The difference a day makes - An IshRa OS - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are an amazing writer.

There are several important points you have addressed in your Os

1) This is my first point since I think it is also most relevant in life. What happened to Ishita was wrong, no woman and I mean no woman not even bad women deserve any of it. We have seen how much stress and burden Ishu felt when she broke down in front of her older sister. However, coming back to your Os, you have shown that not only Ishu but also Raman, her husband, was affected by this incident. He felt a failure for not being there at that particular day when his wife was molested in their own room. His fury with his family members. His crazy, possessive protection toward his wife.

2) Additionally, his desperation to have his wife back at home with him for sake of his and her sanity was adorable. We have already seen how he forgotten to wear his pants when Ishu was only away for one night yet he and she felt incomplete. I really do adore Ishra's relationship since they may agrued about many things but their expressive eyes and subtle gestures demonstrated their deep unknowable love for each other. Ishra are truly a unique and flawless couple, which is shown in the series as well in your fanfics.

3) The best thing and also important is that both Raman and Ishita are in their character mode! Nothing out of place.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Aani 🤗
This was one heck of a journey through Raman Kumar Bhalla's change of thoughts and feelings.
When he mentioned she was Ishita Raman Bhalla , she was his , that was awesome and proud moment!
Thank you Aani for this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
OMG U BACK WITH OS?yaaay...*rushin to read*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Reserved-This needs,deserves a calmer mindset. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omggg aani u DID IT AGAIN......i ws so lost in ishra land..!! LOVED LOVED hw u explaind each n evry feeling of RKB had wen thru n is still in..!! BEAUTIFUL OS dear...LOVED LOVED it.....!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
BEAUTIFUL OS LOVED IT LOVED IT 👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
I am a silent reader on this forum and I have not missed any of your OSs.After reading this OS I just could not could not control myself from praising your writing. It's a beautiful and splendid OS dear.Looking forward to next OS from your trove.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: shalu79

wow. happy to see ur OS

Hi Anni,
Another beautiful OS from u.👏 👏👏
Loved it.
As i ve already mentioned earlier in my other replies, u really create a scene in front of eyes.
n d way u describe the emotions of character hats off.
d way u described Raman's thoughts n emotions were awesome.

I loved these line the most

There was nothing sexual in their embrace, nothing platonic about it either, but it meant something to him all right.

This intimacy was more emotional than physical, more comforting than arousing.


I think our IshRa has a emotional bond. Physical relation is also a very important part of relationship but what is essential for a successful relationship is emotional bonding, understanding n trust. As promo says they ve not realized(ehsaas) it yet the journey of beautiful relationship is already begun.

I loved the reason Ishu gave for not coming back home for Simmi or Toshi. Even if they ve insulted n accused her, She will always think good abt them. Sometimes I get irritated with her too good nature (helping MIl with grocery bag incident) but that what makes her special. n why we love this character. It is exactly i think the reason she will may give as u ve mentioned. Hope they see her goodness.

Would love to see at least some aspects from OS in d show specially Raman's part
Thank u for writing n sharing with us🤗

Love,
Shalu



thank you so much Shalu 🤗

Any marriage can begin with physical attraction but it takes emotional intimacy to make it last and work forever and IshRa are currently in that phase - where a couple slowly and steadily learns one another and they are discovering these sides to each other none of them considered possible.

She had felt he was a self-absorbed, rude, arrogant man who is heartless - once having almost hit her she felt he was chauvinistic too but she sees now that there is more to the man than appears on the surface similarly he had felt all women are shallow and jaded not to mention selfish and money hungry she shatters his notions with each day. And like you mentioned this is the Ehsaas track - the word itself means to feel - they have to begin feeling for one another as much as understanding each other' feelings 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: yashasvi_88

Loved the os. It was beautiful. And the emotions were expressed so well that I could imagine the whole scene playibg infront of me. 😊


thank you Yashasvi 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: sweetshab

wow!
this was a beautiful piece of writing
ramanss POV was so apt n clear wat he has gone through ..wat a pain he was living in those gruesome hrs ...how he wanted to save his ishita fantastic

well written :-D


thank you so much dear 😊

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