A New Beginning for IshRa - Part 2

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Read the parts together and you write beautifully - my fav bit

Their first kiss and they were yet to have a proper conversation without fighting!

Not many couples can actually carry of that statement well as per me, but IshRa can so pull this off man!! LOL I wont be surprised if the show does actually have something along these lines... expressing love - confessing is another thing, to acknowledge attraction for something something entirely else, and since IshRa are already married - Raman can very well plant a hot one on his wife 😆 prior to this track he might have got a tight slap in reply promptly for that, but since you have cleverly based this post the Perv incident- things will thaw and Ishita will mostly be surprised, confused and embarrassed but definitely not slap him or obstruct his advances 😆

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
aaah woman...i asked u for cheek kiss n u gave me liplock of IshRa..omggg UMEED SE DUGNA...🥳...!!

i ws so so lovin the party moments...!!

bt when i saw shagun-ishita moments..i ws lik DAMN IT jaanu y u spoiled party for raman n me?😡😆...!!

bt later incidents proved it ws the SAAZISH FOR KISS which is ALSO their INDIRECT CONFESSION..!! so maaf kardi maine tumhe for shagun part..😆😆...

i LOVED hw Ishu let her heart out n told Raman things to an extent..!! n Raman gave her the BEST ANS via his actions...no wonder somebody said ACTIONS SPEAK LOUDER THAN WORDS... haaye i understood evrythin Raman wanted to say to Ishu via liplock..☺️😆...!!

rockin update jaanu..!! ur first SS here ws a CLEAN HIT..🤗..

plz come back with ur new story soon...!!

U see how good I am. U asked for a cheek kiss and I gave u a lip kiss.

This is really the first tine I am writing more than one shots n I am happy that u n all the others loved it.

@ bold

Yes yes if u won't understand Raman who else will?? U r the certified deewani of him these days.😆

I'll b back soon. May b sooner than u expect. 😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: oaz30
Thud have fainted in Ishra heaven, fantastic writing . Shari

Thank u😳

I guess we all are floating in IshRa dreams these days niece that the Pervmeet pol kholing is round the corner.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: jojo1986
Loved it write more 👏

Thank u.

Do read my work and give me ur feedback. It means a lot.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: archanamanav
Hey teacher ji!
What lovely episodes! I read both parts. First kiss episode. I read they will show lip kiss in this show coz it is late night show!., well this scene might come true on screen!.. Well I have no doubt about lip kiss coz Raman comes in boxers in public., and he will kiss in public too! Not in closet!..
I think he will kiss infront of shagun!
Coming to ur writing, it is very nicely written as always.. And please don't be scared to post stories!.. What r u afraid of anyway??.. There is no Raman bhalla in this forum to give u taunts!.. His taunts are exclusively for his mrs!..
Yummy lip kiss teacher ji!

Usha madam😃

Yes yes if Raman can b nude as a worm in front of Ishu in the bathroom n walk around in boxer n shirt in the colony, hugs Ishita in the rain in the middle of the road, he can do anything. N kissing his legal wife is not a problem. In fact I can see Raman pecking Ishu's cheeks in front of Shagun very soon.

I was not really scared. Just a bit nervous. But now that I had posted my story, I guess I will gave probs stopping myself. 😆

Thanks for reading n commenting.

Yes yummy lip kissing Usha ji😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: modernfamily91
It's so romantic! If YHM was a movie, I'd like it to end it this way but it's a serial and has to go on...so there might not be any kissing soon . But I hope someday they show us a kiss like this. And Shagun is a darling..I so love her.

Thank u. 😳If YHM I would want it to end with this kiss and a confession from Raman at least.

Cupid Shagun is too cool 😆

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: simples28
Oh man...awesomeee😃😃..you are brilliant👏👏..my heart fluttered imagining the ISHRA kiss😳..sooo cute..⭐️.And arrrggghh Shagun😡😡..But u know what...we should always thank her😃..because of her, ISHRA always come closer😃and dear..this is such a plausible track..I can actually imagine this happening in the show😊😊..Maybe barring the kiss everything else will happen..and in place of kiss we may get a hug😃..though i badly want a kiss😉😃..very nicely written dear👍🏼..great job😊

Thank u buddy for ur awesome comments. It means a lot.
Yes the kiss may not really happen for obvious reasons. It is a tv show.
A hug is more plausible. Let's hope for a kiss on the cheeks and forehead n this is possible.

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Jaslee Saggi

@jusschillin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

plz continue it is an awesome story plzzz

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: EkPaheli
Read the parts together and you write beautifully - my fav bit
Their first kiss and they were yet to have a proper conversation without fighting!

Not many couples can actually carry of that statement well as per me, but IshRa can so pull this off man!! LOL I wont be surprised if the show does actually have something along these lines... expressing love - confessing is another thing, to acknowledge attraction for something something entirely else, and since IshRa are already married - Raman can very well plant a hot one on his wife😆prior to this track he might have got a tight slap in reply promptly for that, but since you have cleverly based this post the Perv incident- things will thaw and Ishita will mostly be surprised, confused and embarrassed but definitely not slap him or obstruct his advances😆

Thank u for reading both parts. Usually I write only one shots but IshRa is an interesting couple and their love story is very special.
Yes I also feel that these two will most probably acknowledge having feelings for each other to themselves first. How they will confess will b interesting to see.