OS: Zor ka Jhatka haye zorron se Laga !

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Hey everyone 😃 This is Deepika for those who don't know me. I usually write on Arshi but this is my very first attempt on Ishra, and I hope you like it 😳 Criticism is more than welcome :* <3

I might make it into two parts depending on the amount of likes/comments I get 😉 Please ignore the typos now enough of my blabbering 😛 Enjoy reading 😉:*

"Raman ap ne aise kyu..."

she looked around her surroundings where the whole bhalla family was gathered and wait a minute .. "Sarika!? Tum yahan ?" she was shocked to see her in her martial house.. What if she again said lies to her family regarding her character and maybe that's why Raman had called her here... She was hurt as again Raman judged her on the basis of a stranger lies. She was so pissed off that how could her husband who she has been living with for 3 months now doesn't even trust her this much to know that she would NEVER cheat on him. She was broken and all she wanted was to run away as she no longer had the courage to fight for herself alone; where nobody was there to support her... her mummyg accused her of seducing their son-in-law Param g and simmi, hell she thought I was after her husband to satisfy my physical needs just cos my husband cant do that with me "Cheee! Aiyoo" she said it in her mind thinking how can they think of me soo low... Knowing that again she will get bombarded with the accusations; she didn't want to stay any longer. She turned to go when;

"Ruko Ishita!" she turned back and faced Raman

"Han to Param g wo mein kaha tha? Oh han, Sarika ke bare mein aya kuch yaad mein thodi madad karu hmm?"

"Saale sahab mein kuch samjha ni, or Sarika ko mein us din se janta hu jab wo ishita g se keys lene ke liye ghar pe ayi thi... Waise achanak kyu pooch re hain ap?" He tried his best to not show how much scared he was at that very moment thinking if Raman knows everything and its consequences... On the other hand Ishita was listening carefully as to what Raman wants to say and she was still confused about how he got in contact with Sarika and what was she doing here! She so wanted to ask Sarika to speak up and tell the truth to everyone yet she remained quiet not sure how she will respond and what the others will say...

"Are kya baat kar re hai Param G aap aise kaise bhool gaye Sarika ko, ye to in fact Dubai mein bhi ap hi ke office mein ap ke sath kam karti thi nayi?" Raman was disgusted by the man infront of him and was shocked by the nerve of that man; how he still managed to act so nicely that Sarika was a mere stranger to him and nothing else. Well he will surely give him the taste of his medicine but at the moment he was just playing along the drama directed and produced by his one and only brother-in-law!!!

When Raman mentioned about Sarika being in Dubai working in his workforce, Param was now sure that Raman knows everything and he was hell scared; sweat beads were forming on his fore head and on the other hand everyone was looking confused as to what was going on... Simmi was getting cold thinking what if Ishita's accusations on her beloved husband turn right..? NOO that cant happen! Her Param g loves her the most and can never cheat on her; Thinking that she yelled "Bhai ye sab kya bakwas hai? Humme jana hai der ho rahi hai. In faltu baton ke lie hamare pas waqt nai! Chal hat or humme jane de" Param got a little relaxed thinking how much more stupid can she be? (Well good for me [smirk] bhagwan har janam mein isi ko hi meri biwi banana [laughing in his head])

"Chup kar Simmi or jaake andar khadi ho ja!" [anger evident in his voice and on his face!]

"Han to Param g ap ka kehna hai ki aap sarika ko nayi jante?" Raman asked again

"G n-nay-nayii" Param stammered...

"Ohoo chalo koi ni mein ek cheez dikhata hu shayad kuch yaad aa jaye [he smirked and looked over Ishita telling her that everything will be alright. Ishita felt much better with that little gesture by her acdu Ravan Kumar. Though at the same time she was tensed for Simmi].

"Romi zara ye Cd to player mein daal [handed Romi the Cd] and Param g please make ur self comfortable... Araam se baithiye"

Everyone was confused yet they calmly waited for the movie to start.

