Ehsaas Track: Collection of 10 OSes - Page 55

Originally posted by: PreciousPri

Lucky !!! My God woman your writing is AWESOME!!...aghh I'm running out of words here

I have said this many a times and I say it again .. you are such a descriptive writer 👏... Seriously this forum and us members are so Lucky to have you as a writer

@bold - you make me blush. Thanks though 😊

I completely understand your reasoning for stopping the Ehsaas OS's... I will miss them 😳

@Bold - Thanks Pri.

The tit for tat jealous tracks rolling of the tongues of RKB and IRB .. was hilarious 😆

I loved this line by RKB:

"Arre Main usse shaadi karta to Shagun se kaise karta. phir Ruhi nahin hoti... to tumhaara kya hota? socho? samajh lo ki tumhaare liye hi maine apni saari khushiyaan sacrifice kar di." He had to laugh at his own absurdity.

OMG I cracked up reading this ^^ 🤣🤣... phir Ruhi nahi hoti to tumhara kya hota OMG OMG 🤣🤣.. I can imagine RKB saying this with the expressions and body language so clearly !!

But the revelation by Sona .. well written !!

and I love the understanding you have shown ... that she didn't question RKB in front of others and knew he didn't do anything without a reason .. WOW that was deep and very genuinely put across

Finally the ending... Could there been a better way to end this .. I don't think so .. I was choked up at the end ... with RKB's words ... every one of them ...I was like awww.. I will be your best friend .😭. that was beautiful Lucky .. and then IRB's I do... 2 words but they say a lot

@bold - They do

Enough of my ramblings... so if I over did it 😳

@bold - no hun, you did not. This was a very nice comment. and thanks for taking the time 😊

Will look forward to your future work 😃 Inshallah Pri

Originally posted by: happenstance

So this is what you've been doing! yay

Res😃

Edited-

Lucky i kid you not when I say I have lump in my throat after reading that. What a beautiful climax to their journey. You managed to convey all of their traits so well as always.

I really liked the way you ended it- the sucker that i am for romance totally lapped it up😳 hai if we ever got to see anything like this on screen i think i would literally cry- your piece has got me all emotional.

A quote comes to mind-

" I loved you when I saw you today and loved you always but i never saw you before..." Ernest Hemingway

Thanks Lucky for this ride- bittersweet because I hate the end of things I love but I can understand why you decided to wrap things up. Heres to the next ride 🤗

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

loved it :)

Originally posted by: soapliker

So enjoyed reading your Ehsaas OS. Ending was apt with Sona in.

Cannot wait to read more of your work

Originally posted by: lourel24

loved it

Originally posted by: serendipity.

bb in a few hours! :)

wow! Absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVED the last part Lucky! im so so so sad that the Ehsaas OSes have come to an end since EHSAAS fully hogaya... but 😔 i had gotten so so attached to this seriess! Used to look forward to them hamesha EVERYDAY! and now 😔

so i dont have much to say but the EHSAAS Series were BEAUTIFUL! <3 Really!

hehehe the jealousy was super cute and Raman HAHAHA i LOVE him! The confession was <3 It was beautiful... the quote in the end is LOVE and justifies totally... and i LOVE what you've done there with the blue and green ;) 🤗

Looking forward to the next series?! 😳

Whats it gonna be? post-ehsaas track ❤️

Originally posted by: -Raz-

This was really good..i was hoping for Ishu pov but i guess all good things come to an end! thanks for the pm and giving me such entertaining writing ..thanks a lot