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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: -Garima-
YAY LUCKY! :D You're back with a new set of OS's! :D Again.. this one was BRILLIANT! <3 I loved how you brought in the Subbu angle which made Raman all jealous haha I hope they show something like this in the show too its soo realistic! :D The ending was fab.. continue soon I wanna know what Raman will say to Ishita once they get home! ;)

Thanks dear 🤗

I am back? main gayi hi nahin re... couldn't stay away from IF😆

Subbu angle was for the Subbu fan club members 😉

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: --Mia--
Very well written. Especially loved this line -
If the food was inedible, he would have eaten quietly; Only to protect her. The fact that he made a nasty comment meant that it wasnt that bad.

Loved seeing jealous Raman.
Please write more :-)

Thanks Mia...

This line is the one I was most proud of when I finished writing... thanks for liking it😊

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: CharmGal
Please don't stop there! You have to continue because I am hooked into this story.

Although it may irrelevant but in my opinion, Raman is more handsome than Subbu so don't think he had anything to worry about. 😃

Arre that was for Subbu fan club members 😊

thanks for liking... will continue tomorrow.

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: vampire12345678
I don't really comment on things ecause I have exams but but this lovely piece of story just had to have me comment
It was amazing actually amazing will be an under statement it was plain outstanding I think I could copy paste all the praising words from the dictionary
Anyways the emotions were beautiful I always wanted jealous raman and it was sooo nice
Please please continue u write soo beautifully
I find the guy playing subbu tO good with ishita just like ishra
Please continue super soon
And pm me if possible or I will find it myself hehehe
Amazing the characters were in soo much symc. And it was like I am reading a written update on YHM
Wow I am literally in ishra land right now
Awesome work keep it up
Loved it sooo much
Hats off
*claps * for this amazing piece and thank u for sharing ur talent with us
Seriously write a book u rockk

Thank you. You are too kind 😊
Good luck with your exams dear

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha
Wow Lucky! Competition between Raman babu and Subbu as to who's the best one to hold her by the shoulder? LOL

Hope you wont have a kissing competition between them! Haha! 😃

Very well written as always!

Isha... arre i didnt write it as a shoulder holding competition, but now that you mention it... 😆😆😆

Kissing competition ke liye ek do OS rukna padega... or maybe I'll make Ruhi force them to kiss...😳

Thanks for your comments dear.

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: modernfamily91
I can imagine Raman's expressions and his muttering under his breath. That's SO RAman. Raman cribbing abt the matar paneer was a cute scene. It was the cutest scene in fact, that Ishita knew he liked it otherwise he wouldn't have said anything at all.

Thanks dear... i loved it too... i was actually proud of that line 😊

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Outstanding start Dear!Thanks for pm!Pls continue soon & pm Me!

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757315

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

When will u update next ?
Waiting super eagerly

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

😆😆

So you discovered how much I am awaiting Subu Lucky and you got him here for me awww thank you 🤗 😆😆

I love how you have incorporated this whole return of Subu with Raman' Ehsaas honestly. It seemed initially like a jealous Raman fic but towards the end it was just about Raman realizing he wants Ishita all to himself, not out of jealousy or anything similar, but because she is HIS, because thats only how he wants it to be... that's beautiful.

You gave a cliche your own twist - especially with Subu being shown as a happily married man who with the consent of his wife is making amends to be friends with his Ex, that's real deep and mature there, I am not sure if the show goes down this road if it brings Subu back but it it does... that would be one heck of a sweet surprise and a pleasant one at that. Given today' fickle Ishq wala loves ... people cannot hold a grudge forever who were once their exes especially given the fact that most of the boys and girls today get together for the cool factor - because its the in thing to do and obviously hormones and attraction play a part... there are rare couples who get together in their teens with serious intentions and feelings these days. 😳

Once again I rambled on Oops sorry 😳