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SS Raman's Realisation

Part 27

Apke! Aap he crazy ho!

"Chalo lets go for the game!" Romi spoke on the mike.

Ashok came to Raman and whispered as Romi explained the game, "Listen, Raman I have an urgent call from the office. I'll have to leave..."

Adi who had just come to the party with Vandita, Shravan and Ruhi heard that. "Aree Ashok Uncle stay for some time."

"No, beta I have some urgent work will hav eto leave."

"Ohk! Then, see you soon. I'm happy that you and dad are all sorted now. Ishima ne bataya! Thanks, uncle." Adi said smiling.

Raman also smiled while Ashok looked amazed, "Ishita is a magician. A boy who had forgotten words like respect, thanks and manners is living those. I'm happy to see that I took the right decision."

"In deed, my mom is the best!" Adi smiled.

"Of course after all wife kiski hai?" Raman said proudly.

"Meri mom hai isley amazing hai!" Adi said stubbornly.

"Haan toh? Aur meri wife hai isley aisi hai!" Raman too said stubbornly.

Ashok looked around exasperated and then back again to the father-son duo who was still bickering. Ashok was about to stop the fight when he noticed Ishita coming. He looked at her helplessly she just nodded in return assuring him that he could leave and he did the same.

Ishita stood there for a while trying to make her presence felt when nothing happened she spoke up, "Hum party mein hai! Aur mein pehle Ruhi ki mom hu isley Raman apki wife and Adi apki mom! Ab Romi jo bol raha hai suno!" Ishita spoke angrily while Adi and Raman looked embarrassed to be caught red handed. "Sorry!" they mumbled.

"I have three kids!" Ishita shook her head and went to stand with Mihika while Adi laughed as she went. "Dad you are the third kid and I'm the first so Meri mom pehle huyi! I won!" he ran off before Raman could collect his thoughts and an answer.

Haad hai! Adi toh mujhse bhi smart nikla! He said to himself a little loudly.

"Koi nahi Bhai! Apka he khoon hai!" Mihir said smiling.

"Haan! Woh toh hai!" Raman pulled his collar proudly.

"Chalo game ke liye! Suna hai apka idea hai?" Mihir said teasingly.

Shit! Isne kaha suna! Ye Romi ke muhe pet oh kabhi tala lag he nahi sakta!

"Chalo Bhai jaldi karo apko kuch batana bhi hai!" Romi came in. Name the devil and devil appears. Raman, isse poochna toh padega! Lagta hai bike ka lock kafi nahi hai! "Ek kaam kar tuchal Mihir mein aata hu!"

Once Mihir left Raman asked Romi. "Problem kya hai teri? Chup nahi reh sakta!"

"How can I leave a chance to trouble you? That's against the pride of Romi uff Romesh Chandra Bhalla!" Romi smiled.

Ye aise nahi manene wala ek baar Ishita ka wo embarrassment wala lecture sunega na jo mein... oye! Ye huyi na baat!

"Tujhe kya pata teri bhabhi kitna gussa hongi jab usse pata chala ki ye sab tune kiya tab sunna tum uska lecture..." Raman smiled secretly.

"Sachi Bhai? Bhabhi upset hongi? Ohk! Promise ainda mein aise nahi karonga! Nahi toh bhabhi ko hurt hoga na? Mein bhabhi ko sorry bol dunga! Wo lecture suna de lakin gussa na ho!" Romi confessed and left.

Abbe yaar! Ye toh haad he hai! Ye Romi ko Ishita ke gusse se darr lagta hai! Sabko apni taraf kar liya! Jadoogar kahiki! Raman made a sulking face and moved to the stage.

He saw the whole family angrily stare at something behind him, curiously he turned back to see what was it.

He was furious to see Simmi walk in with Parmeet. Only smiling faces around where Param, Simmi and Shagun. Everyone apart from the family elders didn't share the fury with Raman as they weren't aware of the true colours of Parmeet. Simmi who was warned yet chose to support Param over her family.

Being on the stage and between the outsiders Raman could not say anything and let him enter.

"Ye yaha kya kar raha hai?" Mr. Bhalla spoke softly so that only the family members could hear.

"Patani, papaji? Kisne bulaya isse?" Romi said disapprovingly.

Toshiji shook her head, "Isme na pata hone wali ki gal hai? Simmi ne bulaya hai iss khote nu!" (I'm bad at hindi myself left it in class 6th. Thanks to daily soaps and bollywood movies still in touch with it! ;) So here is the Translation for my dear friend shifajoomun : There is nothing to think about it! Simmi has called this idiot!)

"Chalo ab Chado! Let's just start the game! Raman Bhai aap pareshaan mat ho! Bhabhi ke saath hum sab hai!" Mihir smiled at everyone.

"But where is akka?" Mihika asked surprised.

