Separation Track: Collection of 7 OSes - Page 7

Hayyeee these are all really, really good! 😳

omggg lucky this update ws so so lovely...!! loved the realistic elements here..😉..

plz continue soon..🤗

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omggg lucky this update ws so so lovely...!! loved the realistic elements here..😉..

plz continue soon..🤗

:) bas snake ko bottle me nahi daala 😆

absolutely adorable and creative.

• Ek baar tumko super woman kya bol diya and you took it seriously... And tumko Buckingham Palace bananaa hai?
• Bichara woh soch raha hoga, ki lecture dena start karegi, ki main parking lot mein bina permit ke kyon aaaya - Loved the saap idea - was that ispired by the picture Karan Patel posted? - beats the trips and falls into his arms tired cliche scenes 😆
• Shaayad bhagwaan ne saap ke roop mein aake meri icchha poori kar di".
  

Oho Raman ke muh mein toh laddu phoot rahe the with

Originally posted by: eternalasha

absolutely adorable and creative.

First - Do Deewane Sheher Mein from Gharonda - one of my favourite songs. - Another came my mind as well. K.L Saigal ji's Ek Bangla Banne Nyaara

joint houses - brilliant!

LOLS 😆

• Ek baar tumko super woman kya bol diya and you took it seriously... And tumko Buckingham Palace bananaa hai?
• Bichara woh soch raha hoga, ki lecture dena start karegi, ki main parking lot mein bina permit ke kyon aaaya - Loved the saap idea - was that ispired by the picture Karan Patel posted? - beats the trips and falls into his arms tired cliche scenes 😆
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• Shaayad bhagwaan ne saap ke roop mein aake meri icchha poori kar di".
  

Oho Raman ke muh mein toh laddu phoot rahe the with

"Raman was waiting for her invitation. HE was secretly hoping that she would ask him to sleep in her room that night, but he was getting ahead of himself. "

Thanks for your comments

Ek bangla bane nyaara... wow... bhoole bisre geet 😊 thanks for reminding me...

I love Do Deewane too... the promise of a new life together 😊

Yes, it was inspired by that tweet... there was a post made, and that post turned into something else... it was HILARIOUS... so I thought I'd embed it... Glad you liked it 😊

superb.loved the line where raman thought "She could not only lie, but also make it his fault".awww!it was so nice n when he taunted her when their hand touched eachother was also good.

This was such a joy to read! The scenarios were so realistic and I could completely imagine this being enacted on screen. Loved the references to the songs too. Can't wait to read more, your a fab writer.

Originally posted by: lourel24

superb.loved the line where raman thought "She could not only lie, but also make it his fault".awww!it was so nice n when he taunted her when their hand touched eachother was also good.

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: happenstance

This was such a joy to read! The scenarios were so realistic and I could completely imagine this being enacted on screen. Loved the references to the songs too. Can't wait to read more, your a fab writer.

I am glad you liked the song references. Believe it or not, the songs are an integral part of my thought process when writing these stories😊

Superbly written once again! :D I loveee your song choices they go SO well with all your chapters! <3 Can't wait to read more! Update soon! :)