[IshRa SS]Full Circle: Chapter 4 - Page 23 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Live-life

Hey there! Hey! *waves* I have been meaning to comment sooner but didn't get the time. That's fine. Please don't feel pressured into commenting. 😳Yet, today I just had to comment since I read all the three parts in one go. Oh wow! Hope you didn't get bored! 😆And I have to say this it is freaking amazing. Thank you so much dear! 😳Literally. One of the things that makes this an awesome story is that you add so much detail to everything you write. It is easier to imagine the whole scenario like that. Thankfully, all the details I added help you. *Job accomplished! 😎*

The first part, beginning was beautiful with Raman being in Banglore and Ishita in Delhi. I guess that whole "Mobile romance" as you called it 😆 symbolized that Khabhi khabi dooriyan zaroori hoti hai nazdeekiyon ka ehsaas hone ki liye. Exactly! We oftentimes don't realise how much that person means to us until we're not physically there. And that is exactly what happened with both of them. They were missing each other. And that sweet gesture from Ishita, wishing Raman Happy Father's day on behalf of Ruhi that too on midnight. Aww. That was actually something I did in real for someone's birthday and the idea sorta stemmed from there. 😳 It was really cute. And just as he comes home there eyes meet and there have been a thousand words spoken about how they have missed each other. They always amaze me with their...well gestures and basically everything. Ahhh yes! IshRa is a unique couple that requires unique stuff to bring them closer! 😉 Who would have thought these two broken souls would find each other. Full Circle! 😛 😆But they have truely completed each other. 😳 Even though it may not be love yet but still it is...something. Something is better than nothing! 😉 But worry not, that something will soon turn into a bigger something! 😆

That little initamte moment in the beginning of part 2. Wow...it really was intimate. Woah! You're the first to describe it as intimate! 👏 You've observe the subtle-ness of the scene! Raman sher to Ishita sawa sher. I loved how she crossed the "beyond dangerous" limit of being close. Haha! I love bold women. 😉Very Jhansi ki rani moment of hers. Haha. And she yet again left Raman speechless. 😉 Now that is a true quality of being a Khansi ki Rani. Lol. Exactly! She will give Raman a run for his money! 🤣

Looks like ye kacha app ab sach mein pakne laga hai. Definitely! 😛Cause apparantely he found staring at his beautiful wife's face more interesting than watching cricket. Pinch me someone! 😲 *pinch* You there? Yeps, that totally happened! 😉Am I dreaming? Wait, are you dreaming? I think not. 😆But seriously I could totally imagine him staring at her the whole night without flinching. But it was romantic. Even I can imagine that. Especially now that in the show Ishu may ignore him, seeing him stare at her whilst she is clueless would be a cherry on top.

And he could see that she was having a night mare. I loved how he just held her hand to relax her and urge her to sleep peacefully again. It was indeed a nice gesture, considering him being an husband, He really did care for her. Yes, Raman is very caring. He just chooses different ways of showing in. But since this is a fiction of the bigger fiction, why not make his actions a bit more "cute"? 😉

And the third part was equally amazing as the two before it. Aww. You're too kind! He called her for lunch at the coffee shop. Now that is unlike Ravan Kumar! 😆 Like I said, let's have him a bit more cute! 😆 But I guess this was Mr.Raman Kumar Bhalla speaking who is the husband of Mrs.Ishita Kumar Bhalla. Hmm. That is true. There are many facets to the man and this may very well happen in the show as well. Again this shows he cares for her deeply. I love Ishita's excitement to meet him. It was really cute to read about. Well she is a girl afterall. She's got to look good when she is meeting her man. Oh man! You totally understood what I was trying to hint! 👏 Even after being married, a woman takes care of herself just to impress her husband and Ishita is no less. Even if theirs is a different relationship, he is her husband after all and she reflects him as he her.

