OS: Kitni Baatein Yaad Aati Hain - Page 2

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--

Very good os lucky

Like I have always said we get to see stuff we don't see in show in os

Very good

Originally posted by: cool_aparna

First of all, very apt title...i love this song...

You kinda rolled the camera over the changes in every member in IshRa's thoughts...from Romi to Simmi, to both the mothers...

Very well expressed how IshRa were in a turmoil of emotions whithin themselves...loved this phrase u used..."They bore it like real warriors in a battle"

Loved this line at the end..." People say that the few seconds right after you wake up, and before you remember all the disappointments of life, they feel like heaven."

Beautifully written as always...👍🏼

Originally posted by: happenstance

Res-

going to read right away and be back to comment

Edited-

Ok the first thing I'm going to say is that you must continue this Lucky, so count me in as head cheerleader for this series!😳😆

Jokes aside, this was such a beautiful read. As always you weave emotions and narrative so well. The one line that really struck a chord was the line about Ishita's own heart suffering just in order to punish Raman. To me that completely underlines their present relationship. They are at that point where it pains them even if the other is right or deserves reprimanding.

I liked how you concentrated on the 'silence' during the dance. Is is that very silence which is going to continue to bind these two together. They are so in sync they don't realise it themselves.

You know me i could go on very easily, but I'm going to keep a control on it only coz i want more and i want it soon😳

i'm looking forward to reading more! 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: avni_19

the upcoming track u put it up as a storyy with full of emotions ,pain, and much more... loved it.. beautifulllyy written!!

lets c hw it goes in the serial! u write great!! i m a fan of ur writing!! brilliant yaarr!!

keepp continuingg.. eager to read the next part, if any! :D :D

Originally posted by: PagliLadki

Loved the OS

Originally posted by: whitelily

nice