Pieces of a puzzle - an IshRa SS| Epilogue - PG 26

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

aani..edited my post in pg8..

U ROCK ROCK yaar...God Bless U..!! 🤗🤗

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

The last scene was so touching! You write very well. Eager for more :)

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shalu79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Once Again brilliant Ani

U r really very talented yaar the way u describe emotions.

N how u build the scene really hats off👏👏👏

Really hope n pray something like this happen on d show n our cvs read this OS

pls update soon. Will be waiting for it.

Thank u and a big 🤗 For writing this

Love,

Shalu

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Edited my post on page 1 with comments on chapter 2...

BTW - I just re-read chapter 1, and dont know how I missed this earlier. You wrote this using the present tense. Usually, I dont prefer present tense myself, because it seems a bit 'spur of the moment' and I get lost while writing. But the way you have written it, its wonderful. I looks like you have already formed an idea of what the ending is going to be, and then constructed the events in present tense... great work😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

You are simply fabulous ⭐️ ..you have captured the emotions of ishra so beautifully 😊 ..great job dear.. 👍🏼 .waiting eagerl for your next update 😊

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Sandisha Drepaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Very well written!!!! Great update!!!

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Neeharika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Lovely! Can't wait to read more 😊

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luvsagar

@luvsagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Speechless..can they show this in the show please please...How come you are not on the creative team????

I have no words for the raw emotion these two feel at the moment!

Waiting anxiously for the next chapter!

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Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

This is probably the first time a story written in present tense did not irritate me. I got lost in all the emotion that I hardly noticed.

Aani, you take the plot from the writers and you give it emotion. I have said it again and again. I cannot emphasise it enough. Reading all those unsaid things between Ishita and Raman, the feelings that were and will be, gives a satisfaction that cannot be described. Thank you so much for that! You give words to our thoughts and how!👏

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Ram-an-tic.Moi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Edited comment on pg 8

Though i will repeat myself here too, you are a fabulous writer buddy! Your understanding of the characters, their emotions and emotions in general is impeccable! It amazes me how you write as wonderfully a humorous story as you write an emotional one!
I love your work! :D

Edited by Ram-an-tic.Moi - 11 years ago

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