"Are ek minute, Ishu jake amma, Appa, Bala, Vandu, Mihika and Trisha ko bi bula lao taki wo b thoda enjoy kar le nayi?"

Ishita didn't notice that for the first time Raman addressed her as "IShu" which she was only called by the ones she loved or was by loved! Without wasting any time she called everyone from her house and in about five minutes everyone was gathered standing near the Tv.

Raman pressed the play button through his tv remote and the movie started playing. Everyone was shell shocked. They couldn't believe what they saw. How can a man whose married with a daughter stoop so low. The scene was playing when Parmeet was forcefully trying to take Sarika's clothes off and Raman didn't want anyone to see that part so he quickly turned the movie off.

"Ae sab kee hai Parmeete?" Toshi g asked in the louder pitch vloice

"Mummy g wo ye sab jhoot hai zaroor is ladki ne mujhe fasane ki koi chaal chali hai meine aisa kuch ni kia... " Parmeet tried defending himself

Simmi was in a complete shock so all these days Ishita was right about Param g... she cried so hard that all the family members went to her for giving some solace and Ishita was the first one.

"Simmi please sambhalo apne ap ko, sab theek ho jaega don't worry" IShita said while hugging her and patting on simmi's head.

"Simmo, tu galat samajh ri hai aisa kuch ni hai, mein bekasoor hu, meine kuch ni kia!"Raman and Ishita along with the whole family were disguted by the man standing with so much confidence in front of them even after knowing that the whole family knows his truth. Ishita couldn't take it anymore so she yelled

"tumhe sharam tak ni aati aisi harqat karne ke bawajoot bhi tumme himmat hai ki tum sab ko bolo ki ye sab jhoot hai! Tumhe zara b apni biwi or beti ka khayal ni aya ye sab karne se pehle and in fact mere sath b tumne... Chee [Ishita started crying as she started having the flashback where Param g called her with such bad names and accused her of something that she couldn't even do in the wildest of her dreams! Seeing Ishita cry, Raman felt someone had ripped his heart as he knows what Ishita went through and at that very moment Raman's anger went to its height! Before he could say anything Param started again with his bullshit!

"Bas kariye Ishita g! Mujhse to ap ko wo nayi mila jo ap chahti thi to kya iska matlab ap mujhe aise zaleeel karengi sab ke samne! Apka to pata hi hai ki kitna gira hua character hai as apne to apne jiju tak ko ni choda. Bala ke saath kaise chipki rehti ho kahi usi ki waja se to apko pregnancy problems ni hui na?" [Param barked and ishita was so hurt and crying so much as she didn't had the strength to say anything any more].

"Ohh Hello who the hell do you think you are to accuse my sister and husband for such cheap act. Mind your language or else I'll report you to police" [Vandu threatened Parmeet as she couldn't take the insult of her husband and beloved sister]

"Aa-ree aisa galat b kya kaha hai maine ... Badii baar inhe akela dekha hai meine and itna b bhola ni hai tumhara husband ki wo ishita jaisi hot Sali ka faida ni uthayee...[BBAAAMM, He felt a tight slap on his right cheek]

"Teri himmat kaisi hui meri biwi ke bare mein aise bolne ki!"

[Raman punched him so hard in his stomach and face that the blood starting oozing. Yet he didn't stop as he wanted to murder this sick man. Ishita was shocked and stunned to see this side of Raman. She saw that if Raman kept hitting Param g at the same pace he might end up dying there and then and she didn't want Raman to face the consequences.. So she quickly went near Raman and placed her hand on his right shoulder "Raman bas.. ye mar jaenge aise"

"To mar na hi to hai. Is jaise gande janwar ko zinda rakhke kya karna. Is ki itni himmat ki ye meri biwi ke sath badsaluki kare.. Iski mein aaj jan le lunga!" [HE said with anger filled voice and Ishita was soo touched and she cursed her self for thinking so wrong about her Ravan Kumar .. wait? Could she call him that anymore .. she stopped thinking about her thoughts right there as she needed to stop him before he ends up killing him

