IshRa OS: Jaane chupata kya: Next half UPDATED

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shalu79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awww so cute.

Ishra in rickshaw n then public transport :D

Very nice.

Loved it

Pls update soon

Edited by shalu79 - 11 years ago

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cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: i4ishra
Woww. .so cute. .everything was explained perfectly. .liked th concept of going in a metro rather tan taxi😳 continue soon

Thnaks dear😃

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cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: shalu79
Awww so cute.
Ishra in rickshaw n then public transport :D
Very nice.
Loved it
Pls update soon

Really glad you loved it Shalu...thanks😃

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Hey Aparna

Reserving for now, will read very late in the night today..,

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Aparna, you write sooo well :) i feel your writing very familiar, and can identify with it

The details you have described in the sccene setting are very fine.

Emotions very well written

And the public transport travel... Sooo good. Earthy and romantic :)

Please do continue this

Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago

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Paru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Loved the OS Aparna. Very cute to see Raman and Ishita going out for a normal outing.

But more than that I was thrilled to read about your knowledge of Delhi and NCR. I am from there too.

PS -- Do you live there?

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cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha
Very promising first half Apoo! Metro is a great scenario! Got reminded of my fave movie Hasee toh phasee! 😃

Update soon! 😊

Thank you sooo much Isha🤗...ur words mean a lot...u are one of those u have inspired me ...

oh i really didn't think of hasee toh phasee but now i am feeling happy its quite similar to it...it had that beautiful song ishq bulava...haha...when i actually thought about this I remembered Pavitra Rishta title track video where they too travel in mumbai locals and its all very crowded and manav stands protectively around archana...but yes ishRa's situation has its own flavour...

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cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: paru_rox
Loved the OS Aparna. Very cute to see Raman and Ishita going out for a normal outing.

But more than that I was thrilled to read about your knowledge of Delhi and NCR. I am from there too.

PS -- Do you live there?

Thanx ...glad u liked it..

I can just say that I keep visiting Delhi quite often...and when I pass by the mayur vihar area...i feel like i'll get to meet our IshRa...*crazy me*...hope someday I meet them in mumbai...

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..TU...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Aparana,pls continue.

Anyway in mumbai, they have started metro.they can shoot easily.Most of the romance start at local transports.I hope CVS shd show this kind of romance with ISHRA.😊😊

good job.👏👏👏

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Hey Aparna this is such an unexpected surprise I never knew you wrote as well 😛

Cant wait to see where you are taking this, and the metro ride especially Raman looking at Ishu travelling in the women' compartment reminded me of the initial days of PR, with Sushant Ankita - they had a few scenes of the sort and they were so cute ... though of course I gave up on the show once the melodrama became too much for me 😆

Forgot in my rambling this was beautifully written 😊

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago