Hazaaron Khwaishein Aisi - An IshRa OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: happenstance

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Originally posted by: Jyoe

Beautiful and got a smile on my face!

I so wish your OS got translated to the show epi scene by scene. It would have such a lovely thing to see.

And my how beautifully you have described the scenes, emotions, even the dialogues. It is like you have created Raman and Ishita characters.

You are an amazing writer and write so beautifully and with so much conviction. in love with your writing style.

Please PM if you can whenever you update any OS :)

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Lovely OS Aani!

I specially loved the part where Raman made an excuse of the case to talk to Ishita. It is high time Raman realised that Shagun is just manipulating him and give it back to her. Even if it a small thing like the call.

Ruhi is truly a blessing to Raman. She really is a sweet kid, though a little mature for her age. I can't believe he missed out on her for 6 years. But better late than never. Though born out of Shagun's womb, she has traits of Ishita and Raman.

Originally posted by: SWAN123

"Then how did you know it was me?" he asks her breathless for some reason.

"I just did." She says quietly, her voice velvety and soft, almost shy in its connotations to his ears.

AWWW that was so soothing after the trauma that we have been through!

And so typically Raman and Ishu! All muted but intense waiting for all to come out in the open we deserve some good times guys. Dying to hear them get back to their " happy brickering days" Miss Raman's name calling and Ishu indulgent stares or smiles!

You do write really well. Love, Ashu!

Thanks for the PM Aani!

Originally posted by: Shanig123

Hey Aani I woke up to a beautiful Saturday Morning here in Toronto reading your yet another Lovely Post which is much better than watching the actual serial it self . I can almost imagine Raman in the same dialogue you have used as well as Ishita .

To say the least thank you for taking your time to write this. It's perfect .

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

*Reserved* I'm late! 😒

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Hey Aani!!! Thanks so much for writing on the current track! 😊 I get really excited to read what you've penned. 👍🏼

Wow! This was exceptional! 👏 Whilst Raman was in self thought, I couldn't help but think of "soulmates" and when Ishita said she knew it was him, I was seriously happy! It goes on to show what a connection they have, the kind you share with a kindred soul. The understanding, the subtle gestures and the looks, IshRa have it all and you just reiterated what an amazing chemistry these two have! 👏

I adored the ending simply because you didn't drag or or left it at a cliffhanger. It was like peeping into the picnic scene for a few minutes and then leave after being satisfied with the ongoings; knowing that it'll all end beautifully. 😳

Another spectacular piece! 😉

Originally posted by: paru_rox

"Then how did you know it was me?" he asks her breathless for some reason.

"I just did." She says quietly, her voice velvety and soft, almost shy in its connotations to his ears.

And with three words he feels his world shift once again, she is away from him; miles and miles between them and still it feels his heart might just burst out of his chest at any moment with the way its thundering and when it leaps, it seems there she would be to catch it, hold it tenderly. The conviction strong, so strong he feels a shiver pass through him.

Just loved this part ... the unseen connection between the two . Would love to see something like this where Raman is missing Ishita in case they are going to show us the damned picnic moments.

However with the spoilers can safely say that nothing this beautiful will happen. Though must say, am looking forward to Toshiji slapping some sense into Raman.

Originally posted by: ishra4ever

thankd fr the pm...aww it was so cute... wish such happy moments were shown on show too.