Ehsaas Track: Collection of 10 OSes - Page 6

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I love how Raman and Ishita both were having their own self-thoughts in the car about what happened in the ceremony. It's so sweet that Raman instinctively feels the need to keep Ishita warm in the rain. Love the blend of intimacy and awkwardness since they're still not used to being so close with each other!!

Yupp, its never easy with these two, is it? 😊

Originally posted by: dark.lig8

amazing story u have God gifted talented that u write so well with each n every detail when i was reading i was completely lost in ur story

Thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Amazing super awesome and I still stick to my words that u should write a book
Each time I think it can't get better u don't fail to amuse me with ur amazing writting
I loved every scene of it be it of the cops to the umbrella to the car locking up to the dori scene everything was just superb
I have a request I have more of subbuu please :D
We have to see more jealous RKB
Passionate love making willl be soo good with the anger :D
But this update was superb but soo short :P
Anwyays great workk and I would repeat myself that I am ur fan totally
Give me an autograph
Update supeeerrr sooon please
Thanks a ton for the PM :D

Thanks for your kind words dear... means a lot to me 😊

Originally posted by: -Garima-

LUCKKYYY! OMG this was amazing yaar! :D I could imagine ALL the scenes.. and yes I loved the song as well! :) Totally suits Ishra, a very realistic situation! :) Keep it up and thanks for the PM! :)

Thanks Garima, for liking the song too, again 😊

Originally posted by: sai14

OMG this is beautifully written. I could envision all the scenes. amazing.

DORI! OMG perfect perfect dori scene. i kept thinking of multiple scenarios and i realized Raman is not fit for any of those too romantic mushy wala dori scenes. this is awesome

Typical Raman 🤣🤣 one lines even during what's supposed to be a romantic dori scene.

Mil gayi Dori scene tumko, happy ? 😊

Originally posted by: creativeFF

luvd the twist on the dori. raman gives excuse of ruhi. so like him. so sweet raman remembers all their encounters. he held her close. i could imagine everyhing. one thung how did the police officer know they were not still neighbours.great dialogues.

you guys write fantastic one liners. i feel they should be added on to the the hilarious one liners forum.

Thanks for your comments 😊

@bold - cops only guessed that there is something more (even when they had met them the first time, that was the point I was trying to make), that they aren't 'just neighbors'. and today they saw them in the car together 😊

Originally posted by: creativeFF

wat does rapat jaaye mean

In this context, slip and fall down...

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Aani Aani Aani... What do I say 😊

All that was an inside joke between the 2 personalities I have. Who'd have thought I would write something like this, and you'd be the one to spot it first 😆

I'll restrict my reply too. As much as I'd like to, I cannot, with a straight face, elaborate on anything you said🤣

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

😆😆 didn't you say it yourself lucky we have a connection so of course I would spot it 😛 😆😆

When I wrote that, I never dreamt ki AISA connection hoga 😆

I totally loved this! I started reading this on the train and literally nearly
missed my stop! That's how engrossed I was in it.

I've said it before but you have a wonderful writing style. It's also so realistic as well.
Everything you write I can imagine being enacted on screen. I have to say that when I read the line about him holding onto her waist I was giddy with happiness 😆