Ehsaas Track: Collection of 10 OSes - Page 7

Originally posted by: happenstance

I totally loved this! I started reading this on the train and literally nearly
missed my stop! That's how engrossed I was in it.

I've said it before but you have a wonderful writing style. It's also so realistic as well.
Everything you write I can imagine being enacted on screen. I have to say that when I read the line about him holding onto her waist I was giddy with happiness 😆

Thank you 😊 Imagine me reading IF posts on the bus... i giggle like a school girl most of the times. 😆

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Arre that was for Subbu fan club members 😊

thanks for liking... will continue tomorrow.

Lol, I wasn't aware that Subbu had a fan club members 😉

Originally posted by: CharmGal

Lol, I wasn't aware that Subbu had a fan club members 😉

Be careful, maar padegi 😆 Dont say anything about him , he has silent but power supporters 😆

loved it ... pls continue

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Aani Aani Aani... What do I say 😊

All that was an inside joke between the 2 personalities I have. Who'd have thought I would write something like this, and you'd be the one to spot it first 😆

I'll restrict my reply too. As much as I'd like to, I cannot, with a straight face, elaborate on anything you said🤣

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha

It look a while for me to get it, but I did get it..LOL!

Ahem... Innuendo-laden! You bet! I will try not to be explicit but I do have some comments 😉 So Censor alert and PG 13 warnings!

What is the need of an umbrella Lucky! Do they really need it? 😉

Raman is definitely a good mechanic, though he claims he is not one from his last birth! I can see him being very tactful and she uses the time to play games...ahem! 😳

And the kapde...yes! Would have been easier if this OS was set up when she was in one piece, I mean, the blue dress! 😛

WELL, I DONT EAT NON VEG ON TUESDAYS BUT STILL I DID TODAY! 😃

galti kar di maine yeh story likhke...

I loved your unique take on the much anticipated dori scene. Baarish me romance is my favourite kind of romance. Really enjoyed reading this. You portrayed their changing feelings and inner turmoil really well. My favourite line was ---

Originally posted by: --Mia--

I loved your unique take on the much anticipated dori scene. Baarish me romance is my favourite kind of romance. Really enjoyed reading this. You portrayed their changing feelings and inner turmoil really well. My favourite line was ---

"No matter what she had told him, she trusted him implicitly. She knew he would get her home safely."

Thank you for your kind words 😊

"Darned rains" he thought. Just when he had started to have some fun.

poor raman😆😆.

wow