I loved how you described every inch of Raman's office. It seriously made it easier to imagine the setting. Oh! That setting came naturally with Raman's personality! And he has a picture of RUhi and Ishita! Wow,,,,no wonder the whole office knows. LOL! Raman is not so secretive of his beautiful wife eh? 😉And he has a picture of Adi. That surely is a caring father and a husband. Yes, he is Raman's blood even if we wnat to ignore it. And as a father, I don't think the Raman in the show would totally boycott Adi, so I don't want to portray that in my story either.

Hmm...Fumbling to start the conversation is he now...Oh yeah! 😛 Who knows if the fumbling is because Ishita was looking so good? 😉 😆But he comes straight to the point. I like that about him. 😳 I honestly love straightforward people, so no beating around the bush here. 😳Woho! He has told Ishita to sleep with him on the same bed!! Yup I must be dreaming...But dream or no dream! This is definitely....something. Aahhh! We got to that bigger something, didn't we? 😉 Nahh, you aren't dreaming dear. 😉 *pinch again*

This is an amazing piece of work so far. You're spoiling me with the compliments now. 😆I mean it's just fantabulously amazing with each detail you write. OMG! 😲 There's more? 😆 I am really looking forward to the next parts to this. Aww. Thanks for the enthusiasm.

Please do update it soon. I will as soon as I can. and PM me if you can. Please! Sure, will do. I sent you a Friend Request.

Love,

Nabi

Originally posted by: Arooj.M

I've read every piece of fan fiction in this forum and I somehow managed to miss this piece of amazing work! How is that even possible?! I don't know. 😆I'm glad I found this...Thanks! 😳Now moving on to what I think of the updates-

Part 1 (Page 1):
Ooh I see some texting shexting going on. LMAO! They need to move with the times na? 😆 Raman lost his sleep really quickly on seeing Ishu's name on his mobile screen. Such a sweety! Ahh! You're the only one that picked up on that gesture! 😉 And he even asked how her day was, like he genuinely wanted to know! Aiye Haye... I see some love blossoming! Definitely! 😉 He's even smiling at his screen... OMG totally fangirling right now! Trust me, I was blushing whilst writing that! 😆And Ishita ka haal bhi kuch kam nahin hai. Exactly! Girl is beaming with happiness! 😉 Even she's smiling with pleasant surprise at her husband asking a normal question. But we all know that him asking how her day was is anything but normal in the lives of our IshRa! You know right! I attempted to hasten the pace at which they are falling in love and at the same time, kept the originality intact. 😳 I like their phone romances a lot! 😳 😳 It was super cute na? 😳They make me fall in love with IshRa more and more! Awww Ishita messaging Raman om behalf of Ruhi for father's day, even going as far as keeping him up till midnight to deliver the message! Indeed, it's a very cute gesture and it leaves a lasting impression. 😉 Trust me, it's a proven thing! 😆 I love how caring Ishu is, Raman is truly lucky to have her as his wife! The sooner Raman knows that, the better! 😡I'm picturing the scene of Raman's return to his house. I see him holding Ruhi in his arms, while Ishita stands with a big smile on her face watching them. Such a perfect family portrait! Someone take their nazar quick! 😆 Theirs is definitely a cute family and those scenes came naturally because it's something that is possible in the show.

Part 2 (Page 8):
Kya lajawab jawab diya Ishita ne apne Ravan Kumar ko! Bolti band kardi uski 😆 Bold Ishu! He forgot who he was taking panga with, she is after all his Jhansi Ki Rani! Raman blushing... Now that is something I really wanna see on the show! OMG!!! Me too! I'm sure Karan will make that scene sooo dreamy!!! And Raman ignoring cricket to watch Ishita sleep, this is like a measure of how much he loves her... Hmm. Good point! And his love for her must be pretty high if he's ignoring cricket to admire her beauty! You know right! 😈 And I love how Raman was her protector against the evil in her nightmares! Holding her hand and waiting for her to come back to a world of blissful dreams, such a sweet gesture! More than sweet, it's a natural gesture. Ishu doesn't often show her pain and we've all noticed that it makes him concerned when she is in physical pain. Remember that epic lift scene in the streets? 😉 And the ointment?

