ISHRA snippets: Ishq ki Saazishein-Pg 75 Completed - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww loved it ..
Subbhu n pervy???

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awesome and amazing updates di...
written it so well...👏👏👏👏👏👏.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Baby
Very nice ...
Please do Pm me ..
I loved to read it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i read both parts nice story update 3rd part
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The recent episodes have led me to write this...hope all YHMians like it...translations in []...If there are errors, pls excuse them...

thanks to all who liked and commented...ur comments really mean a lot...thanks a ton

Part 3:

Raman had to leave for Chandigarh due to some emergency in his work, all due to the evil plans of Ashok and Param. Raman's absence has indeed left Ishita in a rather lost mood but she doesn't leave any stone unturned for making the day special for Simi and her baby. She is on her toes and does all preparations required for the function. There was no flaw anything and Raman's parents are really happy and impressed but Simi wasn't leaving any chance of taunting her. Ishita ignored everything and happily running about to make everything perfect.

She had invited Subbu and her mom too. All guests were present.

[All the instances similar to the show happens and soon, all were busily chatting away]

Subbu's eyes were darting behind Ishita as she hurried here and there. Param didn't miss the look on Subbu's face and he also saw the object of his interest which was the much needed trigger for Param. He came to Subbu cooking up a devilish plan to tease him with Ishita's name.

"afsos ho raha hai, haan?"

[Do you regret now?]

Param's voice snapped Subbu out of his thoughts. He felt a little embarrassed as if caught off guard. He looked at Param enquiringly. He had understood who Param was but he had no idea of his issues with Raman and Ishita. So he smiled out of courtesy knowing that Param was Raman's sister's husband. He replied, "ji? Main kuch samjha nahi"

[I didn't understand]

Param let a smirk which Subbu couldn't understand and then explained, "Ishita jaisi ladki ko haath se jaane diya na?"

[You let go of a girl like Ishita, na?]

Now Subbu felt a little weird and annoyed at Param's intruding conversation. He kept silent and showed his disinterest in continuing the talk. But Subbu's mother came in hearing Param's comment and she wasn't the one to let go of a chance. She came in between, "yeh chamak dhamak toh shaadi ke ek dho saal mein khatam...phir baccha hi zaroori ho jaatha hai...jahaan baccha na ho wahaan pyar khatam, shaadi khatam..."

[All this beauty is just for 1 or 2 years into marriage...then its all about a baby...when there is no baby, the relationship ends...]

She sternly said that out and in a voice that was audible to Ishita in bits and pieces. She didn't want to eavesdrop yet she stopped hearing that. Param had noticed her and his filthy gaze scanned her head to toe and he replied, "chalo accha hi hai... Subbu ne choda toh saale saab ke nazeeb khul gaya..."

[its good anyways...Subbu left her and that turned up lucky for my brother-in-law]

Subbu's mother sarcastically commented and this time her eyes fell on Ishita, "nazeeb aur badnazeeb toh waqt hi bathaayega..."

[Luck or ill luck will be decided by time only]

At that, she dragged Simi who was passing by into the conversation, "kyun simi...ek baat bolo...agar Ruhi ki baat na hoti toh kya aap log Raman ke shaadi Ishita jaisi ladki se karthe??"

[tell me something Simi...if it was not for Ruhi, would you marry off Raman to a girl like Ishita...]

Simi had her chance to hurt and insult Ishita too. She frowned as if they were unfortunate to have her and replied, "yeh bhi koyi poochne waali baat hai aunty ji...bhai ko na main acche se acche ladkiyon ki line lagwaa dehti..."

[is this a question Aunty? I would have lined up best of girls for bhai]

"Tumse khud ka ek pati nahi sambalthi, tu kya khaas mere shaadi karwaathi??"

[You can't even handle your husband...then how do you plan a marriage?]

Raman's thundering voice broke their unwarranted conversation or rather gossip about his wife Ishita.

All turned to him while he looked at his wife whose eyes were filled up by now. He wanted to blast off all their heads for having given tears to her but Ishita was quick to understand that things could get out of place now. She quickly turned away to wipe the tears and brought an instant smile to her face. Before Raman or anyone else could start another brawl, she quickly walked to Raman, "aap aa gaye...mujhe patha tha ke aap kuch bhi karke aa jaayenge...chaliye I need some help..."

[You have come Raman...I knew you would come somehow...come I need some help]

Raman wasn't moving from there and so Ishita dragged him away with her eyes pleading him to let go. She didn't want things to get ugly and mess up the serene function of the baby. Raman couldn't argue further on that and went away with her.

The day just passed in a blur. It was quite late when Raman came to his room after settling the bills of the hall decorators and the caterers. Ruhi had dozed off early on her dadi's lap in their room. Ishita stood by the window, her mind replaying all that had happened during the day. Though she had asked Raman to let go and also told him to relax and that she hadn't taken it to heart, it wasn't easy for her to forget it.

The worst reality of her life was again brought face to face with her. She had learnt to come in terms with it and also started feeling like a mother because of Ruhi's presence in her life but today, it all came back to her in the worst manner. She realized no matter what, she would be termed an incomplete woman, a misfit for married life etc etc. It was a permanent stamp, a scar on her which she can never ever erase. She will be reminded of it however hard she tries to get over and forget it.

She didn't stop the tears now as there were no spectators to it. She could cry out all her heart and then fill herself with emptiness with which she could literally move on as if nothing happened. Wasn't she used to it by now? Insults, words of hatred and hurt weren't new to her. She had become immune to all such things. "Thick skinned!" She let a weak sarcastic laugh at her own life.

