Point of Release- IshRa OS - Page 4

Great OS. Very well written and the way you have described their emotions is outstanding.

Originally posted by: PreciousPri

Uz... Seriously you are a pro dude !!

I have said this before and I say it again ... I just love your writing style 👏👏👏

Thanks Pri😳

First and foremost... your title..!! ... you know what the initial thought was reading it right?? 😆 ... ab kya kare default setting hi aisi ho gayi hai hum sab ki 😛

Hehe that was the idea, glad it seems to have worked😉😆

But Hawww you not a cricket fan 😲😆...I like cricket so I'm happy you wrote a cricket based OS 😊

Yup hands up I'm not a cricket fan at all- I just used the idea of bat and ball for my own purposes😆

You have wonderfully described the emotions and feelings of Ishita and Raman ... and with just 4 dialogues you have said it all for both of them... the naughtiness... the inner meaning ... everything

Yup for me the 'naughtiness' goes hand in hand with the more deeper emotional aspect

And you seem to like having water in your OS's...like in Aaj phir tum pe 😛... it's a good cooler na..!!

You caught me out yes, I have a certain affinity when it comes to water😳😳

I could visualise it all happening ... if only this would come in YHM

Hehe so sweet 🤗 thanks Pri your such a great supporter means a lot

Thank you for this OS 🤗

Originally posted by: Alu-

Mann Mann!!

How do you write so well!!

When i first saw this I was thinking it would be something else

you surprised me and wrote something so amazing, so well penned down and described.

Do you want to write one with Ishu being hurt😛

Originally posted by: mnr123

res .. lemme read it first 😛

ok When I read Point of release I had hundred other thoughts than CRICKET in my mind ... ☺️ 😛

Haha yes that was the idea here 😳

Nevermind for my over enthusiasm ... 😆 I loved ur post not just loved it but it did touched me 😊

Thank you Megha 🤗

Love ur thoughts on Ishra ... n they surely do need lot of net practice(pun intended) to progress their relationship further 😆

"See how she leans her cheek upon her hand.
O, that I were a glove upon that hand
That I might touch that cheek!"
-William Shakespeare , Romeo and Juliet

Here Romeo is wishing if he cud b atleast Juliet's glove ... he thinks her glove is more close to her than him... Romeo Longs for her

Raman Longs for Ishita - Same is the case wid RKB he wants to occupy his JKR's system like a deadly virus ... wants to delete all the Subbu cells ... 😆 He wants to own her completely but is afraid to let her in his system ... 😆
Yesterday when Raman said "Main subbu nahi hun" ... this kind of love is dangerous 😆 it has reached to that depths where it will not b easy to come around ... When u r madly in love u just want to do things for your loved one.. just b wid dem in happiness, sadness, happening days, boring days whatever it takes...

Whereas for Ishita she understands him at all the possible levels except for LOVE...

"My bounty is as boundless as the sea,
My love as deep; the more I give to thee,
The more I have, for both are infinite."
-William Shakespeare , Romeo and Juliet

Juliet says to Romeo that the More Love she gives Love to him .. the more she has..

Ishita is an understanding n overly positive person ... all she has for everyone is Love , ya she's a woman scorned in Love but that doesnt stop her from giving what she has ...Its just that she's not sure if Raman is willing to take it or not... 😆

Wow what an analysis! beautifully explained by you. It's been many many years since i read any Shakespeare thank you for the reminder😳

Coming back to ur post - the 4 lines that you've quoted in bold interplayed their emotions, questions and answers to each other well.What i really liked about ur post was that it was superficially naugty and deeply stimulating. Ur description of their relationship on the surface and subconsciously is so good.. I really have no words to describe it ... 😊

Thank you, like i have said before for me their relationship has so many layers, I guess i enjoy writing and interplaying those layers

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

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OK... I will add my comments in words that will be acceptable here 😆 baaki tum samajh lena Uz. If you want explicit/unrated review comments, I will have to PM you

This one was the epitome of word play. very cleverly written. the writing style and the smartness you have used in this piece is superlative.

From Mirrors to cricket... what a journey it has been for you, and what a treat it has been for me to read works from a versatile writer !!! well done my friend...

Originally posted by: luvsagar

Uz...what a FANTASTIC OS
u should really turn this into a SS if not a full fledged FF. .
The title was PERFECT and seriouslythe undercurrents between ISHRA...EELECTRIC. ..it became stifling HOT when I was reading this!!!!

Please write more...awaiting your next masterpiece!!!!

Nina

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omggg UZzz...u r something woman...u create ur own magical sensuous ishra land...aaah i ws so so so lost in it...!! i DEMAND a part 2 of this...plz plz..!!

this ws totally epic...i could visualize evry single second of it...

Originally posted by: --Sia--

This is what we call sixer

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Brilliant OS Dear!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!