Just when Raman about go madly hunting for his wife he saw her climb the stage with Adi, Ruhi and Shravan. "Ye Bacche judge karenge! Jao Sharvu aur Ruhi Romi chachu se whistle le lo and Adi aap Simmi bua ko leke aao upar stage pe!" Ishita instructed her kids and passed an assuring smile to the family. Once the kids left, "Tension lene ki koi baat nahi hai!" she then turned to Raman, "I know Raman jab tak aap mere pass ho I'm safe. Wo Parmeet se pyaar karti hai, isley aise kar rahi hai lakin Simmi ko hum party ke baad samjhayenge!"

Raman's lips curved up in a smile. "You amaze me every time Ishita!"

"Of course! Akhir beti kiski hai!" Toshiji smiled.

"Meri!" Mrs. Iyer smiled.

"Thi! Lakin ab wo meri beti hai!" they both started bickering. Everyone left for the game while Raman and Ishita stood staring at their mothers. Then looked at each other and started laughing, "Humare he parents hai!" Raman shrugged his shoulders.

"Apke! Aap he crazy ho!" Ishita went off smiling.


NEXT PART NEXT PAGE

Raman Bhalla's team is no less...

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SS Raman's Realisation

Part 28

Raman Bhalla's team is no less...

Raman and Ishita stood there with their hands tied so did Mihir-Mihika, Vandita-Bala and Parmeet-Simmi.

"Hum reh gaye!" Mr. Tandon entered the hall with his wife and Trisha.

Mein bhi toh reh gaya! Romi murmured aloud making everyone laugh.

Mr. Tandon congratulated Mihir and Mihika further talked a little to Raman and Ishita and joined the game with Trisha and Neil after getting their hands tied.

Just as Romi was about to go play the music Ishita bunged up, "Aise acha nahi lagta ki jab sab youngsters hum sab part le rahe hai toh Romi ko bhi lena chahiye!"

"Wo toh thik hai puttar! Lakin..." Toshiji was interrupted by Ishita. "Fun ke liye he sahi Sarika aur Romi khel lo!" before anyone could say anything she added, "Mujhe acha lagega!" There goes Ishita's Bhramastra! (For all those who don't know in short it is Mythological powerful weapon that can never fail the target)

After getting the hands tied as Romi went past Ishita and Raman, "Thank you sooo much bhabhi! You are the best. Love you! Aap toh meri life set karke he manogi!"

"Blind nahi hu Romi meine dekha hai tum dono ko saath! Ache lagte ho! Aur phir tumhari ankhe bhi padhe hai!" Ishita smiled at Romi.

"Uski ankhe padhi?" Romi asked curiously.

"Wo mein nahi batongi" She paused then spoke loudly, "Ab jao jaldi karo!"

Raman stared at Ishita, "Ye kya tha? Tumhe kaise pata chala? Sarika aur Romi?"

"Haan. Meine dono ki ankhe padhi! Lagta hai ab sirf families ko beech mein bolna bacha hai! Mujhe lagta hai iss shaadi ke baad humme Sarika ki mom se baat karni chahiye!" Ishita told Raman.

He stared at her blankly, "Mujhe pasand nahi aaraha kit um mujhse zayada smart ho rahi ho!"

"Mein smart hu apse zayada!" Ishita spoke firmly.

They started the game.

There was hook hanging and apples were kept tied to the string on end while the other had a loop to hang on that hook.

One couple played at a time.

Ruhi and Shravan stood as judges while Adi swung the apple string for each couple.

I will be writing it in the form of scenes. Each scene will be complete i.e till anyone of them wins or both loose. 😊

Mihir-Mihika

Both were too shy to begin the attempts. Mihika was first one to attempt. She tried for the first time but failed and apple flung into the air more. Mihir taking note of the time each swing takes tried to reach the apple and surprisingly he did, but couldn't bite off it. Seeing this Mihika smartly waited for Mihir to attempt next time and bit of the apple taking his support. Ruhi blew the whistle for them. "Chitti won!" as others clapped. Mihika gave a winning look to Mihir he just shook his head.

Muhe pata hai saari zindigi yahi jeetegi! He thought.

Mujhe paata hai mihir saari zindigi mujhe jeetne mein tum aise he help karoge! She thought.

(Translation:

Mihir thought, I know she'll win every time in future!

Mihika thought, I know Mihir you will help me always to win like this.)

Bala-Vandita

"I don't want history to repeat!" Vandita smiled.

"I wanted history to repeat but I can't risk my kid's life!" Bala confessed softly and could bite off the apple in first attempt while Vandita stood mesmerised by that love-filled confession.

"Ye! Papa won!" Shravan whistled.

"I guess experience counts!" He laughed, so did others.

Romi- Sarika

Sarika was too shy to even try an attempt while Romi was blushing seeing her blush. "Agar aap issi tarah se sharmate rahoge jee toh saari zindigi mein he raaj karunga!" Romi smiled.