Raman, on the other hand hadn't gotten over any of it either. He had controlled himself just because Ishita didn't want a fight there. He knew how hurt his wife was. He had seen those tears which she had hidden from all as soon as he came. He wanted to erase of all those things which gave her tears. He wanted to embrace her and give her the much needed support and tell her that everything is fine. He wanted to tell her that he was with her always at every step.

He saw her at the window sill and walked to her first even before he changed his clothes. He stood beside her in silence for a minute before voicing, "Why did you stop me? Main unn sab ko mooh thod jawaab dehta...usske baadh kuch kehne ki himmat nahi hoti"

[I would have given them a befitting reply and they would never again speak like that]

She let a sad chuckle, "usse kya hota??...sacchayi toh kabhi nahi badhlegi na? Chaah kar bhi main woh khushiyaan nahi deh sakthi aur yeh meri life ki sacchayi hai jo maine accept karliya hai Raman...aur ab majhbhoori mein hi sahi parr aap sabko bhi accept karna padh raha hai..."

[Whats the use? We can't change the reality...even if I wish, I can't give anyone such happiness...I have accepted this reality and now in compulsion, all of you have to accept it too..]

Raman was really annoyed with those words as he felt that she alienated herself from him. He could sense the self pity she was throwing upon herself and trying to say that she wasn't worthy of him.

He looked away sarcastically voicing, "khud ko koyi Mahatma se kam nahi samajhti bewakoof aurat"

[she assumes herself as Mahatma, foolish woman]

She couldn't help a smile at that taunt and that smile was genuine. She thought to herself that even in his taunts, he had the ability to make her smile and bring her out of any pain and hurting thoughts. Only her Raavan Kumar had that talent in him!

He continued in the same tone but to assure her that he wasn't with her due to any compulsion, "aur ek baat...I knew everything before marrying you...koyi majhbhoori nahi tha...samjhe tum?"

[one more thing... I knew everything before marrying you...there was no compusion...understand?]

She was silent he went on wiping away her tears with his thumb, "ab yeh rona dona bandh...I have to sleep and I know you are tired too...jaao chup chaap so jao..."

[Now stop all those tears... I have to sleep and I know you are tired too...go and sleep]

His thumb lingered for a little longer on her cheeks and then he moved them away reluctantly. He snapped out to walk to the washroom when she called him back, "Raman..."

He looked at her wondering what it was now. She voiced, "humne yeh shaadi sirf Ruhi keliye kiya tha...Kya ek pal keliye bhi aapko afsos nahi hota...mera matlab..."

[We got married just for Ruhi...haven't you ever regretted this decision? I mean...]

He snapped her curtly, "tumaara matlab main samajh gaya...nahi...mujhe aisa koyi afsos nahi hai...parr haan dheere dheere ek alag afsos zaroor hone laga hai..."

[I understand all your meanings...The answer is No...I don't regret it but yes, slowly, I have started regretting something else]

She enquiringly looked at him and he added naughtily, "afsos hai ke maine sirf Ruhi keliye clause add karke tumse shaadi karli..."

[I regret that I married you adding the clause just for Ruhi']

She didn't know if he meant what she understood of it and probed, "matlab?"

[meaning?]

He didn't explain but taunted again, "dekha isiliye mujhe humesha shaq hai ke tum sacch mein doctor ho ya nahi...itni seedhi si baat tumaari dimaag ke andar nahi gusthi..."

[This is why I always doubt your degree...your brain doesn't understand even this simple matter.]

He didn't wait for her response but just walked away. She grinned and her eyes were fixed on his retreating back. Even his taunts seemed sweet and cute to her now. She voiced that out unknowingly but regretted instantly because he heard it. He stopped at the door and turned back to wink at her. Her cheeks had already turned beetroot red. It was indeed her Raavan Kumar's effect on her!

Beraang Si Hai Padi Zindagi
Kuch Rang To Bharu
Mein Appni Tanhai Ke Vaste Abb Kuch To Karu

Jab Mile Thodhi Fursat
Khud Se Karle Mohabbat
Hai Tujhe Bhi Izaazat
Karle Tu Bhi Mohabbat

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How was it? pls do reply...

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Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can i use a tamil word...its aiyyo this was sooo sweet

Yes yes i just love the way raman replied back to simi...go raman go 😎

Just hate them all to always hate ishita...but somehow thank you too becuase we got to see such a beautiful relationship between ishra 😛 😛

I jsut looove it..thank you soo sooo much di 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thats really a sweet update
Cheers!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PoohLover

Can i use a tamil word...its aiyyo this was sooo sweet

Yes yes i just love the way raman replied back to simi...go raman go 😎

Just hate them all to always hate ishita...but somehow thank you too becuase we got to see such a beautiful relationship between ishra 😛 😛

I jsut looove it..thank you soo sooo much di 🤗


Hey pooh, u read and commented already...cheating kar di tumne😆😉

I thought u will read it late...I thought of sending u a happy bday tweet tonight with this as the gift...damn, PM mein exclude karna bhool gayi 😭

chalo koyi nahi...advanced bday wishes!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was a good update!I loved how he thundered at simmi.I love your take on the matters of the show.Do write more soon.. would wait for the next installment.Take care.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just read all the 3 parts... its an amazing SS and its written so well 👏...eagerly waiting for the next part😳

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