Hey there! I have been meaning to comment sooner but didn't get the time. Yet, today I just had to comment since I read all the three parts in one go. And I have to say this it is freaking amazing. Literally. One of the things that makes this an awesome story is that you add so much detail to everything you write. It is easier to imagine the whole scenario like that. The first part, beginning was beautiful with Raman being in Banglore and Ishita in Delhi. I guess that whole "Mobile romance" as you called it 😆 symbolized that Khabhi khabi dooriyan zaroori hoti hai nazdeekiyon ka ehsaas hone ki liye. And that is exactly what happened with both of them. They were missing each other. And that sweet gesture from Ishita, wishing Raman Happy Father's day on behalf of Ruhi that too on midnight. It was really cute. And just as he comes home there eyes meet and there have been a thousand words spoken about how they have missed each other. They always amaze me with their...well gestures and basically everything. Who would have thought these two broken souls would find each other. But they have truely completed each other. 😳 Even though it may not be love yet but still it is...something.
That little initamte moment in the beginning of part 2. Wow...it really was intimate. Raman sher to Ishita sawa sher. I loved how she crossed the "beyond dangerous" limit of being close. Very Jhansi ki rani moment of hers. Haha. And she yet again left Raman speechless. 😉 Now that is a true quality of being a Khansi ki Rani. Lol
Looks like ye kacha app ab sach mein pakne laga hai. Cause apparantely he found staring at his beautiful wife's face more interesting than watching cricket. Pinch me someone! 😲 Am I dreaming? But seriously I could totally imagine him staring at her the whole night without flinching. But it was romantic.
And he could see that she was having a night mare. I loved how he just held her hand to relax her and urge her to sleep peacefully again. It was indeed a nice gesture, considering him being an husband, He really did care for her.
And the third part was equally amazing as the two before it. He called her for lunch at the coffee shop. Now that is unlike Ravan Kumar! 😆 But I guess this was Mr.Raman Kumar Bhalla speaking who is the husband of Mrs.Ishita Kumar Bhalla. Again this shows he cares for her deeply. I love Ishita's excitement to meet him. It was really cute to read about. Well she is a girl afterall. She's got to look good when she is meeting her man.
I loved how you described every inch of Raman's office. It seriously made it easier to imagine the setting. And he has a picture of RUhi and Ishita! Wow,,,,no wonder the whole office knows. And he has a picture of Adi. That surely is a caring father and a husband.
Hmm...Fumbling to start the conversation is he now...But he comes straight to the point. I like that about him. 😳 Woho! He has told Ishita to sleep with him on the same bed!! Yup I must be dreaming...But dream or no dream! This is definitely....something.
This is an amazing piece of work so far. I mean it's just fantabulously amazing with each detail you write. I am really looking forward to the next parts to this.
Please do update it soon. and PM me if you can. Please!
Love,
Nabi
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