Conversation - OS - Page 2

Hi Lucky, brilliantly written OS.. as usual..
Love the flow of ur scene.. It seems so realistic.. How i wish they had shown the similar scene.. I feel like quoting the entire OS..
Such a descriptive scene.. Love how you made Ishita observe and understand 'something is wrong' frm his pose and a tear escapes frm RKB's eyes at d same time.. it ws a 'touching' moment.. followed by RKB's apology nd Ishu's concern.. Beautifully written.. I jst love the way u depict deep emotions effortlessly.. I do read all ur scenes bt sometimes I jst frgt to comment on it aftr reading it.. Coz of some or other pre occupation.. i apologize fr it :)
Thanks so much fr such a beautiful piece of work.. keep.them coming..

Originally posted by: manjusha7

wow.so beautiful. loved it

Thank you Manjusha😊

Originally posted by: -DreamWeaver-

Hi Lucky, brilliantly written OS.. as usual..
Love the flow of ur scene.. It seems so realistic.. How i wish they had shown the similar scene.. I feel like quoting the entire OS..
Such a descriptive scene.. Love how you made Ishita observe and understand 'something is wrong' frm his pose and a tear escapes frm RKB's eyes at d same time.. it ws a 'touching' moment.. followed by RKB's apology nd Ishu's concern.. Beautifully written.. I jst love the way u depict deep emotions effortlessly.. I do read all ur scenes bt sometimes I jst frgt to comment on it aftr reading it.. Coz of some or other pre occupation.. i apologize fr it :)
Thanks so much fr such a beautiful piece of work.. keep.them coming..

Thank You Namy...

and dont worry about commenting... you read it, you appreciated it. Thats all that matters anyway 😊

Originally posted by: lourel24

loved it.

Thank you Lourel😊

I truly appreciate reading this because like you, I too at times want Ishita and Raman to have a heartfelt conversation where they both find out what is actually bothering the other. Sometimes, a talk is way more effective is bringing people closer. I can only hope we do get such a scene on the show one day, even if it's just a small one.

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I truly appreciate reading this because like you, I too at times want Ishita and Raman to have a heartfelt conversation where they both find out what is actually bothering the other. Sometimes, a talk is way more effective is bringing people closer. I can only hope we do get such a scene on the show one day, even if it's just a small one.

Thanks Abby. The first time I felt like this was the apology scene after Pervmeet exposure. They obviously talked but all we heard was background music, just like yesterday. So I thought I will make up my own words 😊

Wow amazing
How can u write soo amazingly do u have like a personal professional rich and famous author writting it for u :P like ishita has a writer ;)
Ok coming to the update
Loved the conversation and I saw posts around the forum saying raman still loves shagun and all that but ur post though it was OS showed that its about ADI not shagun
Enmity with ashok though started with shagun but he was over his past and all that mattered was his son ADI
Loved the whole conversation just beautiful
Thanks so much for the pm
And hats off u have again just left me in awe with ur writting

Lucky this was an amazing OS!! 👏

fabulous Lucky👏👏

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Wow amazing
How can u write soo amazingly do u have like a personal professional rich and famous author writting it for u :P like ishita has a writer ;)
Ok coming to the update
Loved the conversation and I saw posts around the forum saying raman still loves shagun and all that but ur post though it was OS showed that its about ADI not shagun
Enmity with ashok though started with shagun but he was over his past and all that mattered was his son ADI
Loved the whole conversation just beautiful
Thanks so much for the pm
And hats off u have again just left me in awe with ur writting

Thank you Thank You Thank you ... you are always too kind to me 😊