Point of Release- IshRa OS

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

UZYPOOO! Yayayayy I finally got to read your absolutely WONDERFUL OS! 😳

Can I just say you are one of my most FAVORITE writers now?!?! Loved loved loved how you took the whole cricket scenario and the term "Point of Release" and turned it into something so magical! 😳 I must say the the title was very apt considering what was happening to the both of them in the OS! 😉😆

Once again Uz.. FABULOUS! You NEED to write more girl.. I ain't having it. YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE. Kehdiya na? BAS KEHDIYA! 😆😆

Love you sistaaah! 🤗🤗 Keep it up! 😳

--Gari

Edited by -Garima- - 11 years ago

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

You are just magical when it comes to Ishra romance. I wish we could see atleast 10% of your imagination on YHM . Don't know much about cricket so thanks for explaining the term!

Thanks for the pm!

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Tanyaarora11

@Tanyaarora11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Okay! I'll be honest with you. I was gearing up for sleeping after doing a tedious task, when I came upon your OS, not being a cricket fan the title didn't entice me, but nonetheless. I am glad I read it tonight and not later.
It was too cute! I loved how the simplicity of the situation can be brought out in such a romantic and exciting way. It was no doubt a very simple scene, but the naughty bits and the way you've intricately described their emotions, enhancing the entire effect was just mind blogging. Truly beautiful!
And now I can sleep with a happy thought! Haha;)
Absolutely loved it! :)

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wondeful os- i love how in all your os, what's left unsaid is as much as what's being said 👏

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Man! SO beautiful ❤️

Point of Release.. I thought everything but cricket ☺️

The double meaning liners... and amazingly written OS.

Loved it ☺️

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dreamy-sa

@dreamy-sa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

oh my...such a breath taking story...I loved it😳 I wish u continue this as an ss😉

and pm me please if u writing any stories hereafter...u are writing excellently👏

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Loved it.cricket to dimag k ass pass bhi nayi aaya but aur bohot kuch aagaya.😳😳😳 I liked dailogue". He dare not hope that she would ever want the whole of him. The whole that included that darkness. The darkness that would still call out to him, trying to lure him once more"

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

I havent enjoyed cricket so much before...superbly written!☺️

yeh game mein bohat maza aaya...😉 🤣

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

res 😳

Oops I am royally late on this one...

Now you know, just the title of this had me choking on my tea 😆

Are you sure you aren't a cricket fan Uz? cos damn girl the sport has never been sexier, I dunno why or how or perhaps I do but this one reminds me of a particular scene of the series Castle, knowing that you have followed it for the first few seasons perhaps you might know which I am talking about... a scene in the first season when Castle comes on the shooting range and has a very sexy scene with Kate when he pretends he doesn't know shooting and it has that line by Kate - we can always just cuddle Castle.😉😆

Oh if only the show explores this scenario sometime, Divyanka is a trained marksman with a gold medal in rifle shooting would love to see Ishita shock the daylights out of Raman with this talent of hers. 😆

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago