. They don't speak to each other about what happened but are stealing glances. They have dinner and leave. Again the drive was very silent. Romi is teasing them . Raman is as usual scolding him and telling that he does not believe in love and it was just a dance and means nothing but he is liking it inside. Ishita is embarrassed and very uncomfortable. She scolds Romi and ask him to delete the video. They reach home. Romi tells mrs bhalla about the party and shows the video. Ishita is upset and she goes to room and is crying. Raman does not react badly and infact is blushing. Mrs bhalla is happy and hugs him, he then comes to the room. Ishita is feeling bad about what happened as she is not sure if Raman was really serious or was it just attraction or to show people. She goes out to change . Raman is very happy and wants to talk to her . She comes back but gets ready to sleep on the couch. Raman goes near her and holds her hand and asks her if she is ok. She nods a yes but is crying. He realises and asks her to look at him . She does not. He asks her if she did not like the dance and being with him. She does not answer. She asks her to look in to his eyes and tell if she does not feel for him. She says no. He tells her that he knows he has an effect on her. She denies and shouts at him asking what he wants to prove . That she is falling for him where as he is not. He wants to redicule her and her feelings as always . He tells her no and she has mistaken him. She is about to leave the room.he holds her hand from behind and asks when he touches her doesn't she feel anything. She says no. He asks when he sees her doesn't she feel anything. She says no. He keeps pulling her back and she is closing her eyes. He kisses on the back of her neck and asks now ? She says no. He holds her in a tight hug and tells I love you in her ears and asks her now and she turns back and hugs him tightly. He cups her face and looks at her and tells that she is the best thing that has ever happened to him and he cannot live without her and loves her more than anyone in his life. She smiles and tells that she too loves him. He is looking at her lips to kiss. She is shy and breaks her hug . He holds her hand and says that he can wait of a life time and is in no hurry to take the next step in their relationship until she is completely ready. She smiles and leaves.


SO this was the last scene of my imagination. Hope you all like it



Edited by prevas12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks all got your feedback. I will write something soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just wondeful, if you write any other OS/ FF etc, please pm me. you write with such feeling!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks vani. I have also written another SS Mumbai trip last month. I don't know how to paste the link. But you can search and read that too. You can search th my user name and you I'll find all my posts.. But thanks for your appreciation. I also wrote my prediction on the upcoming bed breaking scene . You can read that too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesom...need pm fr nxt update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb... amazing... 😳👏👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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If people are bored on Sunday they can read this for time pass

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