Longing to Belong - IshRa Two-Shot | Part 2 - Page 14 - Page 7

Originally posted by: titlee90

superb 👏

Originally posted by: florine_20

Nice one. Loved raman and bala convo. Continue soon

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

oh my god Aani... one more story from u...

gud going han... seems as CV's u too happy wid us😉😆

too gud Aani...

man i loved it... but more for Bala... m so missing this sensible Bala in show...

what a convo between Bala-Raman... so realistic ...

superb yaar...update soon

Originally posted by: PagliLadki

Loved it.

Originally posted by: Lata_ishra

Awesome

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Awesome

Originally posted by: serendipity.

U are on more than just a roll Aani 😳 dont even know what to call it :P 🤣

Not that im complaining ;) i have loads to read now 😛 <3

Unreserving is a prob though 🤣 :P

Originally posted by: redwine1

Another sublime read ...

ur words just flow one into the other ...

Lovely thot ... i am amazed at ur talent ... brilliant ... love the way u build on thots ... keep it coming girl

Originally posted by: gems4sana

I love your use of the hindi dialogues - I admit, it takes me a bit longer to read because of the fact that its transliterated hindi, but it adds I guess authenticity and spice to the scenes as I'm imagining them in my head.

Thanks Sana, usually I dont opt for Hindi but this one just came to me in the language in my head and I went with the flow 😳

I adore your use of Bala - this is exactly the kind of conversation Raman and Bala should have (just like Bala and Ishita have). LOL at Raman being forced to sleep with Mihir and Romi - forced out of bed by two 6-yr olds ;)

I love Bala and how he is such a great guy you can talk to and love the scenes Raman Bala have so had to write them at least once 😳 @bold - 😆 I can imagine that happening to him 😆

I especially liked how you mentioned Bala saying that even with Amma-Appa, Toshiji-Bhalla sahb, and even Vandu-Bala competing - couples married for years and completely habituated and who know each other inside out emotionally and physically (I mean, they all have kids...) ... it was Raman and Ishita who won. That's a pretty important detail and I'm glad you made use of it in Bala's talk w/ Raman.

The show has them winning since they are leads but obviously as a writer I wanted to explore a different tangent, and I could imagine Bala saying these things. Also like you said there are couples far more comfy emotionally and physically yet they won - I wanted to give a reason for that in my own way😳

With this ongoing track (and your story esp) I can clearly see that ehsaas solidifying into something still not yet touchable, but still very tangible - if you get where I'm going.

I exactly get what you mean thanks for this amazing & lovely comment Sana 😃