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Posted: 11 years ago

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pomegranate

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Posted: 11 years ago

nope. it was not corny or over the top, it was actually very romantic and bittersweet. I love how you portrayed the innocence of first love through your words. Beautifully written, however there may be some missing words here and there. editing error perhaps?

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was beautifully written n not all corny, can't wait for the update..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pomegranate

nope. it was not corny or over the top, it was actually very romantic and bittersweet. I love how you portrayed the innocence of first love through your words. Beautifully written, however there may be some missing words here and there. editing error perhaps?

thank you😳 and I have not proof read this. I posted the first draft as it was, lazy ass that I am😭 I'll read it and do the edits😳