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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it..!!
LOL kiss ka allergy..!!🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeh kya hain???KISS ka baarish horaha hain kya???😉😆...
Awesome..Please update soon.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kiss kiss kis se kiss allery ka daba
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic update
Loving it
Keep updating 😉😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lolll yeh mihika bi na
She is hilarious
Haha loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 8


Scene starts with Ruhi asking Ishita to kiss Raman .Ishita was in confusion on what to do then she notices that marks in Raman's cheeks are reduced ue to iceing and (or may be her kiss effect).

Ishita "Dekho papa kaa hgaal theek ho gaya .Abh kuch naheen hain."

Ruhi "Han yeh tho theek ho gaya.Ishima abh hum movie key liyen jaayengey naa."

Raman understood he lost a chance but he knew much more is coming son he smiles.

Raman "Han hum jaayengey .Tum ready hon Ishima ko bhee ready karo."

Ishita "Raman aap dialogue reverse bol rahen hain.Mujhey Ruhi ko ready karnaa hain Ruhi ko mujhey nahee."

Raman "Mainey sahee hee kaha.Ruhi tumsey choti tho hain lekin kitnee samajhdaar hain apney papa key liyen kuch bhee karthee hain."Taking her in his arms kissing her.

Raman "Tumhey dekhkey seekhna chahiye Ishita ko."

Ruhi understood only one thing that Raman is praising her.

Raman "Han naa Ruhi.Tum Ishima ko ready karogi naa.Tum bathon Ishima ko kyaa pehanna hain."

Ruhi "Han main hee select karoongi."

Raman winks at Ishita while she is embrassed.

They go to mall and watch movie while they are coming they decide to do some shpping and have dinner outside.

Ishita and Ruhi are selecting dresses for themselves and Raman while Raman was aspeaking in phone with some one over some project.Raman was aware of every selection as he is guiding Ishita by signals in selection of her saree.

Then Raman secretly goes for a jewwllary shop selecting some locket for Ishita .He selected it after so much time.He ordered it that it shoud have their family picture of Ishita Ruhi and Raman in it giving them their combined photo.He then joins Ishita and Ruhi in a restaurant.

Then accidentally or by grace of misfortune Shagun also comes there.

She sees them having dinner happily and gets irked and burning.

She decides to get insulted and heads in direction of their table.

Ruhi notice Shagun before others and becomes silent.Then Ishita notices her and then Raman.

Shagun "Hi Ruhi.How are you?"

Ruhi looks at Ishita and then Ishita signs her to speak and then Ruhi holding Ishita's hands.

Ruhi "Main theek hun."

Shagun "Khaana khaney aye hon."

Raman "Naheen, hum Ruhi ko yaha chef key pass khana pakaana sikhaaney ayen hain."

Ruhi and Ishita burst to laugh at Raman's answer.

Shagun was prepared for worse .(she is soo low that she can bear more insult) and with smile of grace in her face.

Shagun "So funny."

Raman "Han yaa so funny.Tum yaha kyaa pakaaney aye hon."

Shagun "Main yaha pakaaney naheen .Khaana khaney ayen hun."

Raman "Main restaurant key liyen naheen iss table key pass pooch rahan hun."

Shagun "Raman main Ruhi sey milney aye hun.Tumsey naheen.You must remember that I am already engaged to Ashok."

Raman controlling his laugh "Tho main kyaa karon ussko koi samman doo ke tumsey shaadi karney han kiyaa tumhey janney key baad bhee."

Raman "What ever yaha main apney pariwar key saath ayan hun .Koi scen math kiya karo.Tum Ruhi ko dekhney aye dekha naa abh daffa ho jaon."

Ishita signs Raman to speak politely as they are in public.

Shagun "Really.I am neither interested "

She then leaves from that table and then sits in other one.

Raman don't give a thing to her while Ruhi came and sat beside Raman and Ishita has little worry seing Shagun there.

After few minutes they finished their dinner and Ruhi was asking ice cream for Raman.So Raman takes her to get one.

Then seeing the chance Shagun peepd in with her grace(shamelessly)

Shagun "So tumney mere beti ko mujhsey door kar rahen hon.Uskey dil mey merey liyen nafrath paidha kar rahen hon."

Ishitawas silent she dint want to answer this question.Ishita actually felt bored repeating the answer that she did it herself by leaving Ruhi.

Shagun "Tum kuch bol nahee rahen hon.Tumhey lagatha hain kee tum Raman ke biwi hon.Then I pity you."

Ishita was silent she want to speak new things instead of reporting same things again and again.

Shagun "Tumm Raman ko nahee jaanthee.Mujhsey jyaada Raman ko koi nahee pehchaantha.Raman always loved me and loves me."

Ishita dint like this statement but she waited for her to complete.

Shagun "Tumm sirf Ruhi kee ayya hon.Ayya.Kuch naheen."

They were being watched by Raman and Ruhi from distance .Ruhi is getting angry but Raman stopped her and told her to wait till Ishita give some answer.

Shagun "Tum kabhaa maa nahen ban sakthee aur tumney Raman sey shaadi kee .Tum yeh math samjho kee Ruhi kee maa hon.Raman key liyen tum usske ayya hon bass kuch nahen."

Ishita was bored now and decided end to this entertainment.

Ishita "Khatam huan ya kuch baakee hain.Then aapkey sawalon key jawaab deekar bore ho rahen hun .Aap apney soch kabh badalengey.Aapko abhee bhee lagatha hain kee Raman aapsey pyaar kartha hain.Usskey hatho itney baar insult khaaney key baad.Main Raman ko rokh rahen thee kee aapsey tameez sey baath karey."

"Aur baath mera aur Raman kaa.Aap ko bathaney key jaroori nahe hain fir bhee main bathathey hun.Raman sirf mujhsey pyaar kartha hain sirf mujhsey."

"Then about Ruhi.Aap Ruhi kaa maa kabhee nahen ban payee na hee banengey.Jab thak aap Ruhi ko pehachaan na paaye.Aapko itnaa bharosha hain apney aap par tho.Ek baar Ruhi key moo sey mama kehawayiyen aapkey liyen." She signs no.

"Main maa bansakthee hun aur Raman ko main saarey khushiyan de sakteee hun jo aap nahee de payee.I can give child to Raman." Same timeRaman comes there and Ruhi was beside him.Raman was clapping .Both Ishita and Shagun sees them coming.

Shagun sees Raman coming and she silently skips away.

Raman "Tho finally tumney ussey jawaab diyan.Merey baarey mey."

Ishita smiles blushingly taking Ruhi's hands on her own.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note:priority 4
Buddy I just want to tell you that I am week in romantic sequences.
I can tell you that my mind can crazily turn a story in twenty ways but I cant think over romantic scenes as myimaginative power is not that good in that area.

So I need help for 9 part as it was suppoed to be complete Ishita romance .
So I just wish that some one of you who are interested can write 9 th part of this story.
Then I will continue with story from 10 part.

Let me know if anyone are interested.
If no one is then I will directly go to next part of story.

Thanking you.
hoping for reply and help
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Superb update
Loved how ishu gave back to that shagun
She s such a shamless lady
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic updats.. really lovd all parts..
at once i've readed al parts..
👍🏼
going well.. plzz pm me 4 nxt upt..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome updates !
Loved it !
Ishu in full JKR mode ! 😆
So many slaps !!??!! 😲
Poor Raman 😆
Kiss se allergy ☺️😆
And finally ! 👏
Ishu replied back to Shagun 🤬
Loving your drean track so far 😉
Continue soon ! 😃
Thnx for being a quick updater ⭐️👏

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