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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Superbly written!

Raman faked a story to make Ishita jealous and she was no less...the confession, or almost confession was very cute!

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#522

its a perfect ending for the beautiful journey of IshRa!

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Elita

@Elita

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#523

What a beautiful end...Ehsaas of love, friendship, togetherness and comfort in the relationship.

Enjoyed your OS immensely. Looking forward to more such stories.👏

Thanks 😊

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shalu79

@shalu79

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#524

reserved :)

Hi Lucky,

Once again very beautiful wriiten OS

Since d time u introduced Sona in ur last OS i was curious to know what will happen next..

Tere Mere Sapne Ab Ek Rang Hai. Is that color Green 😆

Both wanted to outperform in making other jealous but at same time khud jal bhoon rahe the. It was very hilarious the way they were trying to do that with their jootj-mooth ka stories.

Entire OS very beautifully written Lucky as always. u r a terrific writer.

Specially I loved this para. Ishu ke saath saath I too was crying after reading this.

"Ishita, I dont know which order to say this in, but I will try. Ishita, I will make sure that you remain happy for the rest of our lives. I will make sure I keep you and Ruhi safe and away from evil eyes. I will wholeheartedly strive towards your and our daughter's well-being from now on. I will pray that you and me face every hardship together, just like we would be together during every season of the year. I have started believing in God again because of you, and if you want, I will attend every temple with you and your Amma, and will keep any fast that you keep for us. I will be your strength Ishita, now and forever. I will be standing beside you whenever fate throws a curveball at us. Above all, I will be your best friend for the rest of our lives."

👏👏👏

U gave a very wonderful ending to this track.

Loved reading all the stories of these Ehsaas track. Sure I will miss them.

Thank You n 🤗

Edited by shalu79 - 11 years ago

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felciya

@felciya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Awesome. The end was beautifully written. Raman came with the fake cooked up love story n caught. Sonali's entry made them to lie again. The sweet friendship between Raman n Sonali was a nice revelation to Ishita. I loved your writing n enjoyed reading from part one to through out the end. Waiting for your next update.

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BombayTroll

@BombayTroll

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Jasoos

Awesome piece of writing

Wish they would show such sensitivity in show but they won't

Wish I could write like this but everyone has a style and I guess theatre of absurd is my style ha

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#527

"We accept the love we think
we deserve."
Stephen Chbosky , The Perks of
Being a Wallflower
First of all the song you have chosen di has touched the cord of my heart..lovely song!
You couldn't end it in a better way..I think you'd got that creative satisfaction when you'd ended writing this.
#IshRa got what they deserved.That emotional speech by Raman has made me emotional...I hv tears in my eyes.
All my words are so little in front of your deeds di!*bow down* YOU ARE THE PIED PIPER OF HAMILTON err of this forum, you make us enthralled.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#528

awesome...very well written..😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#529

All good things come to an end... alas that's the thought that came to me when I read your AN Lucky and the second thing - the title... god we surely have some karmic connect, if I tell you this now, it may seem I am bluffing or something but I was gonna ask you to use this song Lucky and in fact was about to PM on it yesterday but my net gave out and voila today I read this... I find this song one of the most beautifully written love ballads ever.. and the lyrics for it so go with IshRa don't they?

tere mere dil ka, tay tha ik din milana

jaise bahar aane par, tay hai phool kaa khilana

o mere jeevan saathi

I particularly find the second line of this verse apt for them - that a flower has to blossom when its spring... they were always meant to be, but they had to wait for the time for that to happen.

I cant write more on this because I am somewhat choked up because of that beautiful end Lucky hats off my friend this was indeed so, so beautiful 👏👏👏

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago