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Mohini Singh Narayan

@MSN_Vanny

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

OH.MY.GOD Aani! 😲 😲

You wrote this soo well! When I read the second quote, I was like. "Where is Aani going with this? 😲" By the time I reached the cold shower, I was literally blushing. ☺️ And when I read the *ahem ahem* part, I was thanking God for reading this in privacy! 🤣

But seriously, emotions (LMAO) aside, this was fantastic! I loved the way you addressed this natural issue. As much as we go on loving the intense passion between them and the (un)seen frustration, relief is necessary as well. 😛

The cherry on top was Ishita having the same dream after their encounter! 😉 And once again, so natural! I loved the way she connected the dots and not just assume he was "hot". 😆

I think if I say more, I will royally embarrass myself, so I'll stop. 🤣

Awesome stuff and I'm happy to be reading your work once again! 👏

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

You have a lovely blend of sensuality, romance and depth in your OS. I really liked how you explained Raman's turmoil in the middle of the night and the end to have Ishita actually going through what Raman went through was perfect !!

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RamonaG

@RamonaG

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

beautifully written Aani 👍🏼👏

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_Sapphire_

@_Sapphire_

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Just to let you know that I have updated my post in page 1 😊

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

First off Aani, the OS turned out to be totally unexpected. Let me recap my journey through the story. I first read your note where you mentioned the accident track. now in my hurry to start reading, I didn't pay attention to the complete sentence and assumed the track inspired you. I was ready for Raman's or Ishita's feelings for each other during that period of how much the other means to them. I straight away went to the story and read Raman was sweating and thought he was probably having a nightmare. But his shower confused me. As far as my reading experience goes night showers meant only one thing. which brings me to the sentence of the story and the paragraph that followed.

He takes himself in hand and lets out a groan

I was giggling like a teenager throughout.😆 There were 2 things that you wrote about. The thing the sentence implies and the type of dream he had.😉😆. To think that Raman Kumar Bhalla would be reduced to such a state was so amusing.

I loved the kitchen platform scene. It was so exciting to read. I can imagine how awesome it would be if such a scene actually happens in the show. I also loved how Ishita completed the scene in her dream. Aag toh donon taraf lagi hain!😉

Analysing the way Raman reacts to Ishita it is very obvious that he is falling, if not already, for her hard. The feelings he has for her are beyond description because they are many and have multiple angles. I just can't get enough of reading about them.

Sorry if I bored you with this but your stories always take me on a roller coaster ride and I can't rest till I have let it all out.😳

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Colt.Pixy

@Colt.Pixy

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

edited on page 2 😈

Edited by ZenerDiode - 11 years ago

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

fantastic os
confession: i tend to skim over self thoughts usually. but here i loved it!
raman's thoughts were on mark especially the difference between the two marriages- one starting out passionate and ending with pain while other starting out with dislike and moving towards love
really really well written 👏

btw, do you pm?

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Elita

@Elita

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Wow...amazing. Raman's turmoil was highlighted just brilliantly. Loved it 👍🏼

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Bulbul

@Bul3

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

brilliant is the word!!wow..totally bowled over by your writing..went into a different land altogether!!..amazing OS dear👏⭐️

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Ram-an-tic.Moi

@Ram-an-tic.Moi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Wow!

I wouldn't even dare to give my two cents on the content of the OS because i'm sure my words would ever be able to do justice to this beautiful piece by you! Aani, this is one of the finest writings i have ever read!

Super-duper-awesome! :)

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