FF: Ehsaas - Leaving the Past Behind 22/12 (pg7, pt 6) COMPLETED - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gonna update soon, I promise :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArbaazHayat

Gonna update soon, I promise :)

when u'll updt..?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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when u'll updt..?
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Yaar soon I promise.

I had a part ready to upload last week but it got corrupted and need to start again.

Sorry yaar an I promise it is coming :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg guys Im so pissed I had a better one written and my laptop bugged again and left page.
Rub de nai. I hope to write a new one later or tomorrow.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys I am back with a short start to the next part. Will continue further tomorrow. Please guys leave comment on whole story as comment are writers motivation so please help me out. Thank you and hope you enjoy.

------------Second Thought at Second Love------------

Ishita awoke to the sound of Ruhi's soft voice. Ishita first looked at Raman sleeping so peacefully. He looked so handsome. Her heart melted and Ruhi continued to call her name. Ishita signalled Ruhi to talk outside and leads her to the bathroom to prepare her for school. Ishita, before leaving, took one last view at Raman peacefully sleeping. She closed the door quietly and Raman opened his eyes fully. He was glad Ishita was falling for him. He was finally doing something right. He decided to wake up early to prepare breakfast for the three of them. He jumped out of bed and got ready in a rush but he still managed to look his best. He got ready in his best suit and cologne. Upon Ishita arriving in the main room with Ruhi. Raman has already made breakfast for them all and set it out neatly on the table. It was all vegetarian! Idli and Ishita's favourite Sambar! She sat Ruhi down and directly faced Raman. Was she beginning to love her husband? Was she ready to love again? It sure felt like it. And oh! Upon smelling Raman's scent she immediately recognised it as her favourite men's aftershave, her heart melted and she left with Ruhi. She peered back through the door and thanked Raman and winked at him. Shyness poured over Raman and he cleaned up.

SKIP TO EVENING: MIHIKA, MIHIR, MR/MRS BHALLA, ISHITA, RAMAN, SIMMI are all in sitting in main room.

Mihika finished her water and thanked Mrs Bhalla.

"Thank you aunty-ji!"

"Na, na meri bahu, call me Mummy-ji, I like it."

"Thik hai mummy-ji." They smiled at each other, to Mihir's liking.

Someone knocked firmly on the door and Raman opened it. The door flung open and Raman was taken aback. Ashok entered and pushed Shagun and Adi on to the floor. He slapped her and Raman quickly interfered pushing Ashok away and beating him. Him and Raman fight and Ishita seat Shagun and Adi with water. They cry fiercly. Mihir was about to join in when Suraj entered quickly and held his fist punching Mihir. Mihika tended to Mihir before Suraj pushed her away and pulled him up. Mihir broke free and began to beat him to a pulp. Romi entered and joined in beating up Suraj. Mrs Bhalla closed the door so the neighbours wouldn't interfere. Raman stopped upon request of Ishita. Shagun leaned on Raman for support and held his arm for sympathy. Raman pulled away and held Ishita's hand. Ishita looked at him starstrucked and tightened her grip on his hand. Shagun sat back down realising her life was over. He nodded at Ishita and let go, he hugged Adi and Adi looked at him.

"Dad?" Raman was stunned and everyone smiled. He hugged Adi tight kissing his forehead. Everyone smiles at them and Raman knows he has Adi back now.

PRECAP: Ashok and Suraj are bleeding and Raman grabs a chair about to whack Ashok hard.

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Updated title. Please comment if u like and if u don't please tell me how to improve.
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Interesting ff...cont soon...n pm me with future upd8s...
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i read all parts in 1 go...very intrstng ff...if poss pm me fr nxt...
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Nice. I read all parts at a stretch. update soon.
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Thank you for support guys please like and comment and thank you for reading!!
The tables turn.

A tear fell from Raman's eyes and it was induced by his son. For once he could say his and no-one else's son. He smiled and cupped half of Adi's face in his one hand as his other hand was smothered in the blood he lost from fighting with Ashok. He hugged Adi tight and replied,

"Haan puttar"

"Dad, I was wrong, I was very wrong. I mistreated you, I never thought about the fact that-" Adi hesistated to release the words from his mouth.

"Bolo!" Raman exclaimed, in disbelief his son would ever repeat it again.

"Aur yeh baat, the fact that app, mere such-"

Ashok raised his hand against Raman and Ishita flung herself in the way grabbing his hand and slapping him full force back, leaving a red hand mark on his face.

"Kese himat! You stupid woman, you don't know what I am capable of!" she screamed as he pushed her against the wall. Seeing this Raman fumed. Ashok pressed his hands tighter against Ishita and the rest of the family screamed at Ashok to stop as Ishita began to look faint. Raman grabbed a chair and launched himself off of Suraj's stomach, Suraj yelped and Raman smashed the chair off Ashok's head. Ashok fell to the ground unconscious. Shagun dragged him around the table away from the rest of the family. Romi and Mihir dragged Suraj away and threw him out of the house. Ashok lay with his eyes only slightly opened and tried to get him to attack Shagun but she slapped him hard and kicked him down with her heel. He held his shoulder in pain and was not able to get up. Shagun picked up a matchbox from the table.

"Mihika, take Adi inside." Shagun said surprisingly calmly with an evil look on her face and Mihika instead took Ruhi from her room and took Adi and her inside the Iyer house.

Shagun lit the match and everyone looked at Shagun.

"Dekh Shagun, match choro! Tum buche ke ma hoon, you can't do this." Mrs Bhalla yelled.

Raman held Ishita's hand as he could sense her fear. She stared in to his eyes and they had a conversation through their eyes, reaching the conclusion that they should stay back and not get involved in any criminal action. Shagun threw the lit match upon Ashok and he yelled at her to stop. She then threw another and he burned bright. His skin melted and he turned white. He was dead. Mihir realising the dangers of the fire ran behind Ashok, and threw water over him, extinguishing the fire. Shagun fell to the ground realising the possible consequences of her actions. She weeped and no one had any idea as to what to do. Ishita threw herself upon Raman, scared. She took him over to the Iyers house. She realised they could be held for criminal actions and have to risk their custody over Ruhi so took Ruhi and a willing Adi and ran. Funnily enough Raman had been planning a holiday for them, much to Ishita's delight. Therefore his, Ishita's and Ruhi's stuff were packed in the car. Likewise he grabbed Adi's suitcase which Ashok had threw out of the car. Raman chucked it in the boot of the car and they drove away clueless as to what they should do.

The police arrive at the Bhalla house and realise the conditions are intense and so they draw their weapons and send in backup to handcuff everyone. There was so many legal violations here: abuse, murder, theft, criminal damage, and many more so this would be a long battle for the Bhalla's that there was no escaping from.

Precap: The police take everyone in for individual questioning. Raman, Ishita, Ruhi and Adi reach an airport and Ishita looks at Raman with discontent in her eyes.

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