FF ~Things can Change!~ Part 15 and 16 Pg 50 (7 May)

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Double updates !!! Thanks a lot :) :)
Hahaha... Shagun n Param loved it !! Puttar is safe ..
The story is enfolding beautifully .. Nice updates
Continue soon

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Akshatha

@Akshatha19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

wow... read all updates one go

nice concept different too

awsm yaar...

esp Raman dreams...

Raman has fallen to ishita...

plz update nxt part soon... eagerly waiting...

thank u so much

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felciya

@felciya

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Awesome updates. Poor Raman is living in the fantasy world of Ishita. Shagun n Parmeet is cheating behind him.

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yashasvi barfa

@.Yashu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

brilliant update waiting for the next update

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#195

I love how Raman dreams about Ishita it's so cute! That's what you get Raman Bhalla! Lol this Param gives me the weird vibes he will definitely do something soon. Well done! :)

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#196

OMGG!!! reallyy woww! both the updateees!! Parmeete.. ohh yuckk leechade only!

I could clearly visualize Raman's condition on seeing the hot bomb in saree!! hahahaha!! wt a plight ! :P ;)

i was getting excited too while reading.. i thut raman wud cum n rescue ishita whn tht pervert was hitting on her.. chal koi nahi.. i gues u wud b including tht as well later in ur update!

Now precap.. woww!! Ram-leela! hahha!! perfect choice of movie esp after seeing Ishita in saree!! LOL :P cant wait to read the next part! cont soon! :D

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Jasmeet

@CBrocks

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Hey...read ur whole story in one go and I must say i have an instant liking for it...i love the fact how its completely different from the show..something new to read bout...and ur writing style is amazing...ishita working in raman's office and raman is on revenge mode but still fails every single time..its fun to read ur story

Continue soon ..will wait for the next update

Can u please PM me next time u update I will buddy u :D

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iyuvi

@iyuvi

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#198

A very interesting story.Loved this piece of work.I just love Ishita's character in this story.Beauty with brain +independent ,very well described.RKB is good too.Would love to read more.Update soon.