A Scorned Woman - IshRa OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: Tanyaarora11

Beautiful OS! Loved it completely. You've described it quite aptly and this might just happen :D :D

Originally posted by: SilverGold

Hah! See Raman, my boy, that's what happens when you try to hide things from your beloved. Trust is both sided, if you don't trust her enough to tell her something, then you might as well forget that she will ever trust you. As has been said, hope for the best and be prepared for the worst. If you think that Adi or Shagun will be safe and that Ishita will also forgive you, then know that the total opposite also has 50% chances of happening.

Anyways, enough of my rant to Raman, Aani, I have to say, this OS is amazing! It really portrays the truth and Raman should realize that he is teaching his son that he can get away with anything. His one mistake has given rise to a seed of distrust that has turned into bitterness and war with his own family. And Ishita.

Your OSes, all of them have portrayed what I had been thinking, but couldn't say as this site isn't letting me post anything that I have written, otherwise I would have written something. But I have to say, this is totally mind blowing!!

Silver xx.

P.S - I am lagging behind in a few replies to your Oses, no?

Originally posted by: btalwar

Hey Aani

wow ... Can I suggest something? You should actually join the Creatives of YHM team. Your ideas are brilliant and totally logical.


Hey Bhanu thank you and @bold- is the reason I cant join em LOL the day our shows make sense in the way we do in the real world I would perhaps be shocked and stunned into a coma 🤣

As I have told multiple times already on this forum, I got hooked to YHM by coincidence but fell in love with it instantly. But, this accident track combined with a double dosage of Shagun proved to be damper for me ... however, thanks to writers like you, I feel that their is hope ...

Hey Hi5 😛 me too I came across this show when it began and caught a few scenes but mostly they involved the mils fighting whenver I tuned in and it annoyed me and I thought forget it I am not watching this show but then I saw the ek duje ke vaaste seq - the first IshRa scene I ever did and was hooked 😛 and the track is giving me a headache so I resort to writing as therapy glad its helping others too 😃

I loved the way you have shown Ishita to be someone who is able to turn tables and handle any adverse situation. True, she is no superwoman; but she is also not some abla naari who just knows how to sacrifice everything at the drop of a hat (Sadly, this is what every other Indian serial depicts to us).

She has been shown that way in the show too na, the MiMi Engagement thing and also the fact she fooled Shagun and married Raman indicated she can be cunning when she wants to be only she doesnt make it her attitude and wear it on her sleeve 😉 but this time around she would need to whip that wand of hers again it seems and I dont want her to be this saint I swear

We are thinking on a similar track when it comes to Adi. I guess as a parent, it is important to draw a line for the child. Everyone loves their children but at the same time it is the responsibility of the parent to discipline the same child. In Adi's case we already know that Shagun is a classic case of bad parenting and what is ironic is that even though Raman knows about it, and has expressed his concern about the same at various occasions (the convo between him and Bala where he was worried for Adi and his future), he still ignored everything and protects his son just to be in his good books.

exactly Raman needs to sort his priorities and understand the implications of his actions on his son in the long term scenario cos this way he is just making him a criminal



I absolutely adored your example of Toshiji. I guess everyone in this forum will agree with me that all of us at some point have had disagreements with our parents and sometimes real fights ... all of us have been stopped, scolded or shown "my way or highway" attitude. But that does not make us hate our parents in long run. May be immediately we may give a harsh response or in worse cases like Adi, hate them but eventually, we all understand the importance for the act sooner or later.

I know right you cannot find one person who hasnt had a fight with their parent its a package deal somehow - you grow up, you disagree and you row and sometimes you are right, sometimes your parents are but at the end of it one thing is for certain no parent intentionally would harm their child, not unless they are blinded like Raman is here or dumb like Shagun is 🤢 in which case its the kid' loss

Raman really needs to look at the mirror and figure out that what he is doing is not protecting his son; rather it is making him more callous towards everything ... reminds me of something like "Jaanta hai na mera baap kaun hai." attitude vaale log.

@pink - WORD man! I swear that is what this kid will grow up to be if he isnt reformed soon

Then the final part about gaining Ishita's trust. Raman's character is no fool. Even before his wedding, in his drunk state, he had bragged about Ishita to Shagun and he had told her that Ishita is way better for Ruhi than her. Raman had automatically entrusted Ishita the moment he agreed to marry Ishita for Ruhi. He had given the entire life of his daughter in the hands of another woman. Therefore, whether he admitted or not, he has always trusted Ishita. Further, by now Ishita has proved her sincerity a number of times, be it something materialistic like the land deal or the most sensitive topic of his life ... Adi ... Hell this woman is ready to accept Shagun and Adi as a part of her life because they are related to Ruhi. She has proved her enough. And all she asked in return was some trust.

I swear thats what puzzles me the most if he can trust her with Ruhi brag about her prowess as a mom even when drunk and not knowing her as well as he does now why is he not letting her in on the secret why is he always so adamant on dealing things on his own plus why listen to Shagun at all doesnt he see that woman has never, NEVER been good news to him nor as a parent is she doing her job well instead of claiming to be majboor all the time why not talk to her in private one? Why is he allowing Shagun to cloud his judgement?

Therefore, all Raman should have done was ... to trust her, spill the beans and show his inner turmoil. I am sure Ishita would have handled the situation in a totally different manner.

absolutely!

This reminds me of Vandu and Bala. She was also scared about her pregnancy. Getting pregnant while you are a single earner is a huge problem in a metro city and it can have severe implications. But, although she was initially skeptical and lied even to her real sister ... she could not hide it from Bala for long ... this is what is called trust ... she expressed all her fears, her tension and in return she got 100% support from her husband ... I guess Raman needs to learn this big time ... as although his subconscious trusts Ishita; but his actual self is scared to admit it ...

lovely example I like how you co-related the two couples and yes, that was such a tough situation Vandy was in but I am glad though she took her time she confided in Bala and didnt make a hasty decision which would have been a blunder that she would have regretted later

Hehe ... your OS was like a food for thought for me, therefore I just kept on rambling ... I have read your other works too and find you as one of the best writers on this forum ...

loved the rambling and thank you ☺️

Keep up the great job ... Please send me a PM for your next work ... I will always look forward to your beautiful posts ...

Cheers

Bhanu.

thanks Bhanu hope I can keep up with the expectations too 😳

P.S.: I am also writing an SS (this is my first ever work). You are welcome to go through it ... let me know you honest thoughts on it ... I will love to hear what a superstar writer thinks of my maiden venture. The link is pasted below.

An Ishra SS: Sirf Tumhare Liye

Have reserved a post and will update asap and please superstar writer is Lucky for sure I am still a novice 😳

Originally posted by: baubles

Amazing yet again!!! Every OS of yours makes me wish it would happen in the show...they're perfect!!

Can't tell you how much I loved Ishita here..she was BRILLIANT!!! The strong headed, not so easily forgiving woman who has been hurt a lot..she put people in their places, be it Raman or Adi..

Her punishment to Raman was just what he needs and her sternness with Adi is for his own good..

Toshi rocked too...

Lastly Raman...felt really bad for him..one big mistake and he's lost Ishita's trust and the guilt is overpowering the happiness of getting his son back..

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Fantastic OS Aani 👏 .

Hell certainly hath no fury like a woman scorned. In Ishita's case, we cannot even blame her. Am so glad she openly told Raman what he needs to hear the most. He is not gearing up for a "Best Dad's trophy" from his son, if this is the path he chooses. Raman is not a good parent. Not to Ruhi, not Adi. The only difference between Shagun & him is that he at least cares for the kids. But nudging your kid ahead towards becoming a criminal is a bit too much.

Loved Toshi ji's reprimands and how she tries to make him understand where he went wrong with his misguided love. Very well written.

Am so glad that Ishita does not forgive him for the hurt and pain he has caused as a husband. In Param's fiasco, his biggest mistake was blurting out the truth about their marriage and then letting Ishita go even if it was to gain time. But Ishita had made some mistakes herself in not letting Raman know what was going on (small but nevertheless mistakes).

But here it is Raman's fault all the way. All this could have been sorted out only if he chose to use his brains. So yes, Ishita has every right to be upset.

Loved how she referred to herself as a pawn in the games these 3 play --- so right. And she can give back as good as she gets. Raman puttar be careful 😛😆

Finally about this
"Helpless... yes I know, I have heard a lot of that these past few days enough to last me a lifetime frankly. --- So true Ishita ... for you and us 🥱



PS -- Thanks for the comments Aani 🤗... had written after quite some time. Wasn't sure if this forum would enjoy it 😃

Originally posted by: DivAniTanni

Aani...what to do with you...give you a hug, or just praise? I can't decide. You are tooo good. You should be in the YHM CVs team. You can think better than them, at least regarding this track.

