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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: EkPaheli

res ๐Ÿ˜ณ

<----------- that is how I sat as I finished reading this OS of yours Lucky.

Oh I fell in love with the way you write all over again


You know I love reading a variety of genres my fav books happen to be historical fiction, mysteries, regency romances and of course anything that has an element of fantasy that excites me as a reader... but reading something feel good, something that tugs at my heart is always such a sheer pleasure... this is how I would describe this beautiful, beautiful piece by you.

It just warmed my heart.

I loved how he is clearly seeing that things havent returned to normal and yet, he is slowly healing too from whats happening cos it has impacted him too as a person. Loved how you incorporated Romi' growing up phase in this one - cos yes that has been one good thing about this track, it is redeeming Romi and how! Never saw it coming frankly when this track began. But I am glad to see him changing he is a good boy at heart as per me, just misguided and perhaps who needs to know he is loved kinda that is all.

I am so happy how your Ishita has made everyone understood around her that this issue is for them to deal by themselves - yes he has created a blunder, a mess - but if anyone has a right to punish him here it is her and only her - cos she has been the one he wronged, who suffered the most because he couldn't trust her enough, trust their marriage enough and mostly because he chose to listen to a woman who has never ever been right in her life over his own heart, his own mind.

And the dance bits ๐Ÿ˜ญ - this was breathtakingly beautiful; something which mere pictures are conveying us. I hope the editors don't screw up the actual scene man cos they so do that always when it comes to IshRa ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก - the galliyan sequence and of course apology is something I would never forgive them for ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

So hope they manage to get that right cos I so know DivAn will make it a treat for us to watch - as much as you made it a delight to read this.

Love ya ๐Ÿค—



Hey Aani... I am so glad you liked it. I came to this kind of writing after some time.

Yes, I want Ishita to remain mad at him, but at the same time she is sensible enough to know that he hasnt wronged anyone else. And she doesnt want everyone to turn against him.

about the dance - yes, I know what you mean. I hope they dont give more footage to the feeding than the dancing

and tell me about the apology sequence... i rant about it too, every chance i get ๐Ÿ˜†

Love ya too!!!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32


Thank You Swati ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
sad but beautiful
though i'm vacillating between raman being wrong as husband only or for family too. dard sabko hua na ๐Ÿ˜•
aww ruhi- she's an angel ๐Ÿค—
loved that good morning ๐Ÿ˜Š dheere dheere...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rutu83

sad but beautiful
though i'm vacillating between raman being wrong as husband only or for family too. dard sabko hua na ๐Ÿ˜•
aww ruhi- she's an angel ๐Ÿค—
loved that good morning ๐Ÿ˜Š dheere dheere...



Hey Rutu thanks for the comments ๐Ÿ˜Š

I see what you mean about him hurting everyone. He has, but not to that extent. And frankly that was the only opening I had to show any kind of healing to begin in their relationship.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow, this was really beautiful โญ๏ธ
descriptions of everything especially the emotions were bang on๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
ruhi and shravan were great๐Ÿ˜†
i loved this๐Ÿ˜ƒ
ur such an amazing writer๐Ÿ‘
hats off.. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rozy77

wow, this was really beautiful โญ๏ธ
descriptions of everything especially the emotions were bang on๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
ruhi and shravan were great๐Ÿ˜†
i loved this๐Ÿ˜ƒ
ur such an amazing writer๐Ÿ‘
hats off.. ๐Ÿ˜Š



Thank You so much Rozy ๐Ÿ˜Š


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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely lucky !!!
I am getting addicted to OS which is not good for me ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Hey, beautifully written OS!! Loved how you've weaved the OS based on the current dance track...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
The way Ishita made sure noone else was angry with Raman cos he had wronged her alone was great..and also how it pains her to stay angry with him..and their silence speaks for itself..as always!โค๏ธ
And your title..I love this song!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by baubles - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Beautifully written Isha. This story to me was smooth and calm... and loved this line ' People say that the few seconds right after you wake up, and before you remember all the disappointments of life, they feel like heaven' . It's so meaningful... lovely write up. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It feels so good to have someone put some sort of a positive spin to the dreadful track that is going on right now. And I appreciated how that positive spin was realistic in the fact that this was Raman and Ishita's fight, not anyone else's. I appreciate how everyone else had settled back to normalcy and allowed the couple to deal with this themselves and eventually they will because this is where they started from in the very beginning.

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