"Raman ap ko meri kasam ab ap inhe kuch ni kahenge let the police handle him... " [she said in a sweet tone making Raman stop at that very moment as if breaking her kasam might make her wife die in real which he never wanted to happen even in the wildest of his dreams]

After a few minutes Parmeet somewhow managed to stand up and walked towards where Simmi was weeping in pain.. he knew shes an emotional fool and loved him very much so he trued one last time

"Simmo ye sab jhoot hai maine sarika ya ishita ke sath aisa kuch b ni kia, mein tere alawa kisi or ki taraf dekhta b nai to ye sab to bohot door ki baat hai.. IShita ne zaroora sale sahab ko fasaya hoge apne jaal mein warna sale sahab hamare sath aisa kabhi ni karte!" [Raman's snger was at its peak and he was about to kill that bas***d when Ishita held his hand tightly and nodded in negative; signalling not to do anything anymore. On the other hand Iyers left Bhalla's place thinking to give them privacy and let them handle Parmeet in their way... Simmi just went inside her room and locked the door from the inside].

"Parmeete aa tu kyu kitta ke kami re gaye si saadde te simmi de pyaar wich jeda tu aidan kitta aude naal" [Toshi g said that in between her sobs]

Before anyone could say anything, Police arrived.

"We are here to arrest Parmeet in case of harassing and molesting his female work colleague, and here's the search warrant"

Hearing Police into her house Simmi came out and she was no longer crying yet she looked like a walking dead body. Param started crying in front of Simmi with a last hope she will be able to help him out of this mess but no matter what he said Simmi didn't respond to anything. The police officer hand cuffed Parmeet and was about to take him away when Raman stopped them

"Isse pehle police ise yahan se leke jaye Ishita tum ise kas ke thappad maro jisse ki ise yaad rahe ki aurato ki izaat ke sath khelna ka kya anjaam hota hai and that he wont ever dare to look at any women with his filthy eyes again".

Ishita was about to slap him hard but Simmi held her hand mid way and told her "isse hat bhi mat lagana... [she was cut in middle by Parmeet]

"Dekh Simmi ye baigairat or bachchalan auarat ne kya kia mere sath [BBBAAAMMM] he got a tight slap on his face by Simmi

"Ishita mein ni chahti thi ke tere hath is jaise admi ko choke kharab ho isliye ROKA THA lekin mein chahti hu ki tu bhi iski akal thikane laga abhi!" [IShita gave Parmeet 3 tight slaps for playing with 3 lives! After that the police took Parmeet away and everyone apologised to Ishita which Ishita easily forgave. After that everyone went inside their rooms to weep a little more in their daughter's fate for having such a husband.

Raman held Ishita's hand and took her to their bedroom and closed the door.

[bending on his knees like a kid on his punishment he held both of his ears and said]

"I'm really sorry Ishita for staying quite at the moment when you needed me the most but I was helpless as it was my sistr's husband with a daughter and I knew that if I take your side everyone would have said that I'm under my wife's magic. Trust me Ishita the moment you told the truth I Believed you without any doubt but I also knew that Param is really clever and he would have accused you more which I couldn't tolerate so I played along and waited till I get evidence against him to prove your innocence. Tumhare jate hi meine sarika ko contact karne ki koshish ki magar wo ni mani as param ne use bohot daraya tha fir meine aj subah hi use param ke phone se msg kia ki mujhse mile. Uske ghar jake sari baat pata chali and wo sms jisse wo sarika ko darata tha aj mere pas sabse bada saboot tha... Mein janta hu ishita m eine tumhe hurt kia par kya karta tumhe roka isliye ni lyunki mujhe tha ki tum amma appa ke ghar sabse safe rahogi us ghatiya admi ki nazro se door... islie meine tumhe ni roka..."