"Mein aisa hone nahi dungi!" Sarika smiled sarcastically and went on her toes to attempt to take a bite. Before she could she got unbalanced and slipped. Romi tried to support her but slipped with her on top.

"Everything is cool if you are going to rule my life. Because you already rule my heart." Sarika blushed at that.

"In that case we can rule together, because you rule my heart too, Romi" Sarika and Romi shared a brief eye lock until Ruhi whistled and Adi spoke, "Disqualified! Neither of you two won!" everyone laughed again while the couple dug holes on the stage with their eyes.

Parmeet-Simmi (Do read it, my favourite!)😆

Parmeet stood there staring at Ishita and Raman when Simmi tried to bit off the apple. First time, she missed it closely. Next time she could touch the apple but it flung more into the air in opposite direction hitting on Param's nose.

"Meinu maaf kardijiye ji! Galti ho gayi!" Simmi rushed to Parmeet who sat on the ground with the pain.

Everybody laughed loudly. Especially, Raman, he did a happy dance in his head.

Neil-Trisha

Trisha being excited as always jumped to reach the apple before Neil could even react he was pushed to the ground. Actually Trisha in her excitement had pushed the apple and it was about to hit him.

"Ouch!" he cried.

"Sorry wo tumhe apple lag jata, isley push kiya!" Trisha worriedly helped him get up.

"Awww so sweet!" Ishita smiled.

"But disqualified, Sorry!" Adi spoke.

Jaha ma ne bol diya sweet waha Sorry? Romi aur Sarika ko toh judge ki tarah order suna tha... None of you one! Raman mimicked Adi in his head.

"Laga toh nahi, puttar?" Mr. Bhala asked.

"Nahi Nahi mein thik hu! Thank you, Trisha!" Neil smiled at her lovingly.

Mr. and Mrs. Tandon (I hope you laugh at this!)

They hit at the apple together throwing it to their right where Parmeet sat, hitting him on his forehead this time.

Mr. and Mrs. Tandon rushed to help him so did Simmi while everyone else laughed again.

Most awaited our Ishra

(This is of course in more detail! Not my fault now!)

As they walked Raman gazing at Ishita passionately making her all the more nervous and he liked that.

Ishita was feeling very nervous. Ye Raman agar mujhe aise ghoorte rahe toh mein kaise kuch karoongi?

Like reading her thoughts Raman asked her in a very soft whisper, "Kyu yahi sabke samne kuch karne ka irada hai kya?"

She hit him on his hand, "Raman!"

"Mujhe pata hai mera naam Raman hai!" His lips curved up in a smile as he stood in front of Ishita to start the game.

"I'm with you ma!" Adi supported his mother. Shagun cringed at the sight, but as if anyone cared.

"Mein papa ke side!" Ruhi supported her father.

"Thank god! Meri team three versus one nahi this iss bari!" Raman laughed and other joined him!

"Waise bhi Ishita tum harogi!" Raman spoke with finality in his voice.

"Oh! right! Sapne se bahar aaiye! Sirf bolne se nahi jeet te!" Ishita said in full JKR mode.

Ruhi whistled for the start like always.

Ishita and Raman both moved closer together. They looked into each other's eyes and coincidently both attempted together and due to the intensity both unbalanced and fell with Ishita on Raman.

Everyone laughed unaware of the intensity they both shared due to the sudden fall neither of the two could react and they still held apple between their faces.

Acha hua apple thoda bada tha! Ishita's stomach was churning as she could feel Raman's breath fan against her face.

Ye Ishita ko saree kyu pehnai! Pehle toh sirf thoughts haunt kar rahe the ab ye feel bhi karegi haunt! Raman thought shutting his eyes to look sober.

They both were lost in each other's eyes and thoughts until Adi and Ruhi ran to them.

"Are you ohk mom?" Adi asked worriedly.

"Ishima apko lagi toh nahi?" Ruhi asked worriedly too. Raman stared at his kids as he put away the apple and helped Ishita to get up with him as the whole family came forward.

"Haan mein thik hu!" Ishita smiled at her kids.

"Wow! Ye achi baat hai! Giri mujhe pe thi tumhari Ishima mujhse toh poocho!" Raman said irritated.

"It's ohk dad! Aap thik he honge! Aap strong hai, Humme mom ki chinta hai!" Adi frowned.

"Aap strong boy ho na, isley hum worried hai Ishima ke liye!" Ruhi supported her brother.

Everyone in the family laughed as the kids took their Ishima to the nearest chair. Ishita gave a winning smile to Raman as he glared back at her.

"Aree Raman Puttar teri team one versus three he hai!" Toshiji laughed with others.

"Faltu hanso mat aap sab! Tujhe toh mein dekh longa, Mihir! Shaadi toh ho he gayi na tere! I won't leave you too Romi!" Raman said as he walked off smiling.

