My dream track OS Ishra (kc)2 part added - Page 2

Aww such sweet OS! I wonder if we'll get to see Karwachauth on YHM?!

Aww this is such a nice OS n sach mein serial mein aisa dikhaya toh TRps kya milegi 😉

Do write more dear.. 😊

wow thank u. hope this will show on serial

Fantastic OS Dear 😊 Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me 😉

so cute ! Awesome Os,Vikas!

Awww ..>!! 😳❤️
U stole my heart with this ...This was like a genuine thing which could even happen in TV
VERY GENUINE ...I SAY ...🤗

Could actually visualize everything before me ...
And very few ppl can do that ...Seriously
VERY VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN 👏👏

I could feel the warmth of the scene ...Ishu crying terribly ...COuld feel it ...!!
And I really want such scenes to happen in TV wale YHM also ...WAITING !!

I love stories with happy-endings ...
and surely this one stole my heart in my first reading only ...😊

Shabashee claps for My PHD Writer ...😉

Originally posted by: Sweety_98

Awww ..>!! 😳❤️
U stole my heart with this ...This was like a genuine thing which could even happen in TV
VERY GENUINE ...I SAY ...🤗

Could actually visualize everything before me ...
And very few ppl can do that ...Seriously
VERY VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN 👏👏

I could feel the warmth of the scene ...Ishu crying terribly ...COuld feel it ...!!
And I really want such scenes to happen in TV wale YHM also ...WAITING !!

I love stories with happy-endings ...
and surely this one stole my heart in my first reading only ...😊

Shabashee claps for My PHD Writer ...😉

Scene starts in terrace with Ishita completing her fast as Raman is making her eat some sweet but she is completely restless.She still is in shockk of listening Raman's death news.

While all are doing their pooja.Ishita is still holding Raman's handly as tight as possible.Ruhi came out of it quickly as she don't know what really death is and fear of loosing someone near by.Raman is Ruhi's father and she have a mother too who will take care of her .

Ruhi was playing happily down side .Ishita is not out of it.Her mind is preoccupied by voices of news that plane is crashed.

Raman was lucky today .He wanted so deeply to be with Ishita in her first karwachouth.He took the smallest chance to avoid meeting and came back for Ishita and now it is what saved his life.

Raman and Ishita were standing in terrace waiting for others to complete their pooja.Ishita suddenly faints and falls down.Raman who was beside her catches her immediately and rushes downside carrying her in his arms.

Ishita still is holding Raman's hand even in unconsciouss state.Raman takes her to their room.Everyone gathers around and were tensed for Ishita.

Mr Bhalla "Humey bahar jaana chahiyen.Naheen tho Ishita ko saas lena mushily ho jaayega.Raman hain naa yaha khyal rakhney.Romi tum doctor ko phone karna"

Mrs Bhalla "Raman Ishita ka khyal rakhna .Koi jaroori ho tho humey batha dena."

Iyers also agree for this all go outside.

Mr Bhalla "Bichaari ka kyaa haalath ho gayee hogi.Subaha sey kuch khaaya bhee nahee ."

Mrs Bhalla "Ishita uskey wajaha sey nahee .Uss accident key wajaha se behosh huin."

Mihika "Ek hee pal mey sab kuch khatam ho gaya hotha .Jeeju uss flight mey sach mey hoyhey tho.I cant even imagine"

Mihir "Bhool jaa uss baath ko.Abh sab kuch theek hain naa."

Mrs Bhalla "Sab kuch kaha theek hain?Abh Ishita yeh baath kabhee naheen bhool payegi.Ussney Raman ka mouth ka news suna .Yeh itnaa asaan sey naheen bhool payegi."

Mihika "Jeeju usskey saath hain naa.Jaldhee sab normal ho jaayega."

Mihir "Bhai ko kall meeting hain unhey jaana padega."

All are tensed again.They don't want to take risk again by sending Raman .

Raman was in his room he is tensed for Ishita and he is sitting beside her and Ishita is still holding his hand.She don't want to loose him.

After few minutes doctor comes there .

She checks Ishita .

Doctor "BP bahuth low hain.Shaayd vrath key wajaha sey ho saktha hain.Lekin itnaa jyaada."

Raman "Ussney mera death news suna hain."

Doctor "What ?"

Raman "Mumbai ka flight crash huan na.Ussmey mujhey bhee hona tha main last minute mey plan badala.Yaha sab log ko yeh laga kee main bhee flight mey thaa."

Doctor "Shock lagee hogi.Theek hain main kuch tablets suggest karthee hun.Aap khyaal rakhiyega."

Doctor leaves.

Raman know one thing about death for sure.Death is not a trouble for dead person or person going to die.But it is hell for the living person who lost some one.

Mrs Bhalla have three more kids along Raman.She may be sad but it will reduce as she have there more.Same for Mr Bhalla.Ruhi has Ishita to take care of her in Raman's absence.Romi and others have two more siblings.

But for Ishita Raman is her husband.Their is no relation beside husband and wife where there is uniqueness.No one can take his place and it is beauty of that relation and a bain if it is to loose some one.

Raman gets a call from Tandon.

Mr Tandon "Thabk god tum theek hOn."

Raman "Main Ishita key liyen rukha tha.Usska pehla karwachouth thaa.Soch kee seedha kall he aonga"

Tandon "Bhabhi ka vrath ney tumhey bachadiya."

Tandon "Bhabhi ko phone dena "

Raman "Who so raheen hain.Shock mey hain.Sab ko laga kee main flight mey thaa aur main mar gaya thaa."

Raman "Abh thak shock mey hain."

Tandon "I can understand.Tum kall meeting key liyen aa rahe ho?"

Raman "Ishita ka haalath kharaab hain.Main shaayad naheen aa paonga."

Tandon "Tum waheen rahna .Meeting main handle karloonga.Bahbhi ko tumhaari jaroori hain.Good night."

After few minutes Ishita opens her eyes and sees Raman is sleeping beside her as she held his hand tightly and releases it.But again immediately holds it back.

Raman wakes up after this.

Raman "Tum theek hon ?"

Ishita "Aap theek hain?"

Raman "Main yaheen hum tum so jao main kahee naheen ja rahan hun."

Ishita sleeps but she has no intention of leaving Raman's hand.

She don't even want to leave Raman for a minute.She need Raman to be befor her every moment.

Ishita "Raman aaj main bhee yaheen soungee aap bhee yahee sojaon."

Raman sleeps after few minutes but Ishita was wide awke looking at Raman .She kept her looks on Raman steady and silent and for sure as if she is guarding Raman.

After few minutes Ishita also slips to sleep.

Wow so touching do continue

I seriously dont know .