Ishita was so touched by his confession and apology. She held Raman by his shoulders and made him stand.

"It's okay Raman and Im really lucky to have such a caring husband. Tumne mere lie bohot kia hai and uske lie thankyou so much and also thanks for trusting me. Raman I can never cheat you as I take our wedding very seriously and mein sapne mein b apko kabhi chot ni pohoncha sakti aise apko and ghar walo ko cheat karke".

"I know Ishita... I know!"

Ishita couldn't stop herself anymore and for the first time she hugged Raman very tightly not to show ruhi but for herself.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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ACTUALLY I UPLOADED THIS OS YESTERDAY THOUGH NOT ON THIS YHM FORUM .. WOOPS :p BUT HOPE YOU LIKE THIS POST *_*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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to be very honest i wanted to see something like this so that simmi also comes to know what a creep her husband is...
but still i love yest's epi for our dearest RKB ... who nailed each and every scene and also each and every dialogue...
but seriously i dont usually comment on stories but your os is truly amazing... loved it to the core
you should write more you are an amazing writer...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: magati

to be very honest i wanted to see something like this so that simmi also comes to know what a creep her husband is...

but still i love yest's epi for our dearest RKB ... who nailed each and every scene and also each and every dialogue...
but seriously i dont usually comment on stories but your os is truly amazing... loved it to the core
you should write more you are an amazing writer...

Awww thankyou so much ❤️ means a lot to me :* I'll post the next update soon <3 Thanks once again :*
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It was brilliantly written. I could visualize everything... AND it would have been nice too if this had happened in the show at least Simmi would have been positive... Awesomeee OS...⭐️

P.S. Do edit your topic title and include the word "OS" so that everyone will know... Sometimes even the topic title plays a role in people viewing your post.. Would love for many to read your OS that's why...😳
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Originally posted by: ForbbidenLove

It was brilliantly written. I could visualize everything... AND it would have been nice too if this had happened in the show at least Simmi would have been positive... Awesomeee OS...⭐️


P.S. Do edit your topic title and include the word "OS" so that everyone will know... Sometimes even the topic title plays a role in people viewing your post.. Would love for many to read your OS that's why...😳

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Thankyou soo soo much for liking my work and I know ae don't know why they made Simmi such an idiot!!! >,<
and sure ill change it right away :* :* and thanks a lot for commenting and appreciating meant a lot to me ❤️
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Originally posted by: dkapi1

Thankyou soo soo much for liking my work and I know ae don't know why they made Simmi such an idiot!!! >,<

and sure ill change it right away :* :* and thanks a lot for commenting and appreciating meant a lot to me ❤️


Nice title, AND it's my pleasure...😳

I guess in the show they are trying to hit the psychological aspect for Simmi's behaviour PLUS it's quite obvious that they are sort of turing Simmi into another obstacle for ISHRA, not like there isn't enough on the show already...😳
Well, what's a Ekta show without TWISTS right...LOL 😆
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Originally posted by: ForbbidenLove


Nice title, AND it's my pleasure...😳

I guess in the show they are trying to hit the psychological aspect for Simmi's behaviour PLUS it's quite obvious that they are sort of turing Simmi into another obstacle for ISHRA, not like there isn't enough on the show already...😳
Well, what's a Ekta show without TWISTS right...LOL 😆

haha the title is funny but I guess apt for the OS... ;) and I'm soo gonna hate Simmi from now onwards! -,- she's going to be such a pain in ass!! but nevertheless In this Os I'll make her smart enough to judge what's right or wrong ;)
Ekta Kapoor is ********** xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was absolutely beautiful!!
loved this version of simi
i mean yes trust your husband but if he has been proven guilty then im afraid you have to look at whats at hand. it is understandable that everybody is innocent until proven guilty (this is a quote) true to its sense. loved ramans apology and ishu hugging him after :-)
xx
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It would be better to see Simmi be like this in yhm. Happy ending. I liked it. Very nice.

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