Ehsaas Track: Collection of 10 OSes - Page 5

I need not tell you ...about your creativity in writing 😉

OMG luckyyy loved loved this OS yaar...n yaay THE DORI SCENE...

I love how Raman and Ishita both were having their own self-thoughts in the car about what happened in the ceremony. It's so sweet that Raman instinctively feels the need to keep Ishita warm in the rain. Love the blend of intimacy and awkwardness since they're still not used to being so close with each other!!

Lucky

amazing story u have God gifted talented that u write so well with each n every detail when i was reading i was completely lost in ur story

Amazing super awesome and I still stick to my words that u should write a book
Each time I think it can't get better u don't fail to amuse me with ur amazing writting
I loved every scene of it be it of the cops to the umbrella to the car locking up to the dori scene everything was just superb
I have a request I have more of subbuu please :D
We have to see more jealous RKB
Passionate love making willl be soo good with the anger :D
But this update was superb but soo short :P
Anwyays great workk and I would repeat myself that I am ur fan totally
Give me an autograph
Update supeeerrr sooon please
Thanks a ton for the PM :D

luvd the twist on the dori. raman gives excuse of ruhi. so like him. so sweet raman remembers all their encounters. he held her close. i could imagine everyhing. one thung how did the police officer know they were not still neighbours.great dialogues.

you guys write fantastic one liners. i feel they should be added on to the the hilarious one liners forum.

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Lucky

OMGG that title 😲 ...it gave me *ahem* ideas 🤣

I honestly love this UD and allow me to applaud you my friend because that is the subtlest innuendo-laden piece I have read in all my life ☺️😆😆 not to mention it was so IshRa-ish ... their fights, the fact that the two of them are unwilling to acknowledge their growing attraction towards each other - its ALL there 😛

I am sorry I cant be more detailed in my comment here my mind is still distracted by the auratein ke complicated kapde thing you wrote 🤣🤣 🤣 - THAT is sooo soo NOT about a dori 🤣🤣🤣

If I seem like a dirty mind to you here - its YOUR fault know that... LMAO this just gave me the wrong ideas not to mention some not so polite to even discuss images in my head 🤣🤣🤣

Aani Aani Aani... What do I say 😊

All that was an inside joke between the 2 personalities I have. Who'd have thought I would write something like this, and you'd be the one to spot it first 😆

I'll restrict my reply too. As much as I'd like to, I cannot, with a straight face, elaborate on anything you said🤣

Originally posted by: Sweety_98

I need not tell you ...about your creativity in writing 😉

All I got to say is ...I am Deadly Happy to see Mr. Jealousy Bhalla 😆

Expecting the next part soon ...Cant wait ...😃

THNX for the PM ...LOVE YOU ...🤗

Thanks for your continued interest in my stories...🤗

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

OMG luckyyy loved loved this OS yaar...n yaay THE DORI SCENE...

I'm glad you liked it Nikki 😊