Meri team one versus three nahi hai! Mein ussi team mein hu jaha meri biwi bacche hai!


NEXT PART-

Raman Kumar Bhalla kissika deewana na hota, biwi!



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Edited by SnigdhaGautam - 11 years ago
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thanks😊
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Originally posted by: ishra123

thank u for such a lovely update.

Awww thank you
ur ss r awsome. ye! you too.
as u know ki pechale kuch dino se yhm bor ho raha tha but because of u kuch dil ko dilasa mil raha tha.
update fast conti. Done! updated three parts😉

plz LOVELY. I M SO MUCH THANKFUL 2 U I'n thankful to u too

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wow all d strys in 1pg. I hv bookmarked n Read whenvr i want..😃 Once again.. ur wrtng s so unique n beautiful..Keep doing🤗 Regards PrateeK😉
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Originally posted by: avni_19

wowww... lovedd ittt.. soo awesumm.. naughtyyy ramannn!! lol poor ishuu. lol

keepp continuinggg.. eager to read the next update!


thank you so much i'm glad you liked it sooo uch! yup our naughty raman, actually mera deemmag kharab hai! 😉
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Originally posted by: chinudolly.yhm

~~ i UNRESERVED MY COMMENT ON PAGE 87 FOR CH-21
PLZ CHECK
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NOW FOR CH-22
soo romantic 😳
u always make me shy to read those killing romantic parts 😳
they r so lovely Yuppie! I wonder how I manage writing those!
ishita mana rahi hai raman ko hehe Mana bhi liya!
and raman beta trying hard to control his desires 😆 hahaha bechara raman, paer par kulhadi!
faking anger for honeymoon 😳😳😳awwwiieee kuch toh haath lage uske biwi ya honeymoon!
wow ishita planned for their honeymoon
nice plan rkb .. ravan kumar bhalla 😛😛 tumne aakhir jhansi ki raani ... ko jhansi ki romantic rani bana he diya .. YO!😆
she slept hugging him and kissed him in morning .. bechara cursing that he couldnt get lip kiss coz of his own mistake 😆 Silly kisne bola tha zayada nakhre karne ko!🤣
aww n their dori romance n kiss nice loved that part
great going 😉
lovely chapter THANK YOUUU SOOO MUCH!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING SUCH PRETTY COMMNETS!
continue soon
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res 😛😛😛 for ch-23
will unres later
tired now 😳
actually couldnt stop myself from reading it HAHAHAHA so sweet of you!
oh my god
it was freaking hot n romantic '
☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
☺️ my heart beats r running fast wid this hot romance hahahaha😳
cant write more
loved it 😳😳😳
sarri ke pallu ne kamal kiya re .. dono ka romance phir start kiya re
raman n ishu to kho he gaye re .. romi ne aake dono ko shock kiya re
hahaha


OMG THIS IS SOOO GOOD!

(aur mera read karna mushkil kiya re 😛😛😛 as it was freaking hot re , mujhe bhi apne saath shy kiya re 😆😆😆)

hahaah you are soo cute :)
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finally read it all .. loved this story so very much
plz now update soon or else be ready to get irritated by me 😛😛
update soon n pm me
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reply to ur reply dear
aww u r most welcome ..
u truly deserve that appreciation for ur great work
n i edited my reply in red
really loved ur story so very much
update soon plz
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aww i also loved it so much
but was feeling quite shy to read 😳
really very hot n romantic na thats why 😛😛😛 but still super duper awesome tha
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aww i completed read n commented for the rest of d chapters above in this post
sorry cant comment more being a newbie thats why commenting all in this only
aw u r most welcome dear
and now m eagerly waiting to read further
plz update soon n pm me
tc 😊



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Originally posted by: Gulabo12345

Hey When will u update 23b its already midnight

Originally posted by: Gulabo12345

Hey so the timing of updating 24 prt is?



Sorry for being late updated!
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THank you sooo much!
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Originally posted by: ABBY92

Lol, poor Raman had to control himself by the end of it and I love how even without trying, Ishita accidentally seduces Raman. HAhaha humari Innocent IShu!

Romi was hilarious as well. HAHAHAHA Romesh Chandra BHalla


Originally posted by: ABBY92

Are Wah, the madrasi game sounds fun. Can't wait to see how Raman and Ishita will play that game and Love Romi for making it happen since he loves his Bhaiya and Bhabhi so much !! MY DREAM!


Originally posted by: ABBY92

I just love possessive Raman even though he gets crazy at times I'm crazy! Super crazy! but it's sweet how he still went and told Ishita she can talk to Subbu if she wants to. And Ishita saying that she was never Subbu's and she has only learnt real love from Raman, that was the best part !!

Thank you sooo much! I'm glad you liked that part!

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