FF: Ehsaas - Leaving the Past Behind 22/12 (pg7, pt 6) COMPLETED - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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__________Stronger With Every Touch!___________

Ishita continued rambling on, not realising how her words were hurting Raman, but after all. It was Raman's fauilt. He never expressed his passion for her. Love truely is blind, but no more.

Ishita looked in to his concerned eyes and couldn't hide her feelings. It was her husband, she could rant all day and all night knowing she was ranting to someone who was listening and would make a change. Was it, someone who... Loved her?

"After Subbu, I don't feel anyone has loved me, so what now. At least with the clinic, I didn't feel as alone, as unloved."

For Raman this was the limit, he had enough.

"Ishita, app janti ho, everyone loves you. Appa, Amma, mere Amma, Appa" Raman calmly explained to her but Ishita still had one gap in her heart.

"Lekin, app?" said Ishita in a weak voice.

"Haan! Pela mein! I love you Ishita." He smiled as he finnaly released the words from the gaping hole of his mouth and his eyes pleaded for her to repeat his words. "Mein tumse pyaar kurte ho. I just feel that as people we were made for each other."

Ishita looked shocked and checked around for Ruhi, but no! He was serious.

"Suche! Well Mr Bhalla. I have to tell you, I don't know if it is mutual or not, I mean, I, I ... don't..."

Raman's mouth opened and he dropped to his knees. He looked in to her eyes in pain and a tear ran from his eye and dripped down from his cheeks on to his shirt. Each tear for Ishita was a waterfall but she couldn't say the same back. Not with clarity and moreover a reason to love him.
Raman looked to the wall and tears ran rapidly down his face showing his pain. Ishita was lost she couldn't face him, she walked out the room and went in to the main room where the family were sat, curious and confused! But all of the Bhalla's had a heart and didn't question her as they could see her pain, in her movement. She wasn't walking with pride, she was stumbling with every step in a blank facial expression. Everyone sat quiet and it created a very awkward atmosphere but to burst with happiness and boast in front of her right now wouldn't have been suitable right now.

Raman sat back up and held his head up. "Thika Ishita. App ko murze. I can't force you to love me, but one thing, I can try and make you love me. But remember no matter what, I love you Ishita Raman Bhalla. Please give me a space in your big heart, please. Raman stood up and wiped the tears from his cheek, overpowering them and throwing him to the ground. Ishita entered the room to store a towel, still depressed and he held her hand tight. Her touch always made him stronger and their eyes met. Their eyes didn't part quickly, it took Ruhi's call to break them! Ishita heard Ruhi's call and signaled to the door hopelessly, she walked out of the room and he smiled remembering the fact, she came back in to the room. He laughed to himself and sat down to continue his work.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Lovely feel bad for Raman do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Updated the thread title and working on the next part now, please come read and leave your opinions!

Thanks for reading the story and I hope you all will enjoy the next part!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful start! Loved it completely. Plsss continue soonnn n plsss PM me. Thankuuuy. I hv sent u a buddy request. Pls accept it. Thnkuu once again. Eager to read the next part!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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____________Making Her Love Me!____________
Raman's mission was now to achieve Ishita's divine love. He closed his laptop and closed his files over. His mind was set, he would make her love him. Or at least not give up without trying. He tucked his work materials in to his drawer neatly and Ruhi came knocking on the door.

"Haan Ruhi beta, come in!"
"Hi Papa. Why was Ishi-ma so upset, have you done anything Papa?"
"No beta, I haven't done anything"
"Very weird! I hope she is ok."

Ruhi walked out gloom and Raman was unhappy, because his Jhansi Ki Rani was unhappy. He walked in the main room and saw Ishita a bit more focused in her work and less unhappy but still his love could see in to her. Deeper than anyone else could see. She was still uncomfortable with the situation.

"Ishita, can I help you?"
"Na Raman, mein handle kur lo na, you just sit."
"I was not asking, "May I?", I'm asking, mujhe kya kur ho?"

She stood and gazed at her husband. For the first time she thought of him as her husband. Her Raman.

"Thika, tora se dish wash kur, besides that I will handle the rest."

Raman nodded politely. To him it didn't matter that she had power over him, in fact he liked it. He smiled and started his work. Each time he washed a dish, every plate he washed gave him a new idea as to how to make Ishita love him. Some ways, were a bit... Violent... But he promised himself that from here on out he would be truthful and at peace with Ishita. Ruhi ran up to her mom and asked

"Ishi-ma, app gusa mere sath?"
"No, beta, how can I be angry with you angel?"

Ishita frowned upon realising, she had done just what Raman had done she had taken her anger out unknowingly on innocent Ruhi. This was not right, and Ishita knew that.

FLASHBACK

Ruhi ran around the corner and bumped in to Ishita who then dropped the letter. Ruhi's innocent eyes tried to read it and all she could see was a big red stamp saying approved and the words "government official". She became worried because she knew about all that. She had been to court and read the letters. She knew that it was to do with the police and stuff like that. She wasn't the average 8 year old. Whether or not she wanted to be, her life was not that way. That she could grin by stuff and be tricked in to thinking that everything was ok when it was not. Ishita bent down and picked up the letter, she looked at Ruhi and Ruhi held her ears.

"Sorry Ishi-ma, I didn't notice you walking."
"Arrey Ruhi! Watch out, I am not a skinny sticm that you cannot see with your eyes! Mujhe kyo pooch? Mujhe nien putta!! Stop! Just stop!!"

Ishita blabbered on replying as if Ruhi was asking her multiple questions. Ishita hurried away and Ruhi was left once again thinking that she had wronged.

FLASHBACK END

Ishita took Ruhi over to the couch and sat her on her lap. Raman watched silently and he heard nothing, he was distracted by Ishita's eyes. Her sparkling eyes. And her hair! Her perfect, silky hair. He was hopeless at her feet. Her beauty paralysed him.

"Ru, I'm very sorry bucha. You know, mein or app ke papa tumse bohut pyaar kurti ho. Lekin, sometimes we become a bit worried and let it get the best of us so I am sorry Ruhi. It won't happen again!"

Ishita held her ears as a form of apology to Ruhi and she looked at Raman to check his progress but he was gazing at her lovingly. Raman continued staring at her beauty unaware that the sink was near flooding! Ishita called Raman's name but he only saw her mouth moving and heard nothing but angel's voices. Eventually she snapped her fingers and he was brought back to reality. "Raman" she spoke softly as she pointed behind him and he turned around and instantly shut the tap just before the water edged over and leaked. Close! Ishita and Ruhi laugh and Raman drained the sink seeing the water vanish, just as Ishita's tears had finally, he was on the path to making her love him. He was now a little bit closer to hearing her confess her love for him that he had ignited.

Precap: Ashok comes to the house with the police and orders the police to catch them all, Ashok walks by purposely nudging Raman to look around the house for something.

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HOPE YOU ENJOYED, PLEASE LIKE AND COMMENT BELOW!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I want Raman to expose his love first in YHM as ur update is like the one am expecting... Nice continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! The concept is nice - Raman confessing first and Ishu not so sure! Pls continue and PM if possible for future updates. Thanks in advance!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice ! Keep the trend !! J'aime !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awnnn that was cute
But ishita loves him no ?

Precap : suspense
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice precap seemed more interesting.

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