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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMg..just yesterday i was thinking to mag u for an OS AND you wrote one..yesss loved it..thanks so much..pm.me the next part if u can please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww lovely good job update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pat 2 Sweet nothings:

Next morning, it's a Sunday and Mihir is invited for lunch. Mihika is also at home making lunch for her darling lover. Ishu is making a chicken dish for the first time as its Raman's Favorite. Mihika is making something which is Mihir's favorite. Toshiji is in guiding mode. We see Mr Bhalla, Romi and Mihir playing carom in Raman's room. After all the cooking is done, Ishu goes into Ruhi's room. All of them have been called for lunch. All of them really enjoy the food and all praise for Mihika. Mihir is blushing and proud of his better half. Ishitha walks in, Raman see her and wants to play a prank so that she will answer him back. Her silent mode is really bugging him.

R: Arye yar Mihir, Kya kismet paya hai. Teri wali ne too kamal kar diya. Etna accha kana banathi hai. Sahadi se pehale hi tujje kila rahi hai. Yeha meri kismet deko,Shadhi ke ethne dino ke bad be mujje ek waqt ka Roti nehi mila hai ab tak biwi ke hatho ka. Meri too sach me phuti kismet hai.( Mihir you are so lucky, your would be is such a good cook. She is cooking for you before marriage; see my fate even after so many days of my wedding I have not got to eat from my wife's hand)

Mihir: Bhai, Bhabhi ko kuch mat kaho. ( Don't tell anything about Bhabi)

R: Chuup Bato Bhabi ke chamche, Non Veg to door Veg be nehi banthe wo mere liye.( keep quiet Bhabhi's puppet, she doesn't even make Veg fo me)

I: now that was the limit, she had been doing so much for him these days and he was simply taunting her. Vashe bana deti too kathe kya. ( If I make will you eat)

R: He was so happy finally his idea worked. Arye tumhe bannne ki fursat kha, tumhe too kam karvana atta hai Kam karna nehi. Aur vase bi tumhe kanna banana kaha attha hai. Bhasan dena hi atha hai na. (Where do you have time to make food for me you know only to get work done not to do. You know only to give lectures not make food).

That was the limit, Ishu was feeling bad because he had started developing lot of love for him and genuinely wanted to do things for him and he was taunting her. She started crying and went inside Ruhi's room.

Toshiji: Raman pithe muh tera. Kya bol raha thah tuu. These days she has been cooking for you. She had made the chicken dish since you like it the most. All the praise that you have been giving about the food all goes to her, she was not telling this because she felt you will not have the food if you get to know that she had made it.

Raman was feeling very bad and was feeling guilty of taunting her. He goes to Ruhi's room and finds her crying. He moves towards her and turns her around.

R: Ishu , iam sorry. I was just pulling your leg. Nothing intentional. But why are crying Ishu. From when you have started getting affected by my words. Iam after all Ruhi's Father for you. What difference does it make for you? He was wanting her to confess first as he is already aware that she has feeling for him.

Ishu is silent not talking anything

R: What is the reason for you making my favorite dishes Ishitha. Iam after Ruhi's father. Our wedding didn't really warrant you to do so.

Ishu was getting hurt, she was rather assuming that he is trying to hurt her with his words. She is sobbing further and trying to control herself. That's when Ruhi runs in and asks Ishima hum doono ajj park jaye kya evening me. Simmi bhua ki beti ko bi leke jayenge.

Ishu quickly wipes her eyes and tells Ruhi that they will go and leaves the place. Raman is yelling Ishu you didn't answer me yet.

Its evening Ishu has taken Ruhi to the park. Simmi wanted to be with her kid so she also accompanied. Simmi , her baby and Ruhi were playing while Ishita was in her thoughts.

Yeh Ravan kumar ko dehko, he is not able to understand my feeling. I feel he is my Hubby. So I want to do things for him. Why does he not understand. Kaddos, issko pyaar ki bhasa kyu samaj me nehi athe hai yar fur surf Shagun kye liye hi iska dil dadaktha hai.( He doesn't understand language of love or his heart beats only for Shagun).She is crying.

On the other hand, Toshiji has made some Non Veg snack for the evening. Raman bluntly refuses to take it. He says mujje non veg mat do.( Don't give me non veg)

Toshiji: Tera dimaka tikan hai na, non veg ke bina tu jee nehi saktha aur bol raha hai ki nan veg na doon. Lunch pe too bada kha raha tha. (are you out of your mind, you cannot live without eating non veg. You wre enjoying it during lunch)

R: Nehi ma, mera weight baad raha hai. Doctor ne mujje veg kane ko kha hai.) My weight is increasing and doctor has asked me to stop eating non veg)

Raman is guilty that he has made Ishu go beyond her religious sentiment and make non veg for him and decides to quit non veg.

Mihir who is haring this entire thing comes to Raman and asks him silently bahi Doctor has refused or your dentist has refused?

R: is grinning at him and says do I need to slap you here in front of everyone or shall I take you in.

Mihir says ok ok Raman and he leave for a date with Mihika.

Raman is cursing his fate; this crazy lady has time for everyone. No time only for me. Everyone is having a good time with their life partners, see how boring is mine. Always with others. She doesn't feel my longing for her. Idiot of special kind.

Part 3 - Confession

All of them are leaving to Raman's Native place for a Pooja. Raman has a client meeting and says he will not join. They tell Ishu will stay back and take care of him and the house and all others will go.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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2nd part bohat acha tha n 3rd part ko daikh ke tu uf plz upload it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice. I loved the part both were getting dreams about each other n specially his lines after the dream. How did simmi find out the truth about her hubby was good . I hope something similar will be happen in yhm too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Please continue very soon. Loved it !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NICE. Who is going to confess their feelings first? I'm waiting for your next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww loved it Alooot
Update soon .. wanna read mooore
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow..part 2 ws fantastic nithya..cant wait for confession spl update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice, waiting for part 3

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