Pieces of a puzzle - an IshRa SS| Epilogue - PG 26

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dmgomg

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aww :) please do update soon! Hate the Permeet track right now but loving your stories :D

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komal

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Loved it cant wait to read more...

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eternalasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Loved it, especially the end of part 2 - poignant

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ThruMyEyez-Nita

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Your ability to convey emotions in words is amazing. Its an absolute pleasure reading your work. Thank you for sharing it with us😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I hope something like this actually happens during this unbearable track 😳 Loved the ending - very well written!

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EkPagliLadki

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Loved it. I just love the way you express the emotions and the characters state of mind. The scene where they exchanged the newspapers was beautifully penned down. Hope CVs read your SS and we get to see the scene in the show. The hug enough to explain the overflowing emotions. Update soon😊

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Hey Madhu 😊 read at leisure but dont forget to comment would love to hear from ya 😃

shall do. busy until may15th so after that hopefully you will see me alive and kicking 😆

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sorry for not being able to comment on the first part this time A...I have a lot going on right now..so kinda busy...sorry again

But Luckily I was able to read part 2 and As always your writing is one of my inspirations to write and well...a lot of things to be honest.

Ok coming to the update...Wow...now that was an intense one. Raman is missing Ishita so much. can you believe it? the two bulls that do nothing but lock horns every time they talk are missing each other. Well Raman was kinda obvious no? But i THINK Ishita is missing Ravan Kumar as well. I know you didn't mention anything about it here...but I have feeling she was as well.

But Raman's impatience and desperate behavior to meet Ishita. To see her, To hear her voice. It was just...so nice to read that he cares. Maybe he doesn't show it that much but he does.

Then when he went to the clinic and the scene between him and the receptionist was just...😳 I mean...I can imagine why he doesn't like her that much.

Oh Lord! The way you described iSHITA'S emotions was so touching. I wanted to cry seeing her in so much pain. But it is amazing how she reacts to Raman's touch. Even though they aren't in a perfect position...they understand each other so well. Love...it always amazes me.

And they couldn't held back...could they. And they hug while crying. It's contradictory that he is happy while crying with her...I guess this is what love feels like.

Sorry again for the late comment!

This piece is beyond words...Just perfect!

Great job A!

Continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: CavingIn
You delve into IshRa pretty well you know. Human emotions are hard to describe but you do it with grace. Kudos for that skill.
It's strange isn't it - the ferocity with which we resist someone and yet in our most vulnerable moment , a moment they may use later we somehow seek them out. So does that mean that subconsciously the mind realises the person as an ally or is it us taking a leap?
Will keep reading.

Hey Nidha thank you so much for this comment 😊

@bold - I love how you have put this, that is such an interesting perspective - is the urge to connect to someone a need that arises out of our subconscious mind which has already let that person in against all the might of our conscious mind or is it that our hearts are making us reach out and take that leap which we feel the need to do because against all odds and our efforts that person has managed to connect with us on a level that makes them important to us

In IshRa' case I feel its a little bit of both - she remembered him in her hour of need and he, he was concerned about being unable to talk to her especially after that convo which rattled him