Awesome OS...the best OS in this situation of YHM. This OS...the way most of us want the track to lead now. We have had enough of Raman's planning in past and being hero after all the mistakes he made. But, this time I don't want anything like this to happen, not at all. I want the track should end the way you wrote, and the end part of your OS is the start of realization from Raman's part, which is badly needed now.

Toshi jee, the way she is acting in the show, you depicted her rightly. She proved to be a good parent at the end. I wish, Raman understands this.

Ishita...what a strong woman she is and you presented her just the way she should be after this fiasco. I loved the part her saying that only she will raise the kids, not Raman. Hats off..brilliant. It's better for Raman not to interfere in this, cos he is a bad father already.

Ending this saying that you are truly brilliant👏. I hope, CVs get to see this OS and plan their track this way.

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

😆 Trust me, I'm in love with Raman (Or is it KP? 🤔) but the character is losing it episode by episode. I understand he is helpless; he is blinded by his son's love and Shagun was right when she said she knows which buttons to push. But seriously, why hurt your wife to that extent? It may have hurt less had he told Ishita "I hate you" to her face than show her these misdirected actions. 😭 Poor soul said she will never experience love. 😭

Great, now we hijacked Aani's thread. Oops? 😳

Originally posted by: gems4sana

reserved :)

Originally posted by: Elita

Beautiful OS... with the way the current track is heading...something similar to this is bound to shape up... god just can't see Raman so defeated and Ishita so hurt.

Originally posted by: afsanaanjum

Hello there! (-Sorry for being awfully late!🤢-)

no need for apologies Afsana 😊

What a way to end this entire track! The end is predictable and i knew. It was realistic, practical and mature.

Glad you found it practical and real cos that was my intent😳

That is not what i admired. I loved, absolutely loved the way you have scripted the entire passage!👏
🤗
I don't think i can ever stop appreciating your stories and loving your writing style! Amazing Aani.🤗

☺️ thank you 🤗


Yes you do sound depressed, obsessed, tired and agitated with this track and its on-goings! It does happen when you're too much involved and into a particular series or a serial.

LOL I am not defeated but tired of this track for sure and the thing is it is the only track in the show so far which has made me write 4 OS' so far which is a record for me

But they way you have vent out our your emotions in the form of this story i'm pretty much sure that you're 10times better now!🤗


oh a 100 times frankly
The OS! Raman sure as hell deserves the kind of treatment that he is getting now and he might even end up be rewarded with the same on the show too if he doesn't end up acting Mr.Smarty pants and turn the tables the right way.

I am actually hoping for Mrs, Smarty pants to take the lead here cos he needs to understand a few things one of which is never underestimate wifey 😆 - esp present one cos your ex can only cos so much damage... the one under the same roof with you though is a different story 😉😈😆


I have said it before also - The worst treatment that the person who has wronged can get is silence!😊 Its THE worst. The other just avoids, yet does everything you say to a certain limit which includes responding to his queries - which ends up being intolerable for the accused!

Yep cos the perperator rots in misery esp if he/she has a guilty conscious

He expects violence, anger, distress but, he gets sweet ironical silence which stupefy him and make him hysterical and mad. Truly. Wonderful buddy!🤗

exactly cos what he expects is easy to handle and far simpler to deal with... but what he is getting is making him hate himself

Ishita is heartbroken and wretched. Yet she assimilated herself and knows how to act normal and be the sensible one in times of distress. - That's true depiction of character.👏

thats how I have always seen her as this strong woman who can brave a storm quietly 😳


You know what i like the best no matter how grumpy the current track might be?
- The fact that when one loses the balance, the other takes up the extra burden and neutralizes the beam! That defines a relation.👏
Hope the CVs have the sense to show that in some way. Praying that it gets over soon.🤢


that is true but this time they are both off kilter so it would be worth seeing how they manage this and the cvs dont assume as dumb and act themselves in the same way too cos I really want this case to be fought and won by Ishita she shouldnt withdraw it and set a bad example for Adi too cos his biological parents are already doing a spectacular job at it.

P.S : Thanks a ton for the PM. I don't mind my inbox being spammed when the contents are so overwhelming! Mind you buddy. Ill be waiting for another new msg.🤗

🤗 lets see when I can next bother you have an idea I am working on right about now 😳