I also love how in the first chapter you had showed Raman looking at Ishita and realising her entry into his life had been his full circle and now in this chapter it's vice versa, Ishita looks at Raman and realises his entry has been her full circle. Title of the story! 😆 Glad I'm not straying from the original content. 😆 But on a serious note, that was the intention. 😊And now a coffee shop date... Their first date! Aaah! ❤️ I love the word "date". 😉

Part 3 (Page 15):
Hahaha OMG Ishita running around like a headless chicken! And then considering herself a true punjabi just because she referred to herself as a chicken 😆 too good! LMAO! Raman's constant one liners and jokes are slowly rubbing of on me. 😆 Now the coffee shop date has been shifted to Raman's office... I see some office romance coming my way 😉. I'm a sucker for office romance! 😆 A photo of Ishita (and of course Ruhi too) on Raman's desk. OMG he really loves her! Yesss!!! If only he'd admit it to himself! SMH! Men! So he's secretly clicking photos of her too! Such a Ramantic Kumar! LOL! Yes, secretly clicking pictures is a sure sign of love, isn't it? 😉 If only Ishu picked up on that! 😆 So Raman called her to his office to talk about her nightmare and his solution... OMG THE SOLUTION! THEY'RE GONNA SLEEP ON THE SAME BED! HAHA! My reaction exactly when I wrote that! I think, the people would go crazy at this. 😆

PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I WANNA SEE SOME ISHRA CUDDLING. OMG! Cuddling would surely happen! Poor Ishu will have more nightmares for that to happen, but we want the cuddling! 😉YOU CANNOT LEAVE ME HANGING AT SUCH A CRUCIAL POINT! Haha! So dramatic! But me likes. 😆
PM me when you next update please 😳 I sure will. Just accept the Friend Request. It makes the PMing job easier! 😳

Originally posted by: rev4eva

Another awesome update.

Liked how you linked their office interior to their personality and Raman having a framed pic of Ruhi & Ishu was really sweet... Looks like Ishu has not only made her place in his heart but also in his office.

Can't wait for the next update, esp after the last sentence Raman uttered in your update... Can't wait to read Ishu's reaction to that.

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Hey Vanny I am so sorry I didnt realize you write too Hey! It's all good in the hood! 😊 but I am so glad that I came across this fic I am so lazy when it comes to surfing pages, Haha! I know what you mean. anyways leaving aside the rambling - like I said this is such an amazing SS Thank you. 😳 and I read all the three chapters posted so far and have loved it. Aww. 😳

I am particularly so revved up about this one because you are tackling the sensitive issue of Ishita suffering from PTSD in this one. Yes. Actually, when I wrote chapter one, this was going to be a cute and romantic SS. But whilst writing chapter two, only then had I decided that I wanted to use the nightmare routine. A concept on which I had written an OS myself, albeit it was in a different space. I remember, I have read it. 😃Raman could have been shown as such an understanding, sensitive husband and their relationship could have gained a new depth had the show explored this concept. Tell me about it! I hated the fact that this issue was just brushed aside. SMH. Alas our wishes are in vain, so to read an SS on the concept is an absolute delight. LMAO.

I am glad Eris pushed you into posting this cos it would have been our loss and I hope you send me a PM if you do to others on the next update. 😳 Lol! Eris has ulterior motives! 😡 😆 But yeah, thanks alot once again for gracing this SS with your presence. Sure, I will PM you. 😊

Originally posted by: kashishrocks

Omg baby, from where u write so deeply. U are so thoughtful.This is the best chapter i feel among all three. I am waiting for your next update.

Originally posted by: aniiee

Omg Vannyy!! Such a beautiful piece of writing. Really loved this ss of yrs. i love the way you hav let out Raman understanding Ishu. Continue soon!❤️


Ani

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

edited on pg 16 :p