Point of Release- IshRa OS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: whitelily
Superb os

Thanks so much 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: -Garima-
UZYPOOO! Yayayayy I finally got to read your absolutely WONDERFUL OS! 😳
Can I just say you are one of my most FAVORITE writers now?!?! Loved loved loved how you took the whole cricket scenario and the term "Point of Release" and turned it into something so magical! 😳 I must say the the title was very apt considering what was happening to the both of them in the OS! 😉😆

Once again Uz.. FABULOUS! You NEED to write more girl.. I ain't having it. YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE. Kehdiya na? BAS KEHDIYA! 😆😆

Love you sistaaah! 🤗🤗 Keep it up! 😳

--Gari

🤗🤗 Gari, seriously your too kind and generous in your praise. It really does mean a lot to me😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Nikita99
You are just magical when it comes to Ishra romance. I wish we could see atleast 10% of your imagination on YHM . Don't know much about cricket so thanks for explaining the term!
Thanks for the pm!

Thank you for enjoying it and commenting too..i think its perhaps a good thing that we don't get any of my imagination play out on screen😳😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Tanyaarora11
Okay! I'll be honest with you. I was gearing up for sleeping after doing a tedious task, when I came upon your OS, not being a cricket fan the title didn't entice me, but nonetheless. I am glad I read it tonight and not later.
It was too cute! I loved how the simplicity of the situation can be brought out in such a romantic and exciting way. It was no doubt a very simple scene, but the naughty bits and the way you've intricately described their emotions, enhancing the entire effect was just mind blogging. Truly beautiful!
And now I can sleep with a happy thought! Haha;)
Absolutely loved it! :)

Another non- cricket fan, phew I'm not the only one😳

Yes I basically just wanted to show them 'mess' around in a very normal day to day situation. Happy that came across.

Thank you for such lovely comments😊 and I'm happy to know you slept with a happy thought!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: rutu83
wondeful os- i love how in all your os, what's left unsaid is as much as what's being said 👏

So nice of you to say that! really thank you so much 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
Man! SO beautiful ❤️
Point of Release.. I thought everything but cricket ☺️

The double meaning liners... and amazingly written OS.

Loved it ☺️

Thank you! 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa
oh my...such a breath taking story...I loved it😳 I wish u continue this as an ss😉

and pm me please if u writing any stories hereafter...u are writing excellently👏

Thanks so much- I'm not sure that theres scope for SS in this and you will realise i lack patience to write anything lengthy😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: lourel24
Loved it.cricket to dimag k ass pass bhi nayi aaya but aur bohot kuch aagaya.😳😳😳 I liked dailogue". He dare not hope that she would ever want the whole of him. The whole that included that darkness. The darkness that would still call out to him, trying to lure him once more"

Ah, those are actually my favourite lines😳 it's Raman's inner turmoil being played out every night.