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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 6

Scene starts with Ishita hugging Raman and saying I love you .

Then she looks at him and then

"Raman aap kabhee math sochiyega kee,Main apkey bhina khush rahoongi."

Ishita "Aap ney socha kaisey .Aap he bathayiye ek din bhi tha jab hum eke doosrey sey baath nahee kiya.Fir aap poorey zindagee mujhey door kaisey rakh saktey hain."

Raman "I am sorry.Very sorry.Kaan pakadkey."

Ishita "Aap mujhey door bhejtey bhee na main waapas akar aapsey chipak jathee.Main nahee janey waale hun."

Then she hugs Raman and then she sees Raman's face in mirror red with her slaps.

Ishita then makes him sit and was trying to treat them.

Raman "Tumhey aur koi raastha naheen mila kyaa.Thappad lagakey mera gaal lal kardiyan."

Raman "Abh main bahaar kaisey jaon.Sab log poonchengey tho."

Ishita "Sab aapkee galthee hain.Kissney kaha aisey decision leney key liyen.Mujhey kitna gussa ayaa kee socha galla dabadoo."

Raman "Dabadethee kaam poora hojaatha."

Ishita "Fir sey."

Ishita "Raman aap yahen rukhiyen main ice lekar athee ."

Raman sits there and he was looking at Ishita's new reports with different feel now.

Ishita was taking ice from fridge and noticed that even her hands were red as it hurt her equally.

Then Mihika came there and Ishita was angry.Just because of her one mistake Raman was almost about to leave her except for her JKR mode which saved their marriage.

Mihika "Akka aapkey haath ko kyan huan."

Ishita "Chodo tumhey kyaa?"

Mihika "Akka aap itnaa gussa kyon hon jeeju ney kuch kahan.Aapko tho aaj khush hona chahiyen."

Ishita "Han mujhey khush hona chahiyen.Tumhaari wajaha sey kitnee museebath ho sakthee thee."

Mihika "Mainey kyaa kiyan?"

Ishita "Tumney waha kaha naa who baath Raman ney suna aur ussey lagtha hain kee main yaha khush naheen hun."

Mihika "Oh God.I am sorry akka main naheen jaanthee kee jeeju wahen hain."

Ishita "Mihika main uss insaan key baarey mey sochtee hee nahen tumney usska naam laaya.Main tho aaj key liyen khush thee aur tumney waapas uss din yaad la rahen thee."

Mihika "AKKA I am really sorry."

Ishita "Abh sortout hogaya.Main ney Raman ko sab kuch boldiyan aur Raman ney bhee."

Mihika "Aapka haath ko kyan huan."

Ishita then slowly tells her what happened in room.Mihika was shocked listening about different Raman she knew and their confrontation.

Mihika "Aapney jeeju key uupar haath uthaya.?"

Ishita "Yeh kissey sey math kehnaa.Raman ka gaal laal hogaya usskey liyen ice le ja rahen hun.Tumsey baath mey milungi."

Ishita was keeping ice for Raman over her slaps.She was angry on herself now for hurting Raman that much.

Ishita "Raman I am sorry.Mujjey seedhey bol dena chahiyen thaa.Mainey drama create kiyan."

Raman enjoying Ishita's concern for him after confession.

Raman"Han tumhey aisa naheen karna chahiye thaa.Tumney bahuth bade galthee kardee."

Ishita "Raman aap chup rahiyen koi drama math keejiyen.Naheen tho aur ek laga doongi."

Raman "Kuch nahee karoonga .Condition hain."

Ishita "Kyaa?"

Raman grabbing her by her waist and pressing her to bed goes close to her face and has an eye lock.

Ishita was looking at Raman patiently.

Raman "Tumhey kiss karnaa hoga."

Ishita "Raman darwaaja khula hain koi aajayega."

Then Raman gets up to close the door.Then Ruhi comes running from school directly to Ishita.

Ruhi goes running and hugs Ishita and started telling about her school activities.

Raman waits impatiently.Then Ruhi notices Raman's red face.

Ruhi "Papa aapko kya ho gaya.Aapka face itna red red kyon hain."

Raman signs to Ishita should I tell.Ishita says no in a warning manner.

Raman "Kuch naheen beta.Isima ney mujhey kiss kiyaa tha aur mujehy allergy hogayee."

Both Ruhi and Ishita are shocked .

Ruhi was confused and Ishita was annoyed as he tols such thing to Ruhi.

Ruhi "Allergy kaisey hothee hain."

Raman was about to tell something and Ishita stops.

Ishita "Ruhi tum jaon aur ready hojaon.Main abhee aongee.Ok kissey ko naheen bathana kee papa ko allergy huin ."

Ruhi "Theek hain.Ppa get well soon."

Ruhi leaves the room .

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Kiss ki waja se allergy...Naughty Raman😉...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: JniISHRA83

Kiss ki waja se allergy...Naughty Raman😉...

tht to he told to Ruhi. After Ruhi Leaves i just hope Ishitha doesnt slap him again. Kiss dedo na Ishitha bechara Raman etna tapad kya tumhare haat ka, ek kiss toh bantha hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Awesome updates yaar...too good loved it..
Slaps segment it was needed...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Kiss ka allergy 😆

Great going👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww 🤣 each Mein kiss wala allergy ha ha. Cant stop laughing.ab toh kiss ' Ban ta hai boss. Waiting for your next update. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
plz update..next part too...totallyyy loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Fantastic update
Loved it
Haha he asks for a kiss
Ruhibasks her y his papa cheeks r red
Haha hilarious kiss kiya and allergy hogaya
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Cute update! Loved to read about Ishu's care towards Raman
Edited by AditiDoc - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 7

Scene starts with Ruhi going outside but Raman stops her irking Ishita.Ishita is thinking what is cooking in Raman's mind now as he already did a mess by telling Ruhi about a kiss.

Raman "Ruhi thum merey saath bahaar aogee .Hum movie key liyen jaayengey."

Ruhi "Sirf hum dono.Ishima naheen."

Raman looking at Ishita "Tumhaari Ishima ney dekho kyaa kiya mera aur help naheen kar rahen hain."

Ishita "Ruhi tum bahaar jaon main abhee aongi.Papa kaheen nahee jayengey iss chehra lekar."

Ruhi leaves this time and Raman was unable to stop her this time as she went running.

Ishita closed the door and goes to Raman angry mode.

Ishita "Kya keh rahe they aap Ruhi sey.Koi bacche ko aisa boltha hain kyaa."

Raman smirks and it makes Ishita more annoyed.

Ishita "Aapko sharam nahee athee .Ruhi ko rakhkar aisa."

Raman notices that Ishita locked door so that no one comes inside to see Raman's condition inthis way.

Raman grabbed her waist and draw her closer.Ishita became silent seeing the closeness.

Raman "Abh bolo naa.Kyaa huan."

Ishita "Raman abh chodiyen Ruhi wait kar rahen hain."

Raman "Main bhee wait kar raha thaa .Abh naheen hoga." Nibbling her ears.

Ishita "Raman main kahee nahe jaongi abh chodiyen naa.Ruhi wait kar rahen hain."

Raman "Itnaa asaani sey nahee." Rubbing his beard to Ishita's cheek.

Ishita "Ruhi ko rokhnaa hoga.Aapney aisa bola kee who confuse hogayee.Ussko jawaab milney that theek nahen bhaitegi.Who doosro sey poochtey rahegi.Kee kiss karney sey allergy kaisey hoga."

Raman "Sab log jaanthey hain kee humney jhoot bola cover kardengey." Kissing her over her eyes.

Ishita "Raman chodiyen naa."

Raman "Mujhey kiss do main ek ghantey key liyen permission doonga.Tumhey waapas aana hoga."

Ishita blushingly kisses him over his cheeks continuously and repeteadly.

Raman was happy as Ishita was with him and both forgot about Ruhi and her confusion.

Then outside in Ruhi's room .Ruhi was thinking how could their be allergy for a kiss.Then Ishita kisses her daily why it din't happen to her.

Mihika who came to meet Ishita directly came to Ruhi's room thinking Ishita would be there but Ishita is with Raman .

Mihika sees Ruhi in confusion and asks her what happened.

Ruhi "Chitti papa kaa cheeks red red hain.Papa sey poocha tho ussney allergy kahan."

Mihika understood scenario and trying to stop Ruhi's confusion flood.

Mihika "Tho kyaa huan.Papa ko allergy nahee ho sakthee."

Ruhi "Papa ney kahan kee Ishima ney kiss kiyan aur ussey allergy huan."

Mihika was shocked at this as Raman directly threw a bomb to Ruhi to play.

Ruhi "Ishima mujhey daily kiss karthee hain.Mujhey naheen huan."

Mihika don't know what to say.

Mihika "Ishima key lipstick sey allergy hain papa ko." Then she see Ishita coming and continues "Ishima agar doosra kiss diyan tho theek ho jayega."

Ruhi "Sach mey?"

Mihika "Sach mey.Tum karwaogee na."

Ruhi "Papa ney kahan hum movie dekhney jayengey.Ishima ney mana kiyaa papa kee cheek red hain tho.Main abh Ishima ko boldongi Papa theek hojayengey hum movie jayengey."

Ishita reache there.

Ishita "Kya ho rahan hain yaha?"

Ruhi "Ishima chitti ney kaha kee aap doosrey baar papa ko kiss karongey tho papa theek hojayega.Fir hum movie jayengey."

Ishita embrassed over Mihika's style of clearing confusion.

Ishita "Chitti jhoot bol rahen hain.Aaisa kuch naheen hain."

Mihika "Nahen akka yeh sach hain.Chahiye tho aap bhee try karon.Jeeju sey bhee pooch lo"smiling.

Then Ruhi holds Ishita's hands and takes her to Raman who is keeping ice to his face.

Mihika followed.

Ruhi "Papa chiti keh rahen hain kee .Ishima aapko doosrey baar kiss karengee tho allergy theek hoga ,Yeh sach hain."

Mihika winks at Raman signing him to tell yes and Raman understood Mihika finished his plan.

Ishita is signing Raman to not tell yes.

Raman then nodding yes by head and saying "no "from mouth slowly.

Ruhi took only nodding as she could'nt listen Raman's words as he incidentally told it slowly.

Ruhi "Ishima aap papa ko kiss karon naa."

Mihika "Akka main jaa rahen hun."

Ishita was puzzled as what to do.Kiss Raman before Ruhi.She has just completed a marathon minutes back alone nut before Ruhi is a confusion.

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