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Posted: 11 years ago
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hawww Aani u really think ur PMs bother us...
if u could have said u r not sending PM as u r already doing a lot for us by giving such awesome stories, that's completely understandable... but u bother us by ur msgs , a biggg NO to it...
believe me i mean my words... its always a treat to read ur stories...
back to story...
Amazing Aani... just loved it...
Raman's thoughts and then Ishita's care for him...
the way she treated his wound...their convo...man heart touching... loved every bit of it...
specially where he thanked her for sending Ruhi other day for his care...
end wid Ishita's thoughts is just perfect...i swear Aani even me badly missing my old IshRa , their nok-jhok, his one liners, Ishita's cute reactions... sab kuchh missing hai YHM se :(
Edited by FieryLioness - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aani honestly I cant thank you enuf for writing this. Not just because it was my wish to see Ishu nursing Raman as a doc but also because a few lines u put in here - Quoting them as I said the same thing in nikki di's post yesterday.

As he moves towards the wardrobe to get those fresh set of clothes out for himself, she continues to look at her husband and wonders what has happened to this man, she knows his strong moral compass, his hatred for lies and deceit and tries to figure out what went wrong this time. Why is he behaving the way he is, he is not this person she knows him.

U know u wont beleive but this was exactly what i wrote. As of now the whole and soul of ishra lies in the beleif of ishu in the man she knew. She is actually messed up because her conscious CANNOT accept he is the same raman bhalla. She knows something is not right with him.And thats why even if she tries to hate him she cannot do that. Because for her even now this RKB is just a masquerade of the real one which she is trying to find behind this man whose siding by his ex. And srsly it will be more than beautiful to see Ishita's Raman win over Adi's father or Shagun's ex. And i await that moment in the show.

This one like others is beautifully written. You rock!
Edited by Malika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So I missed this because of no PMs. *looks accusingly at Aani*
*Reserved*

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Aani, I've been ridiculously busy and will be for a long time. So I'll just stop the apologies all together! ☺️ 😆
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Wow! I know I'm commenting after the track ended. But this was stunning! One of the best versions of this scene, I've read! 👏

I especially loved the tetanus bit you had included. It goes on to show us, rather Raman, how considerate and smart his wife really is. It gives him more food for thought eh? 😉 And then he didn't feel any pain! ❤️ Similarly, the track had ended like that! The minute Ishita touched him, the pain is gone and he feels only her touch!

The end, however, broke my heart. "She misses them." We can all relate to this line, because oftentimes post a break up, we miss that person terribly, but more than that, you miss the companionship and that's what happened to our IshRa. Sighs.

Lovely piece of work Aan. 🤗
Edited by MSN_Vanny - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its beautiful the way u've penned down ...Its really difficult to love a person who doesnt love u in return (although Ishu here thinks that Raman loves shagun n not her)... I liked the way how u've expressed Ishita's inner turmoil... Its very difficult to live a life full of compromises n we know that Ishu is strong woman but still her love for him is making her weak ... 😳 or is it not?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tetanus shot was bittersweet- no teasing but still holding on to ishita
lovely os- really captures the mood of the show right now
all that ishita is missing, we miss them too!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You really have a way with articulating emotions, especially with little dialogue. Absolutely beautiful, Aani. This was very bittersweet and beautifully written.

With better days fast approaching, can we expect something reflecting lighter moments (with perhaps neem paani and some touch karke touch karke included? 😈😆😉).

Loved this, Aani! Beautiful!
Edited by Isma_A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well written... I like the insight in their minds...i did hope for a hug...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Exquisite flawless. There is a certain magic in ur writing aani. Fabulous as ever. I m never able to leave it incomplete without reading it whole.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it. And I also miss them 😒
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it Aani 😃

Especially liked the way you described Raman's feelings and how he is missing the peaceful routine that he had settled in with Ishita.

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