Sturm und Drang - An IshRa OS - Page 2

MIND BLOWINGLY awesome yaar!!!!!! u made me cherish ol the encounters they had in the show.. lovely :)

That was beautiful. Loved every bit of it.The way you used the current scenarios being portrayed in the show , it was mind blowing. I mean wow, you're an exceptional writer. Keep up the good work. ! :D :D :D

First of all, I am so happy to see an OS from you after two weeks i guess...

You write so B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L-L-Y ..such a pleasure to read ...

Awesome work...loved it !!!

Res

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Hey Aani

Welcome back to your muse! In a perverse way, I am glad I wasnt the only one suffering. I have written one para each of 2 stories, but cant find more inspriration. and for practical reasons, i cannot 'guess' the end of the accident mystery, if I want to base my story in the current track. So I just stopped writing.

anyway, you are back 😊

So, this is the second time you have touched upon a delicate aspect of Raman's desires. The first one was a more practical problem (which triggerred a discussion between us about how the show should also address it, about how a man could have stayed celibate for so long) and now this one (i think you know which line I am talking about). Those are the real real-life things that won't be shown for obvious reasons, but I am glad you wrote about them.

Now that I said that 😉 lets come back to the rest of it. WOW, so in your writing you have taken them to a place where BOTH of them are aware of their own desires, and the effect the other person is having on them. Honestly Aani, I cannot wait for this to be show in the serial. It would provide SO MUCH entertainment for us fans.

You have beautifully integrated the EV promotions, the dialogues from the episodes and obviously the 'inner' thoughts of both of them. Sid is her friend 😛 you know how much I like that premise 😉

I like this Raman. Something has woken up inside him, but he is not sure if he is allowed to act on it. I can see his self-control vanishing, and I can see his fear slowly disappearing. and I can see KP enact this Raman perfectly!

Here goes a quote for you 😃

"Sometimes I think the difference between what we want and what we're afraid of is about the width of an eyelash." - Jay McInerney

beautiful one-shot..nice..😊

hi dear 😊
(sigh) ... gosh this was so passionate ☺️
brilliantly written👏
loved it😳

Aani , I am grinning like crazy over here. Needless to say you are awesome.

read it but saving for comments :D

You have a blessing from above to write my dear .. This was one of your best . I read it maybe 3 times now and still not tired nor bored . I cant fathom out who will confess out of these 2 because they are very strong personalities or would there be a confession because this is a mature kinda love story so they may show us in a very un expected very unusual way ...I